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Review by Solaris LeRouche
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Rated: E | (5.0)
And I thought I would pass this!
Great quiz!!!!
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Review of Last Heartbeat  
Review by Solaris LeRouche
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow, you really have an increadalbe voice, I like the way you used repitition to make your point and add structure to the piece!
Graet Job!
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Review by Solaris LeRouche
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is very entertaining!
you have the spirit of Arabian Nights.
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Review of Chapter 1  
Review by Solaris LeRouche
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
You've done a awsome job at establishing your charaters! I have very high hopes reading this piece!
A chapter a day with reviews to stay! Your plot is really dragging me in , and the best part is it holds me there!
This Is DEFINITELY a NEW Fav of mine!
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Review by Solaris LeRouche
Rated: E | (5.0)
At first I thought this might be a fanfic! I'm so lucky I read on! you have such a gripping plot I couldnt stop!
Your talent is undenyable, and your charaters are well established! I was certainly impressed with this!
this is definitely one of my faves that i will be checking on often.
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Review of Day and Night  
Review by Solaris LeRouche
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I love poetery that communicates true emotion! I write it myself!
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Review of Breath  
Review by Solaris LeRouche
Rated: E | (4.5)
Color is the perfect way to express a particular feeling, colors communicate to us in a way that words cannot.
Though youre piece is short it communicates a lot of emotion!

Keep up the good work, Sola
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Review by Solaris LeRouche
Rated: E | (5.0)
I took a writing class a few years ago, It didnt go well... I could only write Free Verse and my grade steadyly fell because of it,
the teacher would tell me that my poems were too raw and I didnt revise enough, now look at me!

Though I dont understand Rhyme Scheme, (Where does it say poems HAVE to rhyme) or anything else like that.
I can read a good poem like yours and feel for the charaters and feel the same emotion.

your piece is awsome! Keep up the good work!

Sola
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Review of The Wash  
Review by Solaris LeRouche
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
To me the best thing about this is that its entertaining IN LENGTH.
when writing a long compsition the most important part to keep the reader interested! I love to sit during lunch and read a good story or poem.
and when I pick my topic and whatnot I love coming away from it feeling like I have read somthing good. It reallt re-energizes me during a long day.
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Review by Solaris LeRouche
Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
You could really use better discrptions, i would suggest putting more time into your story.
the more time you put into your story, the better it gets! plus having just a line of text and several options can make the story go by too quickly. in short, Keep Going!
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Review by Solaris LeRouche
Rated: E | (4.0)
You could really use better discrptions, i would suggest putting more time into your story.
the more time you put into your story, the better it gets! plus having just a line of text and several options can make the story go by too quickly. in short, Keep Going!
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