Crissy's (crissy) Reviews

Crissy

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Hi!

I'll be happy to tell you what I like about your item's content and what emotion it evokes in me. If I see an area or two that need attention by way of improvement, I'll make suggestions for you. I will try to word my reviews in such a way that might garner you more views for the item when seen on the public reviewing page and here, in my reviewing forum. I will always do my best to carry on the Simply Positive motto.

I'm good at...

I am particularly interested in poetry, (romantic poetry is my favorite) though I will review other item types (see below). I have a fondness for love in general, for what greater thing is there?

Favorite Genres

Romance, Spiritual, Relationship, Humor, Emotional, Mystery, Detective, Religious

Least Favorite Genres

Fantasy, Historical, Science Fiction, Horror, Western

Favorite Item Types

Poetry, Prose, Novella, Short Story

Least Favorite Item Types

Book (time is an issue)

I will not review...

I do not have the time to read a full book at present. This may change in the future. I will not review science fiction, horror or western, as those genres do not interest me and I would not be able to do them justice. I will not review anything with relation to the occult and I WILL NOT REVIEW ANYTHING HAVING TO DO WITH AGE-INAPPROPRIATE SEXUAL CONTENT.

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#4874965

Review of Oh Lord

Review by Crissy

Rated: E | (5.0)

Beautiful, Anthony.

To understand His love for us brings a type of peace that cannot be found anywhere else. I love the concept of light being the venue for eternal sight, the sight that comes from our spiritual eyes which is found in the heart.

Your work always refreshes my soul. Thank you for sharing.

Best,

Crissy

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#4873524

Review of unterduce myself

Review by Crissy

Rated: E | (3.0)

Hi Mia. 🩷

Sometimes it may feel we should live to please other people because we love how it feels to be accepted. I understand that. I used to be the same way. Until I found out what the Holy Bible says about me, that I'm loved unconditionally and there is nothing I can, our would want to, do about it. God says you are His favorite. And I am His favorite. We all are.

Jesus came to offer us the peace of God, the love that surpasses all understanding and joy unspeakable. Seeking those things in people is futile because, at best, our human nature leaves us corrupted. We have to work at bringing every thought captive unto the obedience of Christ.

Did you know you can change the way you think about yourself, your family and your friends? It's called renewing your mind. All you have to do is refocus your brain on things that are lovely, pure, peace-loving, honest and of a good rapport. Let the negative thoughts become overpowered with goodness. See a flower? Stop for a moment to enjoy it. Allow your mind to become pliable, that you are open to new things, and resist doing bad things. Allow Jesus to work in your heart.

When we are being treated unfairly by our parents, siblings or schoolmates, think on the Fact that God is there, waiting for you to ask Him for a relationship. He's waiting for you. And it will be good for you.

I'm really sorry that you feel like you can't meet their expectations. My family treated me the same. Be obedient to your parents, but never forget they love you and are trying to raise you up the best they can. All people have rules in their homes. Since they pay the bills, it's important to honor their rules. Rules are in place to protect and teach us how to live in society. One of The Ten Commandments is to honor your father and mother. Try to sit down with them and write out all their rules, and the consequences of breaking them. Therefore, there will be no ambiguity. You'll know what to expect when you fail. Perfection is not an option. Only Jesus was perfect, and No other person. Try not to compare yourself to your friends or siblings. You'll only be setting yourself up for failure and feelings of inadequacy. God created you intricately and lovingly in your mother's womb to be just the way you are. Try doing nice things for yourself, things that make you smile.

Don't forget: you are worthy of every good, right and honest thing. Add some, or all, of these things to your routine to live a better life. And love yourself in a balanced way.

Hope you have a great day. 🧚‍♀️

Crissy

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#4863906

Review of ERROR ENDED UP AS MY TERROR

Review by Crissy

Rated: 18+ | (4.0)

This poem touched me deeply, as I also cope with clinical depression. I say "cope" but what I mean is "overcome."

How do you overcome depression and desire to relapse? You renew your mind. Speak good and lovely things about yourself. Say them out loud when you're alone. Words are used to build, or to destroy. When we hear something positive, things about ourselves, we tend to believe them. Why not allow your thinking to be in line with what God says about you? That you were fearfully and wonderfully created in secret in your mother's womb. That you are above and not beneath. That you are loved. That you are creative. Read I Corinthians 13. That's how God feels about you.

I like your formatting, and your message is a clear indication that you want to change. I'll say a prayer for you.

Best,
Crissy

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#4860097

Review of The Pocket

Review by Crissy

Rated: E | (4.0)

Hi Andi.

Thank you for the review request.

I loved the image of the prompt. Your words perfectly painted an image of the last farewell. The dissociation was captured very well, like a forlorn widow or mother. That absentmindedness was what sewed together the whole piece. But the ending was a little confusing. I'm left wondering what it was. Maybe you could flesh that part a little more.

I thoroughly enjoyed reading your short. Thank you for inviting me in.

Crissy

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#4855248

Review of Where I was meant to be.

Review by Crissy

Rated: E | (5.0)

What a great story of finding yourself, your purpose, and carrying it out to be a safety net for others. I could really relate to the wallflower mention.

The Army was after me when I was young. It didn't seem the best idea at the time of graduation, though, to join. In hindsight, probably would have been the right move.

Thank you for reminding me to think through things before making important decisions.

Very well-written. Logical order and easy to follow.

God bless you. Write On!

Crissy

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#4839915

Review of The Sweetest Kiss

Review by Crissy

Rated: E | (4.5)

Hey Jay!
I thought this poem was sweet. She must be a wonderful person. To be in love like this is so special. A treasure to keep. Wonderful work.
God bless you, Jay.
Crissy

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#4839895

Review of Universal Love

Review by Crissy

Rated: E | (4.5)

Hi Anthony.
Firstly, congratulations on being featured in the newsletter.

I like the line about using light to send your love. For me, it means the sunshine is carrying love, and that's a beautiful image.
I like your poem. It reflects your beautiful heart.
I hope you are well.
Crissy

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#4832854

Review of See You in the Morning, Mom!

Review by Crissy

Rated: E | (4.5)

Hi Jay. G'morning.
I was just responding to a review on my poem about life here and the afterlife. Then I clicked on your suitcase and found this gem. "I'll see you in the morning, Mom. " has a special connotation that speaks of eternal fellowship. It feels like you are experiencing a great acceptance of her rest.
God bless you and keep you in peace.
Crissy

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#4821241

Review of Happily Ever After

Review by Crissy

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Rated: E | (4.0)

Hi. I really like your poem. I saw it on my news feed. The fervency began to build, and then the tone softened. It was a little confusing at first but it ended gently. Good read! Have a blessed day!
Crissy

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#4624065

Review of Take Up My Cross Journal

Review by Crissy

Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)

Wonderful item you guys have here! Many blessings on your endeavors and prayers for your lives and loved ones. 💛
Crissy

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#4622269

Review of The Shores Run Dry

Review by Crissy

Rated: E | (5.0)

Hi.

I love the availability you show in this piece. It tells of an openness of your heart, and a willingness to share your soul. And that's what is so beautiful about you. You have a beautiful soul, Anthony.

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#4622268

Review of Tears at Dawn.

Review by Crissy

Rated: E | (5.0)

Beautiful work, Spiritual Dawning

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I love your metaphors. The overall tone of your poem is loving and gives me a gooey feeling of open, inviting arms.
Your loved one is so lucky to have you. She must adore you greatly.

This is my fave line

I grant you special powers so you can take to flight.

To have someone to hold you when you are in pain is such a wonderful feeling. I truly miss that, because hugs are some of my favorite things.

Great piece. Thank you for sharing your work. 💛💮

Cris

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#4611278

Review of The Loud Silence

Review by Crissy

Rated: E | (5.0)

Hey Lady!

How have you been?

I love this piece! I now understand from where your inspiration for Shadows and Light came.

This is an amazing personal essay and your motivation is inspiring. How I would love to hear about your history!

Are you still here? I haven't seen you around, but I haven't been as active as I once was, either.

Your word choices are perfect and will reach a large audience. They give a sort of whimsical urgency to extracting the depth of our ancestors. I hope you are really diving into the records and allowing the ghosts of the past to settle with their stories having been told.

Do you follow @PsychToday ? On Twitter, at least, oft times they give personality traits per disorder. So, if I'm writing about my narc step-monster, looking at the typical narcissistic traits is helpful for me. It helps to see what is actually happening physiologically when he behaves like a donkey. (Ahem. 'Scuse the momentary relapse in judgment.)

Great essay. I wish you all the inspiration in the world.

Love, love.

Crissy

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#4611117

Review of Shadow Girl.

Review by Crissy

Rated: E | (4.0)

Hello.

This is an interesting piece, and I'm thinking,

'How sad to be the Shadow Girl.'

While I understand your perspective, could you look into the heart of this person? I mean, if they exist for real? Or perhaps she lives in your heart, and even then, can't she see a little sunshine?

Shadows, after all, are created by light.

Without contrast, what possibility and hope exist? And in our work, showing light with darkness gives our readers a sense of hope. We cannot live our lives in utter despair without hope. No Jesus? Know Jesus!!

And upon further examination I see a little light in this line:

A golden sun that never sets.

So, you may be holding some kind of reverence for God's power to work within, either her or yourself.

Your diction is good. Word placement is appropriate. Descriptors are very well used.

Thank you for sharing. Write On!

Crissy

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#4608036

Review of Jersey

Review by Crissy

Rated: E | (5.0)

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With so very few words, words that amplify want and hope and longing to help, you captured this moment of bravery and resolve from the heart. It shows the core essence of you, as a person, of your friendship and your tenacity (or that of your character). It breathed "I am here for you..."
Well done, Lou. I miss you. Congratulations on being featured in the newsletter.
🎈🖌🎭
Cris

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#4604422

Review of History in hyroglyphs

Review by Crissy

Rated: E | (5.0)

Hi.
I found your piece in the poetry newsletter today. Congratulations on being featured!

I love your poem. It really speaks to the growth we, as Christians, experience from glory to glory. That you are using your temple as an expression of that growth testifies of your love for, and faith in, Him. What a poignant statement. And the fact that God has our names "written" (tattooed) on His hands tells me stuffy Christians who are against body art don't understand the basics of why Jesus came. Accept Him, and love your neighbor as yourself. Right?

Great expression of faith!

Many blessings to you, and Happy Easter! 🐰

CrisMiss

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#4588358

Review of In God's Great Hands

Review by Crissy

Rated: E | (5.0)

Hi!

I love this wonderful tribute to our loving God! It brings me a sense of peace and comfort in the knowledge I can rest in the everlasting arms of my heavenly Father.

Your rhyme scheme is excellent. I do read the poetry newsletter but don't usually follow forms. My knowledge of them is weak, but I see you used one here. I like the way it flows. What style/form is it?

Your flair of faith is bright! Never put it under a lampshade!

May He bless you with the best of everything!

Crissy

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#4587530

Review of The Mirror

Review by Crissy

Rated: E | (5.0)

This made me cry.

And I hope I'm interpreting it correctly. Because the other two ways I interpreted it made me cry, too.

Your storytelling, albeit a poem, is magnificent.

With each and every word, line by line, the intensity grows more feverish. In my head I can hear dramatic music to accompany this piece. And I understand this is your heart and soul which nagged at you until, through your quill, you spilled your blood onto the paper. That is what great writers do, and actually it's a Hemingway quote. "Writing is simple. All you have to do is sit down at a typewriter and bleed." -E.H.

I commend you for this very well-written and emotional piece.

Merry Christmas!

Crissy

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#4585982

Review of mistrial

Review by Crissy

Rated: E | (5.0)

Hi heb..
Interesting...and in all your writing, one might find a character that is a misfit among misfits, an undermined soul only searching for validity and willing only to compromise in order that they may be viewed from That Place. You know the Place I'm talking about, heb? It's a Place that you mentioned herein. It's Authenticity. I mean, if we're not careful, our true and authentic selves may spill out from the very core of us and onto the paper. Oh. You say, "But they are not like that really." But I say, "Absolutely they are." The mouth screams. The soul speaks. But the spirit...the spirit whispers, heb. (See the story of David hiding in a cave from King Saul, who was trying to kill him. David was anointed to be Saul's successor to the throne, but in the meantime David played beautiful music on the harp for Saul, and since David had a heart for God he didn't want to attack Saul. God sent three things to speak to David, but when he heard Him, it was in the whisper of the wind.) And I believe what we read, what happens when we see on paper or screen, is the spirit whispering of goodness, mercy, grace, and peace. It may be only that those things are what we are declaring over our lives as we write our hopes and dreams, fascinations and expectations, but declaring goodness over one's life has the propensity to affect it in a most profound way.

Let us speak with authority the good things He hath prepared for us.

"Out of the mouth the heart speaks." -Proverbs

"As a man thinketh, so is he." -Proverbs

"You can't keep a good man down." -Some song by some artist.

"You can gather whatever evidence you feel is necessary, but if the narrative does not fit the character, if you have the M and the O but not the other M, what good is your character assasination?" -Me

No. You must have all three to make a case and without motive there is no case.

Thoroughly enjoyed. Thank you for sharing.

Best,
Cris~

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#4585738

Review of When You Stood Before Me

Review by Crissy

Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)

This is beautiful. Saw it in the newsletter this morning and the title and description drew me in.
You've used wonderful juxtapositions in this piece.

God bless you. Have a truly wonderful day.

Crissy

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#4572486

Review of A Folder For Love Related Works.

Review by Crissy

Rated: E | (5.0)

This folder is fantastic from what I've read thus far, Anthony. I love the depth into which you delve to explore levels of heartfelt and emotional longings, revelations, and satisfaction.

Thank you for consistent eloquence.

~Crissy

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#4572484

Review of Rain Dance

Review by Crissy

Rated: E | (5.0)

Hi!

I found this item as I searched your port for a piece to read/review. The title drew me in. I love to dance in the rain.

This poem is filled with delightful imagery. I especially like the concept you conveyed in your last verse, as its terminology pulls the positive and negative emotions of a situation into the light of day, and gives witness to the depth of you that you offer/give to this person.

I like the form ... what is it? Rhombus, maybe? It's used consistently throughout.

The tone is laden with expectant love which, when read by a hopeless romantic, lends the reader toward the idealistic conclusion. If this is a true-to-you experience, I really hope you made out like a light shined on you from heaven.

Thank you for sharing this beautiful side of yourself. I truly enjoyed reading your work.

Best always,

~Crissy

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#4564413

Review of Iridescent Blue

Review by Crissy

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Rated: E | (5.0)

Wow, Rick! This is wonderful.

Beautifully written prose that captured my attention and my heart.

It was lovely to read your reflections; this woman seems to be magical. When we meet people of this caliber of mystery and intrigue it's a rare delight and not one with which I'm unfamiliar.

Your vocabulary is perfect for the telling of the encounters, your feelings, and the longing which comes after having been spellbound.

A favorite line: Twenty years have come and gone, leaving me with and education only time can afford. <--- Very uniquely written!

I really love your vague description of this person. It adds to the mystery and power this woman holds within.

I truly enjoyed reading your work. You have made a lasting impression. Thank you for sharing your story with me.

Have a Blessed day!

Cris~

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#4561458

Review of Wealth Untold

Review by Crissy

Rated: E | (3.5)

"[He'll] turn bones into armies." -EW
Nice work. Don't give up your faith, even in those "wicked" rich people.

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#4555025

Review of Missing You! - A message with Love

Review by Crissy

Rated: E | (5.0)

This piece reminds me of someone I am very fond of, wishing those words could come from he to me. Unfortunately, it's a distant theory, and behind it is no reality.

Such a sweetly written poem. And pink font makes it even sweeter.
Your words are well-chosen and perfectly fitting for the topic.

Well done! Keep creating masterpieces!

CrisMiss