Thomas Heath's (croyanmariel33) Reviews

Thomas Heath

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#4838797

Review of 4. When Darkness Unhinges You

Review by Thomas Heath

Rated: ASR | (4.0)

I enjoy the irony, in which the fixer is presented as the central mystery element, yet the twist that the protagonist/narrator is a robot is a good sense of irony.

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#4837076

Review of Hibernation

Review by Thomas Heath

Rated: E | (4.0)

The poem is moving. It's content-value, as in an example where the content does the talking, as perhaps ironic that is to say.

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Review of Revenge of the Princess

Review by Thomas Heath

Rated: 13+ | (4.0)

From what I read, the sensibility I have is that accentuation of description, though a helpful ally here, is not actually all that needed. You do a good job of describing and indulging in the situation's emotion. I enjoyed the text. Thank you.