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Review by Browngirl
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Came upon this randomly and I have to say your writing skills are very impressive. Poetry, I feel like can be difficult to understand at times, but this really touched me.
No errors that I could see.
Good job :)
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Review of My Abyss  
Review by Browngirl
Rated: E | (5.0)
By reading this I see that you have great writing talent. This is very well written. I especially liked your choice of vocabulary. No grammatical error that I could find except for in line two ( glisten - glistening).
Good job!
And I wish to read more of your work :)


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Review by Browngirl
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
A random read -
No grammatical mistakes that I could find; sentence structures, punctuation, tense and tone, spellings, all are correct as far as I can see. A really good read, very fresh and funny story.
Very good :)
Good luck!
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Review by Browngirl
Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
Honestly, I don't know whether I should sympathize or not because it's not going to make your suffering any less, but I am very sorry that you had to go through all that. I can only say that may God give you more strength. Stay strong and stay fighting. It will get better (amen).


As for the review of your writing, I did find a lot of grammatical mistakes such as incorrect punctuation, sentence structures, spellings etc. But I am sure you needed to type this all out and grammar was of course not your main focus. Anyways good luck! :)


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Review of Firefly  
Review by Browngirl
Rated: E | (5.0)
Really nicely written. No grammar mistakes besides the spelling of 'lightening' and a few missing commas. Good job :)
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