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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)

Hi again Ebonii, I came across this work while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of the story: "Sindy's Summer Adventure (continued)"  by Ebonii

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:Well formatted story still yet a bit entertaining.

Unsure where the story is heading.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of a soul lost in time working hard too find the way home.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: I don't see too many problems with the spelling mechanics or grammar of this work.

Ebonii, thank you for sharing your story. Write On!

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Review of I'm Free.  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)


Hi Wandering Thoughts, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "I'm Free."  by Wandering Thoughts

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter: A well worded very entertaining poem.

A nice flow to this unique original work.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image 0f young people experimenting with relationships while searching for their soulmate.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: I find no problems at all with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this entertaining work.

Wandering Thoughts, thank you for sharing your story. Write On!

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Review of For giveness  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)


Hi sebs, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "For giveness"  by Sebs

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:Awesome! A powerful philosophical flow to this lovely poem.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of a soul on the river of time watching and learning yet never mastering the art forgiving.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems at all with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this delightful work.

Thank you for sharing your story. Write On!

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi fyn, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "From the Outside Looking In"  by Fyn

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter: What an awesome title followed by this awesome poem. Nicely worded adding to the awesome tune and flow of this work.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of extra terrestrials looking at us through a mirrored portal they can only see through however they can't pass through it.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: A great job with the grammar spelling and mechanics of this entertaining poem.

Fyn, thank you for sharing your story.
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi sebs, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "To see her + a List"  by Sebs

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A nicely worded poetic romance poem. On how one should see a lover, an interesting thought. I like the poetic list of lines.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of two young people starting a relationship thinking how it will be timeless. Then finding that time takes a different direction.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:No problems at all that I can find with the spelling grammar or mechanics of this entertaining poem.

Sebs, thank you for sharing your story.
Write On!

Joseph
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Review of Election Day 2016  
Review by Joseph
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi WakeUpAndLive~survivor, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Election Day 2016"  by WakeUpAndLive~survivor

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:Politics is no doubt a touchy touchy subject. Everyone has their opinion and everyone is right do not argue with them it does no good. These days one has to ask their self if it does any good. Because most feel like all the decisions have already been made by the powers to be.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of young people planning to vote and change the world, then slowly through the timeline of life realizing nothing's changed.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems that I can find with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this delightful work.

WakeUpAndLive~survivor, thank you for sharing your story.
Write On!

Joseph
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Review of Winter Comfort  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi jaya, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Winter Comfort"  by Jaya

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A beautiful seasonal poem emphasizing the poetic form of winter.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of two soulmates finding comfort in a mist where time does not exist.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: An excellent job on the spelling grammar and mechanics no problems that I can find.

Jaya, thank you for sharing your story.
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Review of we are broken  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hi Rhyssa, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "we are broken"  by Rhyssa

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A deep enchantment. This short poem is so deep it can send the reader into a different realm.

Artistic Voice and Imagery:I see a beautiful sunset in the mountains bleeding through the cracks on the remains of a historic landmark where a couple of soulmates hide.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: A great job with the spelling grammar and mechanics of this enchanting poem.

Rhyssa, thank you for sharing your work.
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi again KS23, I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"The best part of my day"  by KS23

Clarity:A great title.

Writing style:Biographical cultural article.

Are all 3 genres listed?2 are listed. By listing 3 generes your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in those genres.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?A nice structure that is easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker?The dialog is specific to it's speaker.

My favorite line's: --- That's my name for the bright red male cardinal who commands the road from a branch beside a streetlight. He calls a greeting and I return a cheery "Good morning, Sir!"---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:A well written tale full of great descriptions that help the reader to see what you are describing.

A good job of highlighting the prompt words.

This is a entertaining nature story.

KS23,thank you for sharing this delightful tale, it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: None.

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi HuntersMoon, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of the poem: "The Crystal Tree "  by HuntersMoon

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A well worded Rondeau style poem. "Its more than just a rainy day." What a great writing about the Crystal tree. Short yet memorable is this unique poem.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see children running for the cover of an old Oak tree as a hard rain approaches fast.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems that I can see with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this entertaining poem.

HuntersMoon, thank you for sharing this delightful poem.
Write On!

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi ElaraFox101, I came across this story while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of:"Core of A Dying Star"  by ElaraFox101

Clarity:A strong sounding title.

Writing style: Fantasy childrens drama.

Are all 3 genres listed?Yes, this makes your work available to more readers and potential readers.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader? A nice grammar format however the structure could be made easier for the reader. Consider larger font with line spacing and a blank line between paragraphs. This will make it easier for those of us with weak eye's.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker?Yes, the dialog is specific to it's speaker.

My favorite line:---As skeptical as she was, what harm could a third chance do? “Listen, I’ll give you one last chance. And when... I mean... if you fail, well, goodbye-“---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: A well written magical adventure tale.
Brenda and Hadeon are strong characters with unique characteristic's. Great descriptions that will carry the reader right into the tale beside Brenda.

ElaraFox101, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:Consider breaking down into several short chapters. Today's reader seems to like that better as they have a short attention span.

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Review of Meet Again  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Laharee Banerjee, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of the poem: "Meet Again"  by Laharee Banerjee

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A strongly written emotional poem dealing with death. Everyone has in their own way of
dealing with the death. A touchy subject with no right or wrong way.
A powerful poem with emotions that grab the reader's attention.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of the Angel of death with his back turned from those searching for answers.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: I can see no problems with the spelling grammar or mechanics of this strong poem.

Laharee Banerjee, thank you for sharing your story.
Write On!

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Review of Twenty-Four Years  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi kaleb99, I came across this article while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the article: "Twenty-Four Years"  by kaleb99

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter: A very descriptive article. It sounds like you got it pretty much figured out.

Large incomes results in enormous debts almost always. Our society programs us that way.

Enjoy the ride, it's not about the destination it's all about the journey there. Take time to smell the rose's, savor the smell.



Artistic Voice and Imagery: This well described well worded story shows a glance of your artistic voice. Explore that, it could be your calling.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: Consider structuring your work with short paragraphs followed with a blank line. Line spacing with larger font helps those with week eyes. This makes your appear professional while being more inviting to browsers or potential readers.

kaleb99, thank you for sharing your story. Write On!

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Karina Ariyanto, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of the poem: "Dear Future Husband: Volume 1"  by Karina Ariyanto

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter: A well written delightful letter to a lucky lucky man. I feel that you will be meeting for dinner very soon.

A great idea for this strong work.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see a mystical fast-paced world where two soul mates make their way toward each other with many obstacles hindering their way.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: A little line spacing and maybe a few emojis probably wouldn't hurt.

Karina Ariyanto, thank you for sharing your story.
Write On!

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Review of Lady Bug  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Scott Spense, I came across this story while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of:"Lady Bug"  by Scott Spense

Clarity:A nice title that describes this tale well.

Writing style:Biographical children's drama

Are all 3 genres listed?Yes.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader? A very nicely structured story that is easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker? The dialog is specific to its speaker.


My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: A well written, well structured delightful story. Great descriptions that help the reader into the story. It is great that you was able to share your experience with your daughter.

Scott Spense, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: None.

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Review of Eclipse: My Views  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: ASR | N/A (Review only item.)
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Hi Princess Megan Rose 22 Years, I came across this article while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of the article: "Eclipse: My Views"  by Princess Megan Rose 22 Years

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A well written review of the movie Eclipse. This article gives a great description of the movie. Your enthusiasm can be felt through the words in this article, that makes it more attentive for the reader.

Great detailed descriptions that holds the readers interest.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see a crowded arena with giant wolves going to battle with a family of vampires.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: The spelling grammar and mechanics all look superb .

Princess Megan Rose 22 Years, thank you for sharing your story.
Write On!

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hi Rhyssa, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of the poem: "what do you want to play?"  by Rhyssa

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter: What do you want to play? A delightful free verse poem. The games people play.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of two young people with great imaginations playing together in their dreams.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: I see no problems at all with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this entertaining poem.

Rhyssa, Thank you for sharing your poem.
Write On!

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hi Jeff, I came across this story while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of:"The Monocle of Mortality"  by Jeff

Clarity:A good title that describes the content of this tale well.

Writing style:Fantasy drama.

Are all 3 genres listed?Yes, this makes your work available to more readers.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?A well structured story that is easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker?The dialog is specific to it's speaker.

My favorite line:---t was a violent end, not that I was really expecting much else. The life of a relic hunter is brutal and often short, although I was surprised at just how short it was apparently going to be, as I didn’t appear much older than I was at the moment. ---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:A great tale about hunting magical relics. A humorous adventure with interesting characters described so well that the reader is swept into the story.

Written for the Writers Cramp meaning you put this entertaining tale together in twenty four hours, a great accomplishment.

Jeff, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: None

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Review of Reverie  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi again HuntersMoon, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of the poem: "Reverie"  by HuntersMoon

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A great writing for this mythological poem. A timeless poem that reads as if it came from an ancient Greek philosopher.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see an ancient Greek philosopher riding Pegasus backwards in time toward ancient Mount Olympus.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems that I can find with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this masterpiece.

Ken HuntersMoon, thank you for sharing your wonderful poem.
Write On!

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hi Kare Enga in Montana, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of the poem: "Étude on respect for the cold"  by Kare Enga in Montana

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A well worded nature poem with a natural happy flow.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see a traveler on the pathway of time traveling through the seasons.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: I see no problem at all with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this delightful poem.

Kare Enga in Montana, thank you for sharing your story.
Write On!

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Macklin Freemark, I came across this story while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of:"Forevermore and Nevermore"  by Macklin Freemark

Clarity: A good title for this tale.

Writing style:Childrens fantasy drama.

Are all 3 genres listed?No only 2, by listing the max of three genres your work will be available to more readers and more potential readers.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?Nice structure that is easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker?The dialog does seem to be specific to its speaker.

My favorite line:---She knew that life was a balance of holding on to the good and letting go of the bad.---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:A delightful childrens story. Well written and described making it easy for the reader to get into the story.

Macklin Freemark, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: None.

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Ryan Evanick, I came across this story while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of:"From The Tree Part 2: Trust Exercise"  by Ryan Evanick

Clarity:Seems like a good title, although I don't quite get it due to not having read part one.

Writing style:Animal adventure drama.

Are all 3 genres listed?Yes, this makes your work available to more readers and potential readers.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader? The structure and format is somewhat easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker? The dialog seems to be specific to it's speaker.


My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: A well written animal tale. Great descriptions that help the reader to picture the story.

Strong characters that are described well.
A good narrative and story-line.

Ryan Evanick, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: With the fast paced digital world I've been told that childrens stories are preferred to be short. This does make sense to me.

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Review of Chapter 20  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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Hi Ang1974, I came across this story while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of:"Chapter 20"  by Ang1974

Clarity: A title that describes the content of this story would be preferred.

Writing style: Personal romance drama.

Are all 3 genres listed?Yes, this make your work available to more readers and would be readers.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader? The structure is a bit crowded. Consider line spacing with a blank line between paragraphs. This should make the work more appealing to would be readers.



My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: A well written first draft that with a bit of polishing should make an even more entertaining tale.

Ang1974, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.


WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Hi Troyizen, I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"Chapter 035: Stairway to Heaven"  by Troyizen

Clarity:Seems like a good title for this interesting work.

Writing style:Adult sci-fi drama.

Are all 3 genres listed?Yes, this makes your work available to more readers and/or potential readers.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader? A nice structure that is easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker? The dialog does seem to be specific to its speaker.


My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: A well written story from a futuristic world.
Nicely laid out in a good order that keeps the readers attention. Great descriptions that help the reader to picture the story.

Troyizen, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: None

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Joseph
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Hi THANKFUL SONALI Now What? I came across this poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of the poem: "Caring for a sick pet"  by THANKFUL SONALI Now What?

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:Well written poem with emphasis on caring for sick pets.
A great example of acrostic poetry.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of a cat lover surrounded by cats.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems at all that I see with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this lovely poem.

THANKFUL SONALI Now What? Thank you for sharing your poem.
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