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Hi OdetaRose I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"The Man in Apartment 43 by Odeta Rose" Open in new Window. by OdetaRose

Clarity:A good title for this tale although I don't recall that it was a man ever described in apt.43.

Writing style:Fantasy folktale drama.

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Are all 3 genres listed?Only one is given, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?The structure is fairly easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker?The dialog does seem appropriate for its speaker.
My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: A good opening line that introduces the storyline well. Good descriptions that lead the reader deeper into this tale.

A mysterious yet entertaining tale very well told.

OdetaRose thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:Consider more blank lines between text at the beginning to make it more appealing for the reader.

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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi again dogpack saving 4premium+ I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "AUTUMN FALLS/word count:54" Open in new Window. by dogpack saving 4premium+

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter: Autumn is coming and this short poem is a great reminder of the sensations that come with the change of season's that we so easily forget from one season to the other.

'God’s coloring book
Autumn Falls
nature is His art work.'

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems that I can find with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this delightful poem.

dogpack saving 4premium+ thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of The Zeroth World  Open in new Window.
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Hi Tani lives I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"The Zeroth World" Open in new Window. byTani lives

Clarity:A great title for this philosophical mystery.

Writing style:Philosophical mystery drama.

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Are all 3 genres listed?*Smile* Yes by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?*Smile*A nice structure that does make it easy on the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker?*Smile*

My favorite line:--- I live. I have lived like this before — once, long ago, so long ago that memory kept no trace of it — and now I have returned.---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: The Zeroth World touches on memories and emotions that are buried in the deepest parts of our subconscious minds. That very part between real and dream that hides our previous lives from our current memories in our mind.

A powerful story that just begins to scratch the surface of the deepest part of our minds that is forbidden for us to search or remember. The human mind has deep confused memories that only a few dare to try opening up.

Tani lives thank you for sharing this work it has caused this reader's mind to dive deep into the unknown.

Suggestions: Write on!

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Review of Still Standing  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Theactual Treasure I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Still Standing " Open in new Window. by Theactual Treasure

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter: 'I'm not perfect but I'm here.' A delightful and most entertaining free verse style poem. I think that most anyone that reads 'Still Standing' will certainly be able to relate to it.
This deep philosophical work carries a natural realistic flow.


Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:No problems that I can see with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this delightful work of art.

Theactual Treasure thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Hi Carol St.Ann I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Surprise Sleigh Ride" Open in new Window. by Carol St.Ann

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A charming Christmas poem in the form of shape poetry. This well written poem has a charming flow.
I know from experience that when writing shape poetry then trying to format it on the computer, can be more difficult than one would think. It appears you have done a great job.


Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: I see no problems with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this entertaining Christmas poem.

Carol St.Ann thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi again LoneWolf I came across this story while random reviewing.
I am no literary professor however I like to read and feel like my opinions relate with today's average reader.
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My impressions of:"Skip Trace and a Dead Man" Open in new Window. by LoneWolf

Clarity:A good title for this mystery tale.

Writing style:Mystery adventure drama.

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Are all 3 genres listed?Only one is given, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?Yes.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker?Indeed the dialog is appropriate for its speaker.

My favorite line:--- Leo worked as a lock smith for a year before coming to the bank. That gave him the expertise he was now using. He was through the door in seconds and had the bridge set up on the alarm system in less than 30 seconds. Almost a personal record.---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: A good opening line that draws the reader on into the storyline. A well written and well described detective style mystery told in an entertaining way.

I like the ending, Leo goes back to work.

LoneWolf thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:Writing ML '{{/b}' shows below title.
I like the bold font however consider a few more blank lines between the longer paragraphs to make the story appear more appealing.

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi WindSpirit3 I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "when I contemplate med " Open in new Window. by WindSpirit3

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A great description and recommendation of a meditation technique.
Meditation is a practice that involves training your mind to focus and redirect your thoughts. A proven technique to help discipline the mind. I guess that is why I have never been able to master meditation.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of someone who has found a quiet place to relax and calm they're breathing to release their mind to a more peaceful reality.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems that I can find with the grammar spelling all mechanics of this informational guide.

WindSpirit3 thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hi J.M. Grey I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"To Truely Be Peaceful" Open in new Window. by J.M. Grey

Clarity:A good title for this tale.

Writing style:Philosophical opinion article.

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Are all 3 genres listed?Yes *Smile* by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?Yes *Smile* Nicely structured making it easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker? N/A

My favorite line:---Violence is part of nature. To deny that is folly itself.---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:An intriguing opening line that does engage the reader to want to know more. Three skills one must strive to master to achieve inner peace.

J.M. Grey thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:Write on!

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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Quatae Turnage I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "The Way The Wind Moves" Open in new Window. by Quatae Turnage

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A delightful six line free verse form poem focusing on the different ways that the wind moves.
'The wind moves like a savage.'

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of the ocean of time with the souls being blown in their direction by the wind of time.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems in the spelling grammar or mechanics that I could find.

Quatae Turnage thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of existence  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi a.lia I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "existence" Open in new Window. by a.lia

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A strong and deep short eight line poem in the form of shape poetry. A lot of focus on the word joy.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of the ancient world where humans are only beginning to learn to write. An ancient philosopher questions the existence of all people.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems that I could find with the spelling grammar or mechanics of this deep work.

a.lia thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of Who Did It?  Open in new Window.
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Hi again LoneWolf I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"Who Did It?" Open in new Window. byLoneWolf

Clarity:A good title that makes the reader waqnt to know more.

Writing style:fantasy short drama.

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Are all 3 genres listed?None is listed by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?Yes.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker?Yes.

My favorite line:---Jack woke when an acorn fell with the force of a high velocity round and smacked him in the middle of the forehead.---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:A well written entertaining short story. Well done short and to the point with a few words the way the modern reader likes things.

LoneWolf thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:*Smile*

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Joseph
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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Hi Jatog the Green I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Internal Combustion" Open in new Window. by Jatog the Green

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A twenty-four line free verse style poem with a random rhyming pattern that adds to the overall poetic flow.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of one enjoying a good night's sleep when it's suddenly interrupted by the ringing of the telephone. Then after answering becomes very annoyed because a telemarketer has awoken them up and interrupted their dream state.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems that I can find with the spelling grammar or mechanics of this enchanting work.

Jatog the Green thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi again Wandering Thoughts I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Keep Your Cool No Matter What" Open in new Window. by Wandering Thoughts

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A lyrics style work with a emotional tone that flows through out this rhythmic work. A story of lost love and the events of one that took the wrong path in the direction of money and fame instead of simple love.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: Looking over the currents of time I see the image of two souls who make a brief connection however the one turns in the direction of fame and glory leaving the other heartbroken as they grow old.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: I see no problems with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this delightful ballad.

Wandering Thoughts thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of No Turning Back  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi drifter I came across this story while random reviewing.
I am no literary professor however I like to read and feel like my opinions relate with today's average reader.
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My impressions of:"No Turning Back" Open in new Window. by drifter

Clarity: A great title for this inspirational story.

Writing style: Personal spiritual drama.

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Are all 3 genres listed?Yes*Smile* by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?*Smile* Nicely structured making it easy for the reader

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker? *Smile*Yes.


My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: A well written and truly inspirational story. God works in mysterious ways and the power of healing is very strong. A wonderful spiritual testament.

drifter thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

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Joseph
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi again Naomi I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"My Brother's Wall Frame" Open in new Window. by Naomi


My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:Your youngest brother sounds like quite a character as well as a very accomplished man. This very descriptive article gives the reader a good insight to his identity. A university director is no doubt quite an accomplishment. I really like what is written on his wall frame.
'Do not let it rest, until your good is better, and your better is best ..... yes!' A great saying to wake up to every morning.

Naomi thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi again JCosmos I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Summer of our Discontent" Open in new Window. by JCosmos

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter: A deep and descriptive poem describing the heat wave of the summer of 2024.
Mother Nature indeed it's an unpredictable force. This poem well describes the heat wave experienced a year ago. I can feel the heat from this well composed poem.

No doubt that this could be a cause from the greenhouse affect. The powers that be could no doubt do more to help this situation, however it does not seem that it would be profitable for them.


Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems that I can find with the spelling grammar on mechanics of this powerful poem.

JCosmos thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of Bored?  Open in new Window.
Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Hi again Jacky I came across this work while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the story: "Bored?" Open in new Window. by Jacky

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:I think most readers will relate with this delightful story as I have. A great story. Short and entertaining with a brutally realistic tone that adds to the honest flow. I love the reference about the cat and mouse, I thought we were the only ones that have that problem from time to time.

Great memories. Life is good. *Smile*


Jacky thank you for sharing your work.
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
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Hi K I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"2: Home is where the Hearth is" Open in new Window. by K

Clarity:Intriguing title.

Writing style:Fantasy adventure drama.

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Are all 3 genres listed?Only two are listed, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?A fair structure. The structure appears crowded consider breaking down larger paragraphs into smaller ones with a larger font and more blank spaces between paragraphs. This will make it easier on the reader and more appealing to a browser or potential reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker?The dialog does seem to be appropriate for its speaker.

My favorite line:--- The sense of it all sent a thunder of excitement through him and he felt like a kid who had finally made it to Disneyland.---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: A well told fantasy that slowly carries the reader into this tale.

A slow opening, the second paragraph may be stronger to open with to better grab the readers attention from the start.
Well detailed descriptions describing the surroundings, maybe to many as they distract the reader away from the main plot.

K thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:Consider a good edit with a larger font and more blank lines between shorter paragraphs. Today's modern reader in this fast paced world likes things short and to the point.

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

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Review of To Arms!  Open in new Window.
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Hi AmyJo-Moving day's soon here I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "To Arms!" Open in new Window. by AmyJo-Moving day's soon here

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A delightful poem wriiten for the prompt of Mutiny. A free-verse style with a unique structure used for this short entertaining poem.

Artistic Voice and Imagery:I see the image of a ship surrounded by ocean and days away from any type of land. The crew began to doubt their captains ability and consider taking over the ship to plot a quicker path home.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:No problems that I can find with the mechanics of this entertaining work.

AmyJo-Moving day's soon here thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of Chelsea, Maine  Open in new Window.
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Hi Lou-Here By His Grace I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Chelsea, Maine" Open in new Window. by Lou-Here By His Grace

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A delightful and realistic poem emphasizing on a conversation between a father and child while on a road trip. The father patiently answering the child's thousand questions about their destination and the best route to get there.

A great work with mostly realistic dialog then ending with a bit of dark mystery.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: I can find no problems at all with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this entertaining and timeless work.

Lou-Here By His Grace thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi kshdbmr I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"Invalid Item" Open in new Window. by kshdbmr

Clarity:Seems to be a good title for this article.

Writing style:Informational article.

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Are all 3 genres listed?None listed, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader? A nice structure that does make it easy on the reader.

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: A information packed article emphasizing the Natural Flavors market. Good reference websites are given in an orderly fashion. Many good questions about the Natural Flavors industry. Good information about Data Bridge Market Research.

Good ending with contact information.

kshdbmr thank you for sharing this work it has been very informational and a joy to read it.

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Review of A Moment in Time  Open in new Window.
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Hi again Jacky I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"A Moment in Time" Open in new Window. by Jacky

Clarity: Nice title for this private eye tale.

Writing style:Folktale mystery drama.

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Are all 3 genres listed?Only contest entry is listed, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?The nice structure and format does make it easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker? Indeed the dialogue is appropriate for its speaker.

My favorite line:--- Randy quickly picked up a big broken tree branch and wacked the guy right on the back of his head with it. ---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: I hope you won the contest because this short story is awesome. Short straight to the point in a most entertaining way.

A great opening that definitely makes the reader want to read more.

Jacky thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:Write on!

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Joseph
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Review of We would’ve  Open in new Window.
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Hi B.K.K. I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "We would’ve " Open in new Window. by B.K.K.

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter: A delightful and entertaining poem written with a repeating line or theme.
'We would've' is a nicely worded poem emphasizing on the past, which unfortunately we can't change. "We will" would be quite a challenging prompt for a future work.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of two souls navigating the rapids of time searching for that common point where their lifelines will become one.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems that I could find with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this charming poem.

B.K.K. thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of My class…  Open in new Window.
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Hi Nightblue I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "My class…" Open in new Window. by Nightblue

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A very entertaining and humorous poem that indeed shows off a talented writing skill.

A good rhyming scheme that enhances the entertaining flow of this strong work.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of a chaotic classroom where the teacher is running late so some of the students have taken over trying desperately to show off for the one talented student who pays them no mind. Instead writes a creative poem about the spectacle.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: I see no problems at all with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this entertaining delight.

Nightblue thank you for sharing your poem.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A deep and delightful poem with six strong stanzas emphasizing on the flow of time and our perception of it.

A unique rhyming scheme that enhances and adds to the philosophical flow of this deep work that has got this readers mind to spinning.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of an insect that is born and lives its entire lifespan in a matter of hours.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems that I could find with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this enchanting poem.

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