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Hi again Bi0Hazard I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Delightfully Patched" Open in new Window. by Bi0Hazard

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A most delightful twelve line poem with a random rhyming pattern that adds to the humorous flow.

Artistic Voice and Imagery:I see a single person in unmatched socks preparing to dine alone with one chair, one fork and a dull knife.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: I can find no problems at all with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this entertaining work.

Bi0Hazard thank you for sharing your poem.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hi again Kelchworth, thank you for the review request.
I am no literary professor however I like to read and feel like my opinions relate with today's average reader.
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My impressions of:"The weight of the plan" Open in new Window. by Kelchworth

Clarity:A good title for this sci-fi mystery tale.

Writing style:Sci-fi adventure drama.

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Are all 3 genres listed?Only one is listed, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?A good structure however it appears a bit crowded and might benefit from some blank lines between at least the longer paragraphs. This would make it less intimidating for the reader and more appealing for a browser or potential reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker?A good job with the dialog which is realistic and appropriate for its speaker.

My favorite line:---Hello, hubby!"---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: A nice easygoing opening. Consider this line
---Jenkia saw a massive object descending from the sky. It was closing fast, and with his enhanced sight, he could see exactly what it was. A Rudyan drop ship. Which meant a Rudyan assault squad.---
for a stronger opening that might grab the readers attention better.
How did Jenkia acquire his enhanced sight?

Good detailed descriptions that paint a good picture of the paradise planet of Xeria. Plenty of well described action as the Rudyan marines strike and assault the planet.

Lira caught me totally off guard as she brought even more mystery into the tale. What is the plan that Jenkia is unknowingly a part of?

A good strong ending that leaves the reader wanting to turn the page and read more.

Kelchworth thank you for sharing this work it has been a thrill to read it.

Suggestions:Consider a blank line between paragraphs to make it easier on those of us readers with weaker eyes. A good edit never hurts, consider experimenting with the opening line.

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Joseph
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Review of If Only  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi again Sum1 I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "If Only" Open in new Window. by Sum1

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:'If Only' is a delightful eight line poem with a nice rhyming pattern that gives this short poem a poetic flow. The focus as the title suggests is on a past time that the author would like to revisit.

Artistic Voice and Imagery:I see the image of a soul looking back over the sea of time to a important point that they long to revisit.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:No problems that I can see with the spelling, grammar or mechanics of this entertaining poem.

Sum1 thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of Picking fruit  Open in new Window.
Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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Hi Kelchworth I appreciate the review request.
I am no literary professor however I like to read and feel like my opinions relate with today's average reader.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of:"Picking fruit" Open in new Window. by Kelchworth

Clarity:A good title however if it described the content of this tale better I feel it would be stronger.

Writing style:Sci-fi adventure drama.
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Are all 3 genres listed?Indeed, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?A nice structure that does make it easy on the reader as well as inviting for a browser.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker?A great job with realistic dialog.

My favorite line:---"Those bastards had never done a day's real work in their life!"---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: A good opening that does get my attention and make me wanna read more.
Well described with realistic dialog that gently pulls me into the tale as it slowly introduces Gloven the overseer. A good picture of Gloven is painted followed with a good ending for chapter one.

Chapter two starts out good, is well written with a lot of good descriptions and details, maybe too many. Because for me my attention began to wonder away a bit toward the middle.

I like the title and start of chapter three. My attention starts to rekindle. Plenty of action then a cliffhanger ending leaving this reader wanting to turn the page.

Kelchworth thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:Maybe its just me but consider a stronger title for chapter one & two and possibly a bit of work on chapter two.

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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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My impressions of the poem: "Re. Yellow Submarine" Open in new Window. by Brigitte

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter: A lyrics style poem about an indie submarine. A nice modern day version of the yellow submarine with references to the internet and You Tube. Without the Beatles singing it neither the voice on my computer or I could quite get in the rhythm.

Nice poetic lines that paint the indie story. For me 'indie' just don't seem to be as catchy as yellow.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:No problems that I see with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this entertaining work.

Brigitte thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Hi Alex I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"How Naïvithrax got her Promotion" Open in new Window. by Alex

Clarity:Good title that describes this dragon tale well.

Writing style:Fantasy comedy drama.

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Are all 3 genres listed?Indeed*Smile* by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader? *Smile* A nice structure that is easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker?*Smile*The dialog is appropriate for its speaker.

My favorite line:---Naïvithrax reasoned that this was because it is difficult to hear people calling out to you while your head is underwater.---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: A nice opening with good descriptions to guide the reader into this fantasy world. Written with a very realistic tone that makes this tale easy to relate to and most enjoyable to read. A curious ending.

Alex thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.*Smile*

Suggestions: Write on!

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Review of "IF"  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Bi0Hazard I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: ""IF"" Open in new Window. by Bi0Hazard

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A most entertaining poem that carries a delightful flow. 'If ifs and buts were candies and nuts' what a wonderful opening.

A lovely world this poem describes.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of the wise squirrel gathering then storing all the nuts he can find now. Saving them for those times when none can be found.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: I can find no problems at all with the grammar spelling all mechanics of this charming poem.

Bi0Hazard thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of Portfolio  Open in new Window.
Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Hi Dickie I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"Portfolio" Open in new Window. by Dickie

Clarity: Good title.

Writing style: Introduction.

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Are all 3 genres listed?Only one, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?Nice structure well laid out with good spacing that does make it easy for the reader. *BigSmile*

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: Looks like a nicely detailed introduction laid out in a good orderly fashion. I look forward to seeing more of your work. Keep writing.

Both 'Taxi Driver' and 'Forbidden Love' sound as if they would be entertaining works to read.*Smile*

Dickie thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.*BigSmile*

Suggestions: Write on!

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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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Hi Kelchworth I came across this story while random reviewing.
I am no literary professor however I like to read and feel like my opinions relate with today's average reader.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of:"Totally Tall Tales " Open in new Window. by Kelchworth

Clarity:A good title that gets my curiosity wanting to read more.

Writing style:Action adventure drama.

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Are all 3 genres listed?Yes by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader? Nicely structured making it easy for the reader as well as inviting to a browser.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker? Great dialog that does seem appropriate for its speaker.

My favorite line:---Stolen the ride, to get revenge on the asses at the school and both car and road were conspiring to punish him - for the theft?---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:A good opening with plenty of action to grab my attention. Good descriptions with very realistic dialogue both helped take the reader into this tale.

The twist at 'how my grand pappy met his fate' caught me unprepared. A nice ending for chapter one.

Chapter two was delightful even though personally I'm not a big fan of zombies. Ending with a bit of mystery to get the reader thinking.


Kelchworth thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: Nicely done however a good reread and edit never hurts.

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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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Hi Kanishka Sanyukt I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "European Union: A Halal Bildungsroman" Open in new Window. by Kanishka Sanyukt

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A political poem in a unique original style.
Well written in a realistic yet humorous style. A great idea for this sign of the times historical tale.
I like the realistic yet humorous style. Consider shorting some of the longer sentences to keep a more uniform structure, as they seem to linger. A wonderful work however for me it seemed to ramble on a bit toward the end.


Kanishka Sanyukt thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of Last Chance  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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Hi Silvern I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Last Chance" Open in new Window. by Silvern

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:
Seems like a good poem, it is just written in a language that I don't quite get. To me it reads like it was picked from the middle missing the introduction which leaves me guessing.

A sport poem that seems to be ranting about an unpopular rule or decision.
Sports fans especially the hardcore ones do seem to have a secret language that only they understand. I have to admit I don't get it.
This work does indeed have a catchy tone that sticks in your head.


Silvern thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi vapid I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "a seat with insomnia" Open in new Window. by vapid

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A seat with insomnia is a gothic dark style free verse poem. Well written with deep undertones. It feels like this was written at a low point in the author's life.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of a dark mysterious realm where nothing at all makes sense and sleep is forbidden. The birth place of misery where one can't get out of bed.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: I can find no problems at all with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this deep work.

vapid thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of I Miss...  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi SeanFhear I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "I Miss..." Open in new Window. by SeanFhear

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A free verse romance poem with three psychedelic stanzas. I really like the opening line.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of a soul longing for the company of one whose path took a different direction long ago.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: I can't find any problems at all with this entertaining philosophy.

SeanFhear thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hi Kelchworth I came across this story while random reviewing.
I am no literary professor however I like to read and feel like my opinions relate with today's average reader.
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My impressions of:"Lemme buy those shoes." Open in new Window. by Kelchworth

Clarity:A catchy title.

Writing style:Sci-fi adventure drama.

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Are all 3 genres listed?Only two, by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?Nicely structured.*Smile*

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker?The dialog is specific for its speaker. *Smile*

My favorite line:---"Time to dance" he said as he whipped his hand behind his back and pulled the snub nosed slug thrower. ---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: a good opening line that catches my attention and makes me want to read more.

Well written with great descriptions that easily take the readers straight into the tale.

Short and to the point with plenty of action and a nice twist at the end. That seems to be the way the modern reader likes things.

Kelchworth thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:Write on!

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Joseph
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Review of Lincoln Penny  Open in new Window.
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Hi *Smile*Fivesixer I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Lincoln Penny" Open in new Window. by Fivesixer

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter: As they have just now discontinued making the penny this seems like a very appropriate subject for the time. So they say it cost almost 4 cents to make a 1 cent penny. Only in the good old' USA. At least I feel like most countries would have shot it down when the cost exceeded the product.

'Head or tail I don't understand my scope or range.'
This is a well written free verse poem decades ahead of its time.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: 'Kindness and ignorance both work themselves out in the end, like the flipped sides of a Lincoln penny that you don't get a choice in common.'

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: I can find no problems at all with the spelling grammar or mechanics of this classic work that is ahead of its time.

Fivesixer thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of Happy Birthday  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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Hi Dave Ryan I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"Happy Birthday" Open in new Window. by Dave Ryan

Clarity:Seems like a good title for tale.

Writing style: Fantasy horror drama.

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Are all 3 genres listed?*Smile* Indeed by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader? *Smile* A nice structure that does make it easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker?*Smile* Yes the dialog does seem to be appropriate for its speaker.


My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: Most people would think that a 240 word short story would be easy. Those people don't have a clue.
The author has so little to work with, meaning he must make every word count. That is what you have done in this delightful tale. A delightful entertaining story, short and straight to the point. Just the way the modern reader likes things.

Seems like you met the prompt requirements well, I hope you won the contest. 240 words is not a lot to work with yet what a entertaining and delightful tale. Even a slight bit of mystery at the end.

Dave Ryan thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.


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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hi again *Moon* HuntersMoon I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Black Water" Open in new Window. by HuntersMoon

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:'The river Styx is calling me' Wow what a great idea. Well written English Sonnet, this poem has a deep mysterious flow. I hope you won the contest.

Artistic Voice and Imagery:The image of an ancient philosopher who has fell deep into a dream reality where it takes all his strength to finally free himself and return to world of the awaken.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:I can't find anything at all wrong with this enchanting poem.

HuntersMoon thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Preshi Writes I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "The poetry girl(part 2)" Open in new Window. by Preshi Writes

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A truly charming enlightened poem describing the captivating yet mysterious 'poetry girl'.

This short to the point free verse poem carries a positive flow.

Artistic Voice and Imagery:I see the image of an anonymous poet that has countless admirers longing to know her identity.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: I can find no problems at all with this simply delightful work.*Sly* *Party* *Smile*

Preshi Writes thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Prem Junior I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "What a Fool I've Become" Open in new Window. by Prem Junior

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A deep romance poem that has the author focusing on the positive aspects and lessons learned from a past relationship.

Written in a realistic free verse form that carries an overall positive flow.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of a soul reflecting on a past relationship while realizing the lessons learned from the experience and being grateful and thankful for them.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: I can't find no problems with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this deep and positive poem.

Prem Junior thank you for sharing your poem.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Hi Jatlog the Green I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Shelter in Place " Open in new Window. by Jatlog the Green

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:This poem shows that it was written in the uncertain time of the pandemic when life as we knew stopped. Masks had to be worn. Social distancing, businesses closed, Holidays canceled even the skies had no traffic. That brief time that seemed to linger forever where the whole world had come to a stop.

This well worded poem takes me back to that point in time that will forever be carved in my memory.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of a world that has stopped and fell back over a hundred years in time. The people in solitude and isolation redefine everything they were ever taught. Slowly a different world emerges and works hard to make up for that lost time.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: I can find no problems at all with this strong and emotional poem that has taken me back a few years in the past.

Jatlog the Green *Mindblown* *Mars* thank you for sharing your poem.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hi again Ri_leigh I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "LOVE IS NOT JUST A FEELING..." Open in new Window. by Ri_leigh

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:An in depth view of 'love' with opposing ideas. Posing many good questions that are mostly answered in the last line of this entertaining work.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of an ancient philosopher deep in thought trying to define an emotion that cannot be defined.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: I can find no problems with the grammar of mechanics of this entertaining work.

Ri_leigh thank you for sharing your poem.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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Hi again Winchester Jones I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"Love in a Burning Cabin" Open in new Window. by Winchester Jones

Clarity:A good title that peaks my curiosity.

Writing style:Crime gangster romance drama.

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Are all 3 genres listed?Only two are given by listing the Max amount of three genres your work will be available to more readers and browsers searching in that genre.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?Nice structure and format that does make it easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker? Indeed the dialogue does seem to be appropriate for its speaker.

My favorite line:---We were ten feet apart, sitting on the wood floor under two different shattered glass windows. Fuzzy lights, like colored smoke, pulsed in through the splintered walls, filling the room with reds and blues.---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:Well written in a realistic yet entertaining tale. A good opening that gets my attention and makes me want to read on. Great descriptions and dialog that lets me get to know the characters.

Short and straight to the point just the way the modern reader likes it. I like the ending.

Winchester Jonesthank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:Write ✍ on!

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Hi again Jacky I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"Like Father, Like Son" Open in new Window. by Jacky


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My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: A catchy title that comes to use at the end of this delightful tale. A very realistic sounding conversation written with all dialog that let the reader know these characters.

A delightful and entertaining story. Well done!*BigSmile*

Jackythank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.


WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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My impressions of the poem: "Behind Every Word Lies A Secret" Open in new Window. by Ri_leigh

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A free verse poem written in a realistic tone that lets the reader feel the emotions from this deep work.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: The image of two realities moving on a slow timeline until finally the poet and her character combine.
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Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:No problems that I see.

Ri_leigh thank you for sharing your poem.
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My impressions of the poem: "The Stand Up" Open in new Window. by autumnjave

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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter: A deep emotional romance poem that the title describes well. Written in a realistic serious tone with a humorous overtone.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: The image of a soul looking over the ocean of time. Remembering past encounters while realizing how blessed they are.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: I can find no problems with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this entertaining work.

autumnjave thank you for sharing your poem.
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