Doris's (datanner) Reviews

Doris

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#2280607

Review of Thank You.

Review by Doris

Rated: E ★★★★★ | (4.0)

Very good story. I'm proud for you.

ArkMom Doris

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#2272628

Review of The Word

Review by Doris

Rated: 13+ ★★★★★ | (4.0)

Another good poem. I write very little poetry and cannot critique it intelligently,i.e. rhyming meter etc. It is a cute poem, and one I'm sure you will treasue.

ArkMom

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#2272624

Review of I Remember

Review by Doris

Rated: ASR ★★★★★ | (4.0)

This is too cute. I love it when people can write stories and not reveal the character til the end.
And to have it in a poem is even greater.

Some places didn't seem to rhyme and it almost lost its flow. But keep up the good work.

ArkMom

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#2269057

Review of Running

Review by Doris

Rated: 13+ ★★★★★ | (4.0)

I write very little poetry, so I struggle to understand the type of poetry you write. Understand I am impressed at anyone who writes any other way but rhyme I guess I keep looking for a story with an ending, and even though I know you have a story in there, I fail to see it. Remember again, I can't write your style I only try try to interpret.

Keep up the good work and welcome to WDC.

ArkMom

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#2265397

Review of And then there were none...

Review by Doris

Rated: 13+ ★★★★★ | (3.5)

Guess I was almost lost since there was no rhyming to the poem. Your comment about Agatha Christie led me to believe there had been something similar to her writings. I would be interested to know what your grade was on this and how the teacher viewed it. I love poetry, but this lacked something. Keep writing.

ArkMom

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#2066646

Review of Leaving

Review by Doris

Rated: E ★★★★★ | (4.0)

This is a great story. I probably need to read it a second time to find errors, but all in all it does speak volumns for the restless one. I don't know why, but I found myself reading it fast. Maybe the flow of sentences - I'm not sure. I don't usually read as tho I only have a few minutes to get to the end. So I'm sure I can't tell you why I felt like rushing. Something to think about on my part for sure. Others may not see it, - so again "one man's (woman in this case) opinion. Keep up the good work.

ARK MOM
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#2057403

Review of Who's to Say

Review by Doris

Rated: E ★★★★★ | (4.0)

Heart warming for sure. It would not take away from the poem content to correct the spelling of a few
words.

fany ( fancy) clothes they do not wear

Lord plase (please) hear my prayers and help me understand.

Would love to know the whole story. Very emotional.

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#2049022

Review of the way out

Review by Doris

Rated: 13+ ★★★★★ | (1.0)

This is very difficult to read. You may want to take a better look at your grammer as well as spelling. Maybe it is type errors, but your piece is filled with gramatical errors.
You do have a good idea going, but like I say, needs some work.

ARK MOM

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#2045334

Review of Food, Fireworks, and Freedom

Review by Doris

Rated: E ★★★★★ | (5.0)

I needed this tonight. It is wonderful to be free, and the story that you intertwined is precious. I more than an child, but I can relate to a boy who would look forward to meeting his hero. I'll check out your other links another time. Keep up the good work.

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ARK MOM