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Review of V is for Virginia  
Review by Dawn Stone
Rated: E | (4.5)
Honestly, I really liked this poem. As soon as I finished reading it the words "I liked it" left my mouth and a smile crept onto my face. It seems everyone has this feeling at one point in their life. I love it when people incorporate their emotions into their writing like you did! Please keep writing! I enjoyed this a lot.

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Review of Cannot be broken  
Review by Dawn Stone
Rated: | (4.5)
I write songs often, and I can honestly say that if you wrote this inspired my your emotions that I have felt the same way. To me, your poem further supported that what can't kill you only makes you stronger. After time and time again of being hurt, embarrassed or deceived, all the pain is the same and the only thing that changes is your reaction to it. It just stops hurting even though the pain is still there. At least that's what I got when I read your poem. I can really relate. Keep writing!
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Review by Dawn Stone
Rated: E | (3.5)
It was so moving! I almost felt like it was wrong for me to read, as it seemed so personal and directed to a certain audience. My favorite part has to be
"but heartbreak and sadness
interfere causing confusion as to
whether or not I should
cry"
Each line, flows into the next. Great poem! Continue writing!

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Review of Steady and Still  
Review by Dawn Stone
Rated: E | (3.5)
I liked it. It was a wonderful couplet! Advice: Spell check always! I noticed a spelling error that could have easily been avoided. Just here to help. As I read it, some questions aroused. Is this a couplet you wrote based on your emotions, or your religious beliefs? Or both? Keep writing, there's room for improvement though :)

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Review by Dawn Stone
Rated: E | (4.5)
It was amazing! I really liked it. The story had my complete attention throughout. At first I thought, Ruth is just some crazy old woman, but wow. Not at all haha. I enjoyed reading it because of the main character, Hank. I truly wish more people were like him. As I read I was just waiting to see a flaw in him, as no one can be perfect, but I was mistaken. Great writing. Keep going :)
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Review of Just a Fairytale  
Review by Dawn Stone
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi. I really loved this piece. It flowed nicely, and automatically reminded me of someone as I read it. Typically, I would assume you wrote this based on your emotions or feelings....One thing I can assure you is that I have felt the exact same way and writing is a wonderful way to release that stress and tension. I really liked this, keep writing :)
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