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Review by DB Cooper
Rated: E | (5.0)
I really enjoyed your beautiful writing. It reminds me of Chernobyl and also Russian war crimes in Grozny. You might enjoy reading about Fred Cuny who was murdered by Islamic nuts he was trying to save from war.
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Review of In God We Trust  
Review by DB Cooper
Rated: E | (5.0)
I really enjoyed this story. The North and South hated each other but outstanding Americans died on both sides. Anybody that doubts Union soldiers inhumanity should read about the POW camp near Chicago. Fifty one thousand Americans and most of them did not support the atrocities of Southern racism but fulfilled a duty.
That duty is what makes Americans fight for freedom to this day.
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Review by DB Cooper
Rated: E | (4.0)
Thank you for sharing this. Perhaps it should have been longer since Detroit is really infamous but I enjoyed it. The word 'bus' is a little confusing since you were on a train.
I remember when Colman Young spoke at The Democratic National Convention. I thought Detroit was coming back but then as years went by I heard lots and lots of bad things.
Recently Detroit's mayor {I can't remember his name} got in trouble and Michigan put the city under an appointed administrator.
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Review by DB Cooper
Rated: E | (4.0)
I agree with most of your beautiful work but not about Obamacare. Obamacare has NOT been proven to cause unemployment. I wish you were right because I hate Obamacare.
I believe President Obama should have enacted a short term solution and long term solution to save America from bankruptcy.
In the short term I would have focused purely on pre-existing conditions.
In the long term the only proven way to stop healthcare inflation from driving us out of existence is single payer insurance coupled with making health insurance illegal to sell or buy like in Canada.
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Review by DB Cooper
Rated: E | (4.5)
I sometimes feel nothing but fear but I'm trying to get over that.
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Review by DB Cooper
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is very well written especially the first thousand words.


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!.
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Review by DB Cooper
Rated: E | (5.0)
As the son of Hungarian Jewish parents I have a huge advantage over the average person because geography was dinner table conversation. During the Holocaust Lithuania's capitol was Kunis but today it's Vilnius. When the Nazis occupied Poland, they made the capitol Krakow.
My point is that not only people should know the capitol now but what was the capitol.
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Review by DB Cooper
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
My favorite had to do with the hypothalamus. You know why? My father in 1951 co-authored the world's first paper showing the role of the hypothalamus in neural regulation of immune cells.
The pole could be better if you included more choices.
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Review by DB Cooper
Rated: E | (4.0)
I am curious what type of creative writing you specialize in. Some students are super talented and do all types. You should have explained how your genre or genres are influenced by your background.
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Review of Dad  
Review by DB Cooper
Rated: E | (5.0)
I really enjoyed your beautiful poem. My dad died this last October and I also wrote a memorial to him on this site.
My piece doesnt have much feeling but I got the job done.
Having read several obituaries about my dad, I did a better job than most!
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