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Review by Xander Craft
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Beautifully structured. The spacing threw me off a little.
However the writing itself was great, good imagery.
One thing I very much enjoyed was your symbolism
And how you relate it to your subject. Good job.

,Xander Craft
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Review of Loosing You  
Review by Xander Craft
Rated: E | (2.5)
Your structure is sound yet your syntax is off.
You are missing congugative words.
I'm normally not one to pick on small details;
However for a serious subject such as death I feel the need
for a bit more time and attention.
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