|You have very good structure. Despite talking about many different times in your life, sometimes years apart, you maintain very consistent flow. Also, even though these events take up so much time, you give just enough details to drive the story forward, without adding a lot of unnecessary clutter or loose information. I admire that ability and the fact that you speak from personal experience makes this a very important piece while setting a good example to follow in my own future writings. Obviously this piece was interesting to read since i'am a student of psychology, I read through to the end, and am writing a review.
P.S. This is the only article i read in months, since it was in the sponsored column on the right of the screen.