I read your poem with growing alarm, for if this is how you truly feel then I suggest you take a look at the democratic principle on which the US is built on.
You do have the power to vote any president in or out every four years, thereby negating the use of violence that you are advocating.
I am not American but I think you should be ashamed call yourself American when your ancestors have given their all to create a society that should be able to live peacably.
They drafted the rules for that and I am appalled at the attitude of such a selfish individual as yourself.
I do not want to visit the USA again if your attitude prevails across your once great country.
Ask not what your Country can do for you but ask what you can do for you country.
Now I wonder just who it was who said that?
I can only award half a star as for this piece of work
If your poem is from your heart then I feel that I should point out to you that if you want to be loved then you have to love others first, and do for them what you would have them do for you.
If you follow this pattern for your life then others are bound to notice and then they will automatically love you too. You cannot expect people to love you just because you are there; all you can do for certain is to love other people. As Jesus of Nazareth said sometime in the long distant past. Love the Lord your God with all your heart and soul and love others as yourself.
If you check that out in the Bible I know you will find it there.
Is that a real invitation or just another mask to keep us/me out.
Not everyone will understand but I have a similar place inside of me; maybe all poets do? If only we could find someone who feels at home when you let them in, would'nt life be grand.
Excellent poem, reveals the place inside just a little.
This is a poem I like very much. It reminded me that all religion is illusory. That the real life for all of us is Love. Jesus was the most irreligious man who ever set foot on this planet; that is why religion put him to death and that is why religion kills him every day since. They don't know that you can't kill Love.
A Big Cracking 5 stars for you on this one
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