This was really well written my guy. I like how the idea for this hypothetical system was played out. You covered the basics, and any possible fallbacks. The writing, from what I saw, didn't have any overt errors. Honestly, I would love to see something like this become a reality. Keep up the good work writing
I gotta say man, this was simple, yet very cute. It really does capture what most kids would probably be thinking in that age whenever they reach a milestone like wearing underwear
I love this interactive. The amount of options in this is staggering. I love how you can choose a character from the show, and then decide why they get padded. I oh so love adding to this tale. Hope it continues!!!
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