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Review of Center stage  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
It didn't take long to understand the feelings of your humanity behind the frame. Beyond the stage we play/live our choices to continue another episode. I can sooo relate to the truth behind the words. Bless you for caring enough to share your moods and heart. As one who wore my Scrubs proudly many moons ago. You keep telling it like it is! The spacing needs a bit of work for reading better for some.
Write on and welcome indeed!
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Review of On the Last Day  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow this totally blew me away!
After hearing that song in the challenge amazing what folks are bringing to this table indeed.
So much attention in detail and plot. A stunning array of words and meanings looped into a telling tale of future yet present of what the collective mind is dealing with.
The end ( Though wanting to see more!)
Was amazing and put collective prayers in one focus hope.
Loved the line about (... dotted with distant stars)
Thanks for sharing this! Zei gezunt be well.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hi I saved this to review and after many tries(My family keeps me very busy),finally finished reading. I wish you would finish this! It is a good story,a few grammar issues,nothing that bad! IF you do reply,I will reread it and show where the few things were. It is a beautiful story,That I pray gets an ending as well!
Zei Gezunt,be well!


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Review of Lizard?  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Very cute and engage the reader in a perspective of creative thought!
Smooth punchline!
Didn't see any error.


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Review of What can they do?  
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This asks many profound questions, one's that should have answers.
Some see this and turn away, some are good soldier's giving time, to cook or contribute in whatever way they can. Many have little themselves and know how it feels to live and deal with life in this reality.
Your writing is strong.
You cut to the chase.
Letting one know how strong you feel and the frustration behind this condition becoming worse as each day turns to night. I applaud you for having empathy in world with not enough.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
I saw the title, and was drawn and curious, by what was said or remembered.
I'm sure our Mork from Ork enjoyed and appreciated hearing your kind words.
I see no error in what you wrote, only pouring out how many of us also feel.
It is well written and to the point.
May I say a Na Nu, to you too!
Be well!
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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Welcome fellow writer! You have a good style,simple yet to the point.Asking questions we all ask and ponder. You write from your heart,and I don't see any issues here. Looking forward to seeing more!


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Review of Weekly Goals  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Wow this is really inspiring to be challenged this way---Good luck everyone----
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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | N/A (Unratable.)
Sweet idea! thanks for sharing magical love to make this world better!!! We need all the Wizards & fairies we can find! This is a very good cause I hope many will also help! Happy holidays to you & all who may read this!
Write on & on! (I wish I could send ya lots more!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
HI Hope this helps!! I just got here & trying hard to get up to speed! Had dental work done... Be well & Happy Y'all--happy holidays & I think this is a great idea,for folks like us "old-timers here & newer people to get in the right holiday spirit,no matter what your thing!!! It don't get better then this!!oxoxoxoxoxdd
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Review of Still  
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Rated: 13+ | N/A (Review only item.)
This is quite an amusing read. I laughed & enjoyed it. No typos! It brought a fresh perspective and details, that sounded more like experience, then "only" imagination-which you use both quite well!
Reading this gave me pause to miss my own writing,after some delay of personal sorrow. I really needed something to help me along the way.I like your writing style & look forward to reading more of it & worrying less! As Alfred. E Newman used to say! " What me worry?" b well & happy!


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Review of BREAD  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Thank you for sharing from your heart.This was a welcoming read,that captured the sacred memories.You have been through a tough & yet love filled life. You bring truth to a time when it is so important for folks to have understanding for others. Your writing style was awesome! I could find nothing that needed change.
The humor was delightful. be well & Happy!


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In affiliation with The Dark Society  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
The art work is awesome! I thought these were very nice to send out(at the right time!)I really liked the first one best,the colors worked well. I thought they were done with care & thought.I'm saving to my favs for the big day to come! Thanks for sharing these,looking forward to finding more!
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In affiliation with The Dark Society  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This was good because,it makes one think about how we can perceive an author in a limited way. It was a good choice of questions to ask and creative! Very interesting how the votes came out. You did a nice job!
He is one of my favorite authors,so had to check this out!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This was done very well! The image is creative! I liked it! Write on!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is well written and gives wonderful food for thought,on life and beyond the vail.What is really important,beyond the mundane?!
Write on! You really have a lot to say!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you for writing this! It is well written,and has very good ideas.I only found one typo-in writing.com! As an older woman who will be quiting,This went in my favs! I was looking for stop smoking ideas here and yours is very helpful! Write-on!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I have loved your site, since day one! and it just keeps getting better & better! thank you both for what you have created & nurtured here! all the best,Dara Write on & on!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is an awesome one,Sherri! Thanks for sharing this,it's in my favs! I know some & sure to enjoy the others. Great idea,gotta pass it on! Write On & on Lady!VIVA COMMUNITY! Way worth checking out!(smile)-Dara
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Review of WHAT I CANNOT SEE  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi sherri, This is well written,concise
and a piece from the soul, as well. It's beautiful the way you added the graphics also.No one can put a price on faith and the joy,when we realize,that we are not alone in life.It's good to share that reality,through words from the soul,thanks for bringing it to life,in your own way! Write ON & ON!-Dara
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Review of A Cry for Help  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Pinkdaisy,Indent the first line, This is well written,from the heart and soul and The end says it all.When we get lost and can't find direction,then we must reach out for help to find the right path.
I love this line "With hope and resolve, I open my mouth to form the words that will attempt (oop's missing "to" )save me. It says a lot in a few, but strong powerful words.Glad to have found your writing,deep and inspiring-please do WRITE ON!
PS Just went back to therapy myself-can relate....
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Amyaurora, Thank you for this fantastic resource! Though it is written for newbies here. I Think It’s worth checking out, no matter how long/short anyone's been here! Have added it to my fav, s! It is filled with so many wonderful, different and helpful articles in one place. My words can hardly do justice to what your time and energy has put together. It’s like have having a map to the great labyrinth. For the important reality of this place is: it’s heart is the community. Remembering being a newbie, There was so much on this site,(for a writer it was love at first sight!) but whoa! by the time I found out what newbie was, I wasn't. If I had this Directory then, might have had a better handle on what was going on, a bit sooner. Though some folks were very helpful! So it’s a real good thing you created this! And I hope we can pass this on to those who need it - Pay it forward! Thank you from this oldie but goodie! Write on & on! Happy New Year!

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Review of Views Of Death  
Rated: E | (3.5)
This is a good “food for thought” piece, that causes one to think & explore many possibilities .I liked this poem a lot, because it asked the deep questions that many people wonder about, no matter what they believe or don’t believe in. The one thing we can be sure of is that love exists! The structure of your writing was good, the lines flowed into each other well & said a lot in a few words .Do write on! -d
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi Pita THANKS so much for writing this guide, for the perplexed (like me!). It really helps that you have shown what they look like. Your writing is clear, understandable and will be a big help to others and me!
You’re in my favs & I know whom to ask, if I have a question! Happy New Year!-D
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Kim-Marie, You have so many wonderful and helpful articles here, where to start? Show AND tell covers one of the many writing questions that come up a lot! I look forward to some very good reading here! You inform with a good sense of humor! I added you to my authors and thank you, for sharing your talent here!
Happy New Year!-D
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