Actions speak louder than words. That is an old wives tale. There is definitely truth in the saying. So often we forget to translate words into actions. Especially words of love. God is love. (1 John 4:8,16.) (KJV) Meditate on God on that.
I liked the allusion to King Arthur but I got lost when you changed to your own story. That needs clarifying. It was an oops! What happened to the story??? If you meant that as a ending it lost me. Some explanation like "This is the end of one story and the beginning of my story." would help. Placed right after "That message rings familiar." and what happened to Sir Lancelot? Diana Molino.
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