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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hello Knightscribe,
I noticed you on WDC and had to take a look at your portfolio.I found this item.

There is much rich imagery in this piece, which allows the reader to be there to see and hear what is happening.

We see the king, the royals, and and his people interact.

But later we also see the private side revealing concern and support for the prince.

And the prince's hearfelt guilt and concern that he failed, yet the king is his morale support, building him up to know his own goodness.

Nicely done. Good dialogue. Nice expression of emotion.

*Pencil* The only thing I would suggest is adding a line space between dialogues.
The other thing I noticed is although there is a king and prince and duke. They have no names like Prince Harry or King David. I might have mentioned it at least once, then again. this is a short scene not a long story yet it could still be.

Thank you for sharing.


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Review of Overexposed  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Mirdee,

I just happened by your port and saw this. I became curious

What a funny little story. The dialogue felt real and the reactions also.

The premise is a rare experience, which literally caught the guy with his pants down or should I say missing.



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Review of Lone Wolf  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi Nick Knight. I was just reading your story Lone Wolf.

I already read three chapters and am wanting more.

It is very easy to read and understand. It's format looks good too.

And you have dialogue. I do love dialogue, but you also have just enough exposition and some nice imagery, which let's us know what's going on. Your transitions are smooth also.

I loved finding this item. I don't know much about anthro animals but do appreciate a good read.
I like that you provided a link to the next chapters. Is there more?

I did find an error or two which can be easily fixed. I don't remember which chapter it was in. I think the word was well, but I think you meant we'll.

Thanks for the read.



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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Rich,

Wow. I searched in your pot I mean port and found this informational item.

The premise is akin to ancient times when the Earth was blessed with human lifeforms. There's pwepp speed Ug and Og living thier stuff as all good homo sapiens do. Oh, they were the first and setting a good example.

Ug, being the intelligent being he is, did something not so cute and Og let him know about it. I would think the club would have come in handy about then.

Anyway, Ug decided to rectify this problem. After all an angry better half could be dangerous to his health.

*Pencil* there's an error here-- medium(-)sized trees


I could visualize the children running into the cave kicking up dirt on the way and then Og looking at Ug. Probably UG was covered in soot like smoke. Since he stood downwind if the fire (nice comedic visual) typical, that happens to me every time

Well anyway. The Ug and Og Ly family and friends eat happily ever after unless they don't.

Thanks for the fun read. How did you know I needed something fun to read?



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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Perry Ride,
This was an interesting article about coffee.
What wasn't covered was the benefits if drinking coffee.

I didn't know it had been banned in those countries mentioned.

Here in the usa they'd banned booze many years ago, but that just made people who enjoyed it want it more and ended up having it anyway, but not where
anyone could see. After a time they allowed it.

Wierd thing is during this pandemic. They closed churches but allowed the sale of liquor in liquor stores.

In other words it sends a message. You can drink yourself silly but you can't go to church. Crazy.

Back 5o the coffee issue, I like ut now and then. It's comforting to have a nice warm cup of coffee plus it has antioxidents in it.

In this article I saw no errors nor anything to fix.

Thanks for sharing.

.


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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello WD Wilcox,

I just noticed "The Man Who Was Not Himself [13+] in your port. I decided to read more. I wasn't disappointed.

This tells the story of a man who had everything yet have it up because he had a dream telling him to.


Vivid imagery here. Those last words say so much. : deformed dragon and, as it bent over me, it dripped decayed flesh and spittle upon my head.

The house in the jungle is where tension begins and ebbs them rises higher.

When I read that those demons were taking him apart then putting him together it made me laugh be ause I can imagine a kid fighting over a toy.

Good job. I liked it even if it had creepy parts. But you needed that.

Thanks for sharing.

I do not see anything requiring me to use my red pencil. Haha.


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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello EvilDawg,

I found the 2nd chapter to Outta Time. I should have favorites it, but hadn't so didn't know there were other chapters.

*Pencil* I have noted below where something might need editing. They will be edited and inside the ( and ).
flo(u)rescent
Lots of nouns were capped but need lowercase.
(v)oicemail
(time travel)
(Guard)
(key card)

I liked that you gave specifics about where Jim is and what he's focused on.
When mentioning I-10 (for example) you might want to add (Interstate 10) at least once so readers who aren't familiar with it will know what it means. Most Americans do, but maybe not foreigners.

There were a lot of 'he' words to several sentences in one paragraph. Try varying it by combining sentences or changing it.

Example beliw:

Getting out of the vehicle, in his peripheral vision he noted movement of a dark van in one of the corners of the structure. Or maybe there was no movent but just the glare in his eyes. (At the entrance he reached over and swiped his card key and gained entry.).
I just thought about something. This idea that he notices the black van can be foreshadowing only mentioned briefly. Therefore since it's mentioned you don't have to say anything else until later when you remember you didn't tell the sec officer. Readers do notice it but don't know why it's mentioned yet.

Now if you drop down an extra line space it will indicate a change-- that he's inside. You won't need to say it since we see through your characters eyes the structural changes.

Also your dialogue is spot on, but you need a line space between each set of dialogue when a new person speaks or does something.

The last sentence brings us to a little cliff hanger and we need to read the next exciting episode to find out where Jim is now.

Good job on this, despite little, easily fixed errors.

I felt like I was there. Coming from Big Bear down Cajon Pass, driving through traffic and ending up in L A. ( Oh you didn't mention Cajon Pass.

Anyway thanks for the read. You might want to provide a link to each next chapter at the bottom.

I look forward to the next one but since it's late here right now, I will check it out soon.



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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Linnann,

I happened to notice this story and gained interest as I read along.

There are a few errors, but nothing that can't be fixed easily if you wanted to. It's mostly comma errors. I edited my suggestions.
*Pencil*
YouÔÇÖd better go quickly to the great Wizard of Oz to help you(,) my dear!" cautioned Glenda.

Dorothy accompanied the portly, pint(-)sized mayor

"What do you mean(?)" gasped the Mayor(.)"
Removed the question mark, replaced it with a comma. and put the question mark after the word mean.

Here: but no one takes the red brick road!" Removed a.


I liked the choices of names for the Flylinx and how each name related to specific ones, therefore unique.

According to your prompt you have gave it an alternate ending and a positive one.

I could almost hear Dorothy speaking while reading the words. This all turned out nicely.

Please take what you wish of my review and ignore anything that you choose to.

Thanks for this fun and interesting read.





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Review of Embracing the Sky  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hello again, C Harris,

Here's another one and we see the thought processes through your words which reveals loss. At the same time there's an offer to protect and promote.

I saw no errors to fix in this piece.

It is a loving thing to do accept out of the choices given. Sometimes we learn to love someone from a distance.

Still the longing can be agonizing, but those memories are sweet and held sacred tucked within a heart.

Well thought out verse here and expressed in ways anyone can understand.

It helps to recognise what you hold dear. That may never change but sometimes change occurs for whatever reason and things just aren't the same, yet love is constant.

Thanks for sharing. Happy Easter!


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Review of There Was Me  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello C. Harris,

I'm not good at poetry, but I do know what I like.

The formatting looks good.

The thoughts expressed reveals sadness yet this soul has inner strength even when feeling weak.

There is longing for what was. Hope that one day things will feel and be better. Choices we have to make one step at a time .

God knows the heart and knows us so well. It's as if God lives within us and everywhere.

Things don't always happen the way we want, when we want, or where we want, but surely will come to be.

Thanks for sharing.

God Bless. And Happy Easter.



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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello W.D. Wilcox,

I saw that you had edited this item and had to have a look.

First let me say that I like these kind of stories. It reads like a noir detective story.

The first part of this sounds familiar but that might just be because I've read stories like this with characters like these. The characters have a distinct way of speaking and interacting. They are well developed characters, each being unique.

There was no way I could stop reading this until the finale. I enjoyed the wisecracking and comparisons.

The format looks good, dialogue reads well, and we got some vivid imagery.

This I had to read twice. My fault.

Trouble walked into my office in the shape of a dame with an hour glass figure and (enough mink) to keep the population of Russia warm throughout the winter.

Somehow I read it as (enough milk). I have no idea why. haha

There were a few words I wasn't too familiar with though. Here's one: bruno filled with Chicago lightening.

There's another, but considering the context I think it was a weapon.

Anyway, you have panache in this enjoyable read. It reminds me of one of my favorite writers who's writing it's concise, clever, and humorous at times.

If there are any errors, then I didn't notice them. I was too interested in what would happen next.

Thank you for sharing.



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Review of Your Eyes  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello crismiss,

I just noticed this in your port.

There's not anything I can say needs changing. This is perfect those way it is.

Formatting compliments this piece.

The words are so lovely that even I had that feeling inside thinking about the person I have loved since I ever knew him.

Very touching and happy piece.

Thank you for sharing.

Oh and I also live your choice of signature quote.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi QP doll,

I got a kick out of reading this. I had that uhoh feeling, yet the personas of these cats are hilarious as you portrayed them. At least nobody died. Haha

I read this part:
Eventually I see the door gradually open again. (I could almost hear the door creak open. Haha I'm thinking uhoh CujoKitty is on the loose again).

This was well written, timing was perfect and the actions felt real. I know quite well about the leg/ cat episode. I remember these feral kittens I tried to tame had decided my legs were trees to climb. Soon my legs lookedije pincushions minuses the pins!

Good read and well done. Loved it.
Thanks.




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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Patrece,

I just read this again bad I viewed it before and you are so right on. I totally get this.

I've been trying to get better organized and it's such a time-consuming process, but every little bit counts. I kind of feel like it's all a reflection of our life and how we feel inside.

I'm not happy with it, yet I've allowed my comfort zone expand out of necessity. I was very sick for a while and had hardly enough energy to get up out of my chair (because of pneumonia), so being less active was acceptable then, but now I feel like I should be able to handle this.

I manage just fine otherwise though. Paying bills. Cooking, cleaning, even working on my car and being caregiver for a sometimes difficult grown adult/child at home.

While reading this I realised the spring cleaning wasn't so much about the usual things but those other things we do t talk about much. Good point.

I didn't see any areas in this that needed editing.


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Review of The Beer Lesson  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Vesteria,

I noticed your request for a review so here I am.

Title: seems appropriate.
Premise: is believable.
Imagery: we have some good descriptions of where he is and what he's doing and what time of day it is.

*Idea* I kind of feel like we got an information dump rather than let us see things gradually as we go along.

However, if it adds a feeling to the scene it's needed.

Maybe the sun is so bright that a reflection shines off something in his room and into his eyes.

Maybe there's pollen in the air causing his eyes to water and making him sneeze.

His throat might be parched and drinking something shoukd help with the sneezing and dry throat. And so he heads out to the kitchen.

Any irritatant can add mood to the scene. Kind of like foreshadowing which is a great tool for bookending the scene or story.

*Pencil*
* You need to add a line space between paragraphs.

* I noticed a lot of sentences started with "He". You might like to change that part by combining sentences, which serves two purposes. It allows use of imagery, plus it shows him doing something. It makes your story more concise.

Here's what I mean. I added some corrections but didn't combine any sentences, which I mentioned. Just vary sentences so it's not rapid-fire same rythm sentences :

(He)sighed,rubbed his forehead to make the migraine disappear, but to no avail. (He) yawned, stretched in the rainbow-colored hard(-)back chair, and shut off the medium-sized silver and gray radio that rested on the right side of the desk. (He) flipped his dog-eared math book shut and stood up. He walked to his bedroom door, opened it, switched the light off, and walked across the second-floor hallway to the U-shaped stairs. Camden descended(.)

* Dad mentions meatloaf lunch, but previously in the story it was said that it was already in the the afternoon rather than mid-day.
Still, I like that they will prepare something together. Maybe this is where it could be mentioned briefly that Hilda (example name) is absent and out grocery shopping or whatever it is that she might do outside of the kitchen.

Comments: This is okay for a rough draft to just get the story idea down. Then edit it, revise, then if necessary edit it as many times as you need to.

If they live in a mansion wouldn't they have hired help (a chef or kitchen worker?) who might normally be in the kitchen, but for some reason they are not there? And so Camden is left to help himself.

What I liked:
A├Ě It's a strength that you know how to do dialogue correctly.

I liked the way Dad handles it. I thought grandad was a bit too harsh. Yes, he had a taste. He got curious. He even said he was sorry.
He's 14 (fourteen) years old, which is too young to drink, but he's curious about what the adult me are doing noticed his grandad does. Gramps isn't exactly setting an example, but hey he's an adult.

And it wasn't stealing, but you would think it was the idea that he got caught sampling his grandad's beer.
Labeling him a lifetime thief is rather unkind.

I guess there are crabby old grandpa's, but I'm betting there's some that would rather let them have a tiny sip in front of them, and once they do they wouldn't like it anyway.

Hope this helps.

Keep at it.





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Review of It's Over!  
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Rated: ASR | N/A (Review only item.)
Hello Ruwth,

I read this 55 word story about domestic violence. It is repetitive yet it changes as it repeats too yet some things stay the same.

Just like an suspect who is consistent in his M.O. (way of operating).

It makes you wonder what would ever break the cycle, except the abused one leaving with no contact whatsoever.

Some of these rascals are pretty clever at making you feel sorry for them,and just when you think things are looking well, suddenly they appear and you know they just won't leave you alone.
Seems kind of like an addiction to that behavior.

Anyway, you did a good job having a beginning middle. And end with only 55 words.

Other comments: Worse yet is when someone you trust betrays you by allowing then to know your whereabouts.

Been there done that. No fun at all.


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Rated: E | (4.0)

Hello Soul mates call

I found another item and here to give suggestions to make things more clear in your item.

Below are the suggestions and if don't agree feel free to ignore whatever part you don't like.

Have you ever been in love , how does that feels(?) Is it a good feeling or bad, (or) may be something between.

* was a housewife before and later worked as an assistant, giving a review on a book which somehow relates to her life. She also found her soulmate as the book continues while flipping through the pages.

There were more places where a word was missing. I'm thinking this might be because english might be a second language for the writer. I could be wrong.

Still the idea cones across to love all and appreciate all.

Thanks for sharing.





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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Soulmates call,

I saw your item on a wdc and decided to have a closer look.

The item gives a perspective about soulmates. It explains how people react and also that love lives on. It gives advice of what to know when you need to grieve and how to get through it. It's written fairly well, but some places needed editing to make it more clear. Here are my suggestions below.

You're welcome to take what works for you and ignore what doesn't.
***

First I noticed that your first paragraph is very long
I would break it up.

Next I noticed you didn't have a line space between some of the paragraphs.

Also here are places I felt needed changing:

*We all have someone within our lives, we never wanna want to be apart from

* No maters matter
who they are, we have close relationships with them.

* Relaxed in their company, We love to hang out, laugh,with them share our stories with them, and may sometimes share gossip too.

* (Aside from) that, there is a saying that a blind (person) does realize what great blessing eyesight is.

* you can not cannot change a thing when it's done, move backward time. If your ego is stopping you from doing this(,) let it sink. I know you wouldn't want to regret it later. Every day many people die and most of them don't not from disease history, but die suddenly. I pray you will stay forever with your

* (For) the ones who have lost someone special to

I liked reading this item although it had a few unclear areas that need a small change. These are easily fixed so I suggested a few things.

Thanks for sharing.


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Review of My cat Helga  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Light in Mind,

I just read your story about Helga. It was such fun to read about your family's experience with your highness. :*)

Several things in this had me smiling and laughing too.

I didn't see any errors if there were any. I was too engrossed in Helga's antics.

The name Barkie surely fits for the neighbor dog. Haha.

The bed thing sounds about right. My Yorkies used to sleep all over the bed. I had several. I was literally surrounded. What was a surprise was when I was sleeping in my back and apparently my mouth was hanging open and I felt something moving inside my mouth.

Slowly I was becoming aware but not fully. There it was again. My eyes popped open and there's one of my dogs, staring me I'm the face and inspecting my tonsils with her tongue!

I sat uptight trying not to spit on anyhing. God only knows where her tongue has been. Since then I sleep in my side so I might be a bit safer. I have a pom/chi who sleeps with me now and often I'm afraid to move since it might disturb her.

Sadly, I no longer have any of my Yorkies with me. Their lives seem so short compared to ours.

Oh. I thought I was the only one that had conversations with my dog. Of course, they didn't answer any questions, but shut their eyes or looked away as if they were above such things or having a food coma.

Anyway it this story looks good, except I would break it up into paragraphs. And put a line space between them.

Thanks for sharing.


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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Hello Alex,

I just read chapter one of your story.

I'm a bit confused about who is Allexir and Alleia is.

In some places Allexxar is a he. And some not. The names are too much the same also. I would change one so it's different.
We do get an idea of what they are there for but then some stranger comes along and shoots at one of them or did Allexxar shoot at him.

It's not clear what, who, and why this is happening . but I see a story trying to emerge here.

You use words like 'about to', 'started to'. That's past tense. It would be more immediate to choose a word that's present tense.

"What was that about?" Aleia featured toward the man sprawled on the ground."Who is this man?ÔÇŁ
I can't read any further because although the dialogue is formatted well. It's unclear who is doing what.

Thanks for sharing. Let me know if you make changes and I can have a second look and possibly raise the rating.


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Review of Losing you  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi write on,

This poem is truly a sad storeum of a lost love, yet there still is a yearning remaining for at least one.
Of all the things I have miss(ed) in life, not(h)ing can compare then (with) the thought of just losing you.


* There were parts that was a bit obscure.
Here:
know praying for hope can accomplish great worth(,) but the cruelty of sins only guarantees a living death.

* the above sounds like regret. Praying definitely helps, but without action things can grow stagnant.

*Bulletp* A voice of dreadful history can serve
no purpose to an ear that does not want to hear anymore.

* Are you sure she doesn't want to hear?

I feel the frustration. It's as if the person feels stuck and can't see to move through this one way or another. It sounds like change needs to happen so neither has to live in misery.

What I liked most about this is the expression of hurt, sadness, but the unrequited love. Yet this one loves regardless. Many people can relate to that for one reason or another.

Most people eventually change either by breaking it off and returning to whatever brought them happiness they had before, but some hold on for many years. Life is meant to be shared with a mutual long lasting love.

I'm giving this 4 stars mainly because of the expression. It has errors but those can be easily fixed. If you revise it, lete know.

Thanks for the read.


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Review of Losing you  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi write on,

This poem is truly a sad storeum of a lost love, yet there still is a yearning remaining for at least one.

* There were parts that was a bit obscure.
Here:
know praying for hope can accomplish great worth(,) but the cruelty of sins only guarantees a living death.

* the above sounds like regret. Praying definitely helps, but without action things can grow stagnant.

*Bulletp* A voice of dreadful history can serve
no purpose to an ear that does not want to hear anymore.

* Are you sure she doesn't want to hear?

I feel the frustration. It's as if the person feels stuck and can't see to move through this one way or another. It sounds like change needs to happen so neither has to live in misery.

What I liked most about this is the expression of hurt, sadness, but the unrequited love. Many people can relate to that for one reason or another.

Most people eventually change either by breaking it off and returning to whatever brought them happiness they had before, but some hold on for many years. Life is meant to be shared with a mutual long lasting love.

Thanks for the read.




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Review of Cooper  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello write on,

I noticed this in your port and I'm here to read and review. Please use what you wish of what I shared and ignore the rest. It is your story to tell.

*Pencil*

roam thrashing in too (into the) remaining (maybe--rapidly instead of remaining) declining daylight.

*Bulletp* clearly such a eventful evening when Cooper(,) the old blood hound(,) decided without thought

*Bulletp* Do you hear old Cooper(?) Look(!)
Can't you see his flashing nose light out there?"

(I'm not sure what a nose light is. Maybe Cooper had on one of those flashing dig collars on.)

*Bulletp* There were several places that needed commas.

But also I felt there were many areas using two descriptive words for one thing. It's okay unless you do this too often. Try using one word part of the time to describe whatever it is.

For example--into the rapidly declining daylight could be (into the twilight). as it says more with one word.

*Bulletp* also you spelled (folklore) as fork lore a few times.

As we saw Cooper explore the area then return to a familiar place. We also saw a beginning, middle, and end to your stoy.

*Idea* With just a few touches this will be a even better story.

Thank you for sharing.


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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Queen Owl,

I thought I might drop by your portfolio to see if I might find something to read and review. This one caught my eye.

First, I'd like to say the formatting looks good with appropriate line spacing between paragraphs.

The sentence length and rythm makes it easy for anyone to read and understand

The premise is a real one and one that anybody can relate to.

*Pencil* There were a few errors or areas I thought might need revision.

Here:
At this point, I refused to give them my SS# and I was arguing with the (M)anager in my refusal. I have heard enough about (I)dentity (T)hief (I think you meant identity theft. Uncapped)

There's a lot of places where words were capitalsed but used the way it is should be uncapped.

I just wanted to say that Dean Winchester is a character in the tv series Supernatural.

I get scams often usually it's somebody sounding like they're native language is of India. Somehow they'd gotten my phone number when I had a computer (more than likely through Google).

At first I thought it was a joke but they kept calling a out it having 32 viruses.

When I wouldn't let them have access they started threatening me saying I would be arrested. And somebody was coming to my home right now.

I tried shaming them, I tried telling them I have no computer.

Finally, I told them I'd report them to the authorities. I even thought about buying a whistle for when they call to blow into the phone. I didn't though. No way we're they going to scam me out of money.

I heard these people are not even in the usa so it's harder to prosecute them. They work as a group.

To this day I still get people sending me text messages trying to give me money or send a package and even their spelling sucks. So you can tell they are t legit. I delete and ignore them. They use another number and I block it. It never stops. The best we can do is be aware of these information thieves. And not give them anything they can use against us.

That being said your shared experience reveals these tricksters.

Thanks for sharing.


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Hello Sinbad

I just read your item.
This is excellent and can apply to just about anyone.

It's not always easy to stay strong but we can also accept that we are imperfectly perfect.

I wish I could print this out but have no way to do that.

Just today someone was talking about a relative that had said b why me?

And blamed others for thier dilemma.

As for your item there are no errors and it's perfect the way it is.

Thanks for sharing.


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