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Review by ~SilverMoon~
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Max,

I just read your story "Three o'clock in the morning" .

I found your experience interesting. You're right about the quiet. When it's so quiet, any tiny noise seems amplified. I remember that from when we camped out in the redwoods of Big Basin State Park.

I can see how being thorough on the job means paying attention to detail.


You have some vivid imagery in this item. It helps the reader see more fully where we are and what's going on.

The part about the wailing woman, I kind of figured it might be a fox. We had a that echoing down our street here one early morning. Yep, possibly 3 a.m.

At first I ignored it, but it seemed to get louder and I seriously thought maybe some woman was being abused. I felt ashamed that something horrible might be happening I would have felt guilty if I hadn't at l ast tried to do something. I hurridly threw some clothes and shoes on and ran out the door. I wondered why nobody seemed to care that somebody obviously on pain.

After walking across the street I drew near to the area where a creek bed came down off a hill. The sounds stopped. Only a barking dog was heard. I was puzzled with the quiet. Then I saw it. Movement in the shadows, I could make out a form. It was 4 legged. My thoughts were. Oh God. Why did I come out here? Am I going to die because some wild animals is hungry?

My thoughts were confirmed as the animal came out of the shadows, while watching me. I stood still so as to not seem like a threat. It trotted away further up the street and disappeared. Later, I found out that they do that when it's breeding season. They call for their mate.

*Pencil* I noticed that your sentences did go all the way to the right margins. I think this would read better if it did.

There were a few problem spots which can easily be fixed. I would suggest reading it out loud and notice if there's any awkward sentences. Maybe it's just a duplicate word.

I also think it needs to be broken up into paragraphs.

Good job.


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Review of Black Ice  
Review by ~SilverMoon~
In affiliation with Dream Team HQ  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Critical Mass,

I just took a look at your item. And now will review it. I don't always read the longer ones unless it's got my attention and I just can't stop myself because it's got me hooked. I must read more to see what happens next. Yours did that, regardless of areas which I felt needed a little editing.

Kindly keep in mind that these are only my suggestions. It's up to you how you wish your story to read. Feel free to use them if you wish, and disregard what's not working for you.

*Idea* I would reword and combine these two sentences as you used the words 'the storm' twice.
Here's your version:
The storm had started without warning that night and increased quickly in ferocity. The storm formed and built in strength over Lake Ontario.

*Pencil*
The storm over Lake Ontario had started without much warning that night. It had formed, and increased in strength.

* Less words more concise. Maybe something like that. You also might add a few signs of concern in the driver's eyes, or the way he leans forward. You want the tension to build slowly, but also show the beginnings of stress without actually saying it.

* Liked: this sentence below explains that this type of weather is pretty much the norm. It helps that we know where this driver is at. Good job.
This is one of Upstate New York’s Lake effect snowstorm

Here I'd start the new paragraph and add the comma as shown below:
The gears of the 18-wheeler whined like a creature with a mortal wound, as the big truck crept its way to the top of the hill.

* Later on your descriptions of the truck noises are vivid. I can imagine it. That too builds the tension. Bodily changes, sweat, the wiping of a brow, white knuckling the steering wheel, maybe muscles threatening to knot up into cramps. cold sweats. Etc.

*Nice imagery
Below I will add or x out what I think this needs. Also go ahead and use I, my, sentences rather than 'the driver'. Pretend you're telling your friend what happened to you. :

He could feel The muscles in my shoulders and neck felt like twisted, knotted bands of steel.

Show the tension rather than tell.

Why not use first person? Words such as I. It makes it close up and feel even more real. Later on, you mentioned how you ended up with this job, yet we didn't know at first.

When you have the person or character thinking or remembering, usually writers use italics. This is how you do it.
{I}I‘m gonna die!{/I}

It will look like this:
I‘m gonna die!

There are a few places where you need commas. Best thing to do is read it out loud like you normally speak. Whenever you briefly pause us where you put a comma.

Also you need to break this up into more paragraphs.

You can indicate a change of time or place by adding two line spaces after the previous paragraph.

Overall you did a good job. I definitely could identify with the fear and white knuckling it. I wrote a true story about a white out on the highway between Wellington, Colorado and Cheyenne, Wyoming. Believe me. I was saying my prayers, all while trying to keep my wits and reassure my passengers.

I'll add a link to it below, if you'd like to take a look.

You're doing well for just posting your first story. Keep at it. You really do have a gift.

 
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White Out, Cheyenne, Wyoming  (13+)
A fictionalized scary real life experience.
#1961599 by ~SilverMoon~




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Review by ~SilverMoon~
In affiliation with Dream Team HQ  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello Stoneheart,

This starts off well and we see some action and start to get a fell for this first and second character. It raises its own story questions.

*Pencil* Why do they always smell just of cabbage?,’ he thought absently.

To indicate thoughts we normally use italics. {I}Why do they always smell of cabbage?{/I}. No need for quotes.

* Which looks like this
Why do they always smell of cabbage?

I did see where it needed some commas. Mostly it was at the beginning of sebtwnces. Read the sentence out loud and notice where you pause and that's where you put a comma.

Other than that I didn't notice any errors.

It looks like you labeled it in the correct genres.

For some reason, I think I may have read this story beginning before, yet I didn't review it for some reason.

This doesn't allow me that not rate it. So I have it 4 5. I can relate it later if you like.


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Review by ~SilverMoon~
In affiliation with Dream Team HQ  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Yesmrbill,

I just read your story. "Johnny’s Little Pistol" .

The introduction peaks my interest as we see what is happening up to this point and the war is over.

Your use of words, actions, and personfication, brings this to life in a way that is unique. The derringer seems to have a mind of its own, yet really, Johnny is in charge to carry out the mission. Or is he?

*Pencil*
I think you needed two commas here:

My owner(,) Johnny(,) stands on

*Pencil*
Here is another area needing commas and uncap of actor.

She probably assumes that Johnny(,) the actor(,) is rehearsing lines for a different play.

Almost anyone knows if Abraham Lincolns death and circumstance, yet your story shows it in a way, without laying blame for his death.

It is an historical event but because the weapon used is personified, we see this without any bias, except for the guns point if view. That's okay, as it's a work of a combination of fiction/ realism.

I enjoyed reading this story for its artistic style.

Thanks for sharing.





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Review by ~SilverMoon~
In affiliation with Dream Team HQ  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hello Intuey,

Here I am again. You have such interesting items in your port. It's becoming one of my favorite places to be.

This one resonates with me. I totally get what you're saying about how things can accumulate and build a wall which is hard for well meaning people to get through. Yet we can never be sure they are well-meaning considering we found out that some who seem like it, aren't.
Still, we can't judge everyone by what some other person chooses to do either.

We do hurt ourselves in 5hevpr8v3ss yet we have to draw the line somewhere.

Loved this piece you shared. Thank you. :*)


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Review by ~SilverMoon~
In affiliation with Dream Team HQ  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hi Intuit,

I just read this story about Willy. I liked how adventurous Willy was, although it had to be worrisome for the owners. Little Willie out there in the world alone, unconcerned, yet harvesting the cornfields and getting into whatever other mischiefhe can.

The part where the teens thought they had Willy captured, bought tension, changed fast and felt real. As anyone knows, corralling goats can be tricky. At least they tried.

*Pencil* Here is where it appears Willie had a sex change while out and about-- Evidently, (she?) had circled
around...

Aside from 5hay I saw no problems. Still an interesting story and fun to read. Too bad Willy can't plan another escape. It might be interesting to see where it leads him.


That last sentence tied everything together. And was funny.
Thanks for the read and laugh.



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Review by ~SilverMoon~
In affiliation with Dream Team HQ  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello again, Ghelatlishol,

Here I am again looking in your port to see what other gifts you've left for us to marvel at. :*)

This short story, although brief, is powerful as these two women interact.

The straighting if the placement indicates

There's an underlying feeling between them. And a secret, it seems.

When Lena touches her stomach, it seems there's more going on than what's obvious.


This part though: without a thought straightened out the placemat in front of her, aligning it parallel to the table’s edge.

Her body language seems to send a message, and that she's there to straighten something out other than the placemat.

Am I right? Ir maybe I'm wrong.

Lena though, she's got her own secret-+ maybe she's carrying someone's baby. She's carrying some dead guys baby? Hmm.

Wonderful job with this. And brie yet revealing.

Write in.


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Review by ~SilverMoon~
In affiliation with Dream Team HQ  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Ghelatlishol,

Yep, I had to copy your name it if totally misspell it. Anyway, I like this idea for a prompt. It really makes you focus.

You did a good job using the prompt for such a short story.

I liked how you gave us the list of words to be used to create an interesting story with a beginning, middle, and end.

* Except I think it needed one more word. See below.
The imagery was spot on. The chirping crickets can be loud while you're waiting.

Especially Liked this part:
You'd be surprised (at?) how loud the sound of chirping crickets can be when you're waiting for someone to meet you at the park at sunset.

Thanks for sharing. It was fun to read.




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Review of Pin Bear  
Review by ~SilverMoon~
In affiliation with Dream Team HQ  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello tracker,

Wow, you do have quite a collection of pins.

I like that you had a few pictures to share. The Route 66 one caught my eye. Nice. Now you need a Grand Canyon pin, or maybe a Big Basin State Park one. It's fabulous. Huge redwood trees are all over the place. We camped there.

I saw no errors in this and it was fun to read it.

Thanks for sharing.



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Review by ~SilverMoon~
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello strlcuckoo.

I'm not sure what form this is as far as poetry but it looks like there's some joy in the expression.
And if it's true, congratula
The formatting works great. I saw no errors in this item.

Thanks for sharing.


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Review by ~SilverMoon~
In affiliation with Dream Team HQ  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello Dave Ryan,

I just read "Invalid Entry" .

The first few lines has me curious as I wonder what makes this person's day agonizing and I have to read more to find out.

I'm not sure why he's wear wearing the clothing, because it brings him shame and is agonizing.

Maybe he's forced to wear it or has to for other reasons.

Anyway,you stayed focused in sharing this story.


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Review of The Sandman  
Review by ~SilverMoon~
In affiliation with Dream Team HQ  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Ned,

I just read "The Sandman" 

This is well written and easy to understand. The action is rising action is timed well, and plus you have some good dialogue.

The premise is believable. I bet things like that happen often in real life.

That extra touch for the ending makes it more interesting after she realizes just what's going on.

I liked the imagery and descriptions of the lady in the shop, plus it was a smooth transition to even further action.

Sometimes less is more. There was enough details.

Thanks so much for sharing for this fun read.


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Review of Bears  
Review by ~SilverMoon~
In affiliation with Dream Team HQ  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Referring to: "Bears" 

Hello Queen Norma Jean,

I just noticed your item and am here to review it.

I certainly can relate to losing things. We lost a camera before at the Miami Seaquarium. We didn't get it back though.

And at least you found yours, but also got to see the bears mimicking humans.i can imagine that. They could easily pick up a tankard , tapped eacotheres before drinking the liquid down.
;*P

Thanks for sharing.





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Review of Paying The Bill  
Review by ~SilverMoon~
In affiliation with Dream Team HQ  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hello Dave Ryan,

For such a short story, you did quite well showing the predicament that this couple was in.

It reveals these shady individuals taking advantage of this couple.

The characters felt real. The imagery was just enough too.

I may have let Rays struggle become more apparent. Maybe they'd almost knock him unconscious and between his moments of blurred clarity he'd see those guys forcing her to go with them to do their deed. His condition would show that although he wished he could stop it,bhe couldn't.

Yet, if there's an issue because of limited word count, maybe you couldn't.

*Pencil*. There was a need for commas after the introductory clauses.


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Review of November  
Review by ~SilverMoon~
In affiliation with Dream Team HQ  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Maggie,
Just read your poem "November" .

What a wonderful way too pay tribute to your mother. Mothers truly show their love and care daily.


Favorite parts:

*I know this feeling-- Now the drops that are falling are like tears.(referring to rain)
It was very fitting for me in my own experience as the police came drive away leaving my mother behind with other policemen.

* And I can see you have not gone,
While my heart is gently fooled by dream’s beguile.

Other comments: I found no errors that needed fixing. It's oerfect just the way it is. Take comfort and know that whoever her soul is her love surrounds you.


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Review of The Last Date  
Review by ~SilverMoon~
In affiliation with Dream Team HQ  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello John,

I just read "The Last Date"  and I'm here to give it a review.

I liked:

* how we first see where our focus should be. The lone woman, her attire, he expression or lack of. It creates a few story questions, and so we must read more.

* The imagery creates a mood, and a sense of empathy in the driver.

* at the mention of the quilt, it made me think of the song by Dolly Parton called Coat of many Colors. The story gives off the same vibe, and so almost anyone can relate 5o it.

*Pencil* Found an error here:

* it was then that I noticed (that)the blanket was a a hand-made quilt

* front passenger side door(,) gesturing

* The mention of the holiday decorations creates a sense of 8mbalance. It's a time of joy and celebration. It's festive and you see that this woman has living within her own emotions. Although she's not clearly aware, she holds close to what's dear to her heart. Perhaps the soul never forgets.

* It's amazing that she spoke, yet, being safe and warm has to have helped a lot.

I must admit that at first glance I wondered why no dialogue was included. If the deaf person can't hear, and the. Other person doesn't know that, the lady could use dialogue. And maybe the driver nods now and then.

* around to my door, got back in, and began to drive drove toward Mercy West, the nearest hospital

* Here was a hint of why there was no speech. It was subtle but later we understand. Although I might have changed the word spoke, maybe-- shared the information I could give.

While I spoke, the quilt sat in my lap and when I listened, my hands rested on top.

Comments: I have to say that while reading this story my eyes filled up and spilt over, for this woman's plight but also the kindness of the driver and the humanity of it.

This was an interesting story, one that expresses the emotions in ways that can be understood.
The ending was perfect. Sophia had her quilt. And the last day was added to the square on the quilt.

Just a 4hought. Since the driver kept the quilt but also knew the names of the husband and children, maybe this story could be expanded into continuance of it. Maybe new things could happen and we still could get to know Sophia's history an her family, and how things were before any of this happened.

Thanks such for sharing.



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Review of A Message  
Review by ~SilverMoon~
In affiliation with Dream Team HQ  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Thomas Seeker,

I finally found another item that. I hadn't reviewed before.

What stands out for me in this piece is "one person at a time".
As I go through my daily activities, I might be rushed, or even irritated. I might wonder why some people are allowed to have a drivers license, when they are not driving with care.

It might not even be a particular person that seems to be causing me stress. Yes,I started to blame others.

For example;

While driving in San Francisco, I might ask myself, "Why on earth are there so many 'No left turn' and 'No u-turn signs'? Why do I have to drive for mile just so I can get out of traffic and turn around to go in the right direction?"l

It is what it is. Deal with it. Still it's stressful.

Truth is everyone has their issues and reasons for what they do or what they do about something.

Free choice, right?

Well, the mind is a very powerful thing. It can create and build on it or it can destroy.

Right now I'm not sure how this relates but it seems to.

Anyway your item is food for thought.

* There may have been errors in this, but I was more involved with hoping I understood the message.


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Review by ~SilverMoon~
In affiliation with Dream Team HQ  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Angus.

How are you doing? I just read this portion of your story. I'm not sure how I never read your items, unless I did and just don't remember. I'm fond of westerns.

Anyway,I liked the characters in this. We can imagine the crowd watching this man about to get hanged.

We gradually watch the process as he gets closer and closer to the end.

But then it felt like something happened but yet not quite so obvious.

Maybe this is just a beginning and there's more. Maybe not. Maybe it just took longer than expected. He killed several men, just not sure why other than they shot first. So it does create a story question.

Good format in this, and use of imagery. It's created a mood. Plus were seeing what this man is feeling.

Good read. Thanks for sharing. Now I will have to read more of your items. :*)

Thanks for sharing.

Hope you are doing well.


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Review of Whispers of Hope  
Review by ~SilverMoon~
In affiliation with Dream Team HQ  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Nicely done Spiritual Dawning,

I'd like to think the people. All people 4ather were angelic. But I'm afraid not always are. It's part of the human experience I soppose.

Anyway, your poem is one of hope for me. There are plenty of people in America that are wonderful people. They're not always as visible as the rest.

I would say Jesus knows you hest and loves you without you having to ask.

Thanks for sharing this poem.
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Review by ~SilverMoon~
In affiliation with Dream Team HQ  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello PB Curtis,

Welcome back. I'm not sure if I know you. I had changed names a few times, plus left WDC for six months or a year, and then came back.

Anyway, I read your story-- Sins of thy Father.

I was drawn in quickly for several reasons. It has to do with a testimony I saw on YouTube. It was about a man who had been severely abused when he was a trusting 13 year old. The story gets increasingly interesting. The things he'd gone through because of it,was sad. He hadn't before this time ever told anyone as he was told to not to. There was shame involved. And he carried it with him.

I'm not sure if there's a book about it. There might be because after so many years, things changed. And probably everyone across the USA saw the end result of it on the news. Somebody died. IIl not go into it here as it would make this review a mile long or so.

* Anyway, I understand the fear, when things get out of control. You're story reflects that. It's something that many can relate to.

I liked how in your story the bully ended up getting his butt kicked good. Nobody thought you'd be able to defend yourself.

I like that you had dialogue. I like that you helped yourself gain confidence by learning self defence.

*Pencil* This does need some paragraphing. With a line space between each paragraph.

With a little editing, this would be even better.

Thanks for sharing.


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Review of I COME TO YOU  
Review by ~SilverMoon~
In affiliation with Dream Team HQ  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Cowboy,

Noticed your item in your portfolio.

I like it. Nicely done with rhyming and each line with it's unique expression.

It also has this soulful sense to it. It's deep. It speaks of things that are seen and felt.

I saw nothing that needed editing or revising. Good job.


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Review by ~SilverMoon~
In affiliation with Dream Team HQ  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Here by His Grace,

Just read your item. I like it. It's so true too. At least that's my opinion.

Anyway I like how you organized and expressed thus v

I saw no errors or anything needing editing
Thanks for sharing.


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Review by ~SilverMoon~
In affiliation with Dream Team HQ  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Pure Poetry,

Ah this poem has a nice format. It looks good on the page.
Flowers can be such delicate little ones or bigger but either way they are each uniquly created.

I didn't see anything that needed. Hanging. Thisciten is as perfect as it can be.

Anyway, you're appreciation if it's beauty is no e to see. And it's expressed well.

Thanks for sharing.

Have a blessed day.


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Review of The Fog  
Review by ~SilverMoon~
In affiliation with Dream Team HQ  
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Hello the day,

I noticed your work called The Fog in your portfolio and got curious. I'm here to read and review it.

Title: fitting to the contents of the story

* This item has a lot of imagery at the beginning that lets the reader see the surroundings and helps us know what is going on.

Content:

I really needed to know more about why this guy was there. Did he just buy this house unseen? or was it a case of he got hired by the company and they paid for his relocation? This might explain how he'd never seen the house.

*Pencil* What I noticed that needs attention:

*Pencil* Split up the introduction more paragraphs and add a line space between each set

Also dialogue needs to show each character's actions and dialogue separately. By use of line space between each of them.

Use dialogue tags only when characters first talk, then you don't need the tags afterward. Just line space between each set by each character.

Run spell check as there are some areas that need editing.

*Idea* In some places you used nouns like ' my car' but it would enhance your story if you use pronouns like--my blue Volvo.

Or instead of moving truck use whatever moving truck company was used there e🤣example the Three Amigos moving truck.

The piece was quite long so it took quite a while to see where it was going. But that one neighbor at least brought up an issue concerning the fog.

Later on the scenario and imagery seemed realistic.

I hope these suggestions help. With just a bit more editing this piece will be much more easier to read.

Thanks for sharing.




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Review of Vic, A Film  
Review by ~SilverMoon~
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Pumpkin in Eastertide,

I just read Vic, A Film. I was interested from the start, but then you mentioned Clu Gulager. And I was more interested. I didn't know he passed away. Sometimes I was too busy with college or home issues that I didn't watch the news much.

I met Clu one time at Universal Studios. My son and I had never been there before and there Clu was looking fine as ever. He greeted us but he had several people talking to him then a young girl too. Possibly a teenager.

This film sounds interesting. I'll have to look it up. Also the name Stallone makes me wonder if he's related to Sylvester. Sylvester I'd seen on the Main street on palm Springs. My husband and I and my young son was walking one way, and he passed by us with his bodyguards. He actually looks better in real life. And shorter.

Getting back to the film. Sounds like Sage did a great job with it.


I didn't notice any errors in this item. Thanks for sharing this info.


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