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Review by DNAN
Rated: E | (5.0)
would make a great children's story, with illustrations and all.
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Review of A Shower of Tears  
Review by DNAN
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
The story ends, with the reader wanting more, or some conclusion.
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for entry "REVELATION
Review by DNAN
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
"Revelation" reads smooth and easy. It doesn't come across as a strained translation.
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Review by DNAN
Rated: E | (4.5)
Thanks for the article and advice. One question I have, though, is that bold font looks so much better. It's distinctive and easier to read than regular letters. Why not write in bold font? Is this your opinion, or an industry standard? Also, I wrote a whole book, with spaces between paragraphs, and no indent. Plus, it's written in bold font. What do I do now?
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Review by DNAN
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
wow, good piece.
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Review by DNAN
Rated: E | (4.5)
good way to get writers to mix and help out each other
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Review by DNAN
Rated: E | (4.5)
I suffer from addiction also. You've well captured the feelings involved.
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Review of Et Tu, Brutus  
Review by DNAN
Rated: E | (4.5)
honest and powerfull.
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Review by DNAN
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
The essay flowed along. There were no attempts to be "profound", which I appreciate.
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Review by DNAN
Rated: E | (4.5)
You noticed that too! Six pair turn into twelve separate ones!
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Review by DNAN
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
entertaining, and concise.
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Review by DNAN
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
interesting idea, forbidden writings.
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Review by DNAN
Rated: E | (4.5)
lilting writing, almost a melody.
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Review by DNAN
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Nice precept, a different style and subject to write about.
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Review by DNAN
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
You invited me to read more of your work, after "Aunt Diana", so I did. You've put a lot of work into your blog site. Are you published? Are you trying to be? I'm getting discouraged. Agents don't even want to look at my work, much less reject it after they've seen it.
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Review of Storygaming  
Review by DNAN
Rated: E | (4.5)
sounds like how "Naked Came the Stranger" was produced.
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Review by DNAN
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
interesting story precept
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Review of Big Daddy  
Review by DNAN
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I liked how it read...it flowed along.
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Review by DNAN
Rated: E | (4.5)
I feel your pain...Your writings speak of some emotional tragedy, especially for one so young. Dave (dnan)
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Review of Is This Real?  
Review by DNAN
Rated: E | (4.5)
I too went through the "dark night of the soul" you describe. The walls we build to guard our emotional wounds work to keep out any healing love. Dave.
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