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Review by Destiny
Rated: E | (5.0)
Huh, London? That is freaking cool! I live in boring freaking Alabama, but I'll get out one day. I understand what you mean about finding time to write. I'm using a school computer as well and I'm being home schooled because of the pandemic here. Summer break starts tomorrow so I will probably never use this site ever again after today. I glad your depression is kind of getting better. I guess that's all I commented on this for was to tell you that. I know from experience the going through this must be hard but one way or the other, it will stop hurting after a while. I know you have probably been told this from a hundred other people but, god loves you so he isn't making you suffer for no reason. He has a plan so just remember, the pain won't last to much longer. :) Have a good life -Destiny Nickelson.
Ps. here's all of my points, sense Im never going to use them. :)
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Review of Dear Me  
Review by Destiny
Rated: E | (5.0)
Me loves this and me thinks that you are a great writer!
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Review of Random shit  
Review by Destiny
Rated: E | (4.0)
hardy har har
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Review of Redeeming Act  
Review by Destiny
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I love this! great writing!
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Review of Haunted Castle  
Review by Destiny
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
I like this, there is a very nice flow to the story.
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Review by Destiny
Rated: E | (5.0)
Short but nice. I like the writing style.
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Review of The passage.  
Review by Destiny
Rated: E | (3.5)
very good!
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Review of Dragon Bound  
Review by Destiny
Rated: E | (3.5)
I really liked this

Its had a strong main idea and you really brought the characters to life.

There is only one thing that I see that you could improve.

First, it helps if you skip line's like I am doing here.

Second, there should be an indention at the beginning of each paragraph.

Over all, this was a great read for me! :)
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Review of Horizons  
Review by Destiny
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Very nice
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Review of A Very Good Day  
Review by Destiny
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very nice
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Review of Shadow Girl.  
Review by Destiny
Rated: E | (5.0)
Loved this, keep writing
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Review by Destiny
Rated: E | (3.0)
Wow, great story
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Review of Footprints  
Review by Destiny
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is very good. I liked it!
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Review of Lizard?  
Review by Destiny
Rated: E | (3.0)
Interesting...
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Review of A Soul to Save  
Review by Destiny
Rated: E | (4.5)
Wow, this writing is incredible! I loved the rhyming and the way the poem is built. Impeccable! :)
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Review of The Door  
Review by Destiny
Rated: E | (4.0)
impeccable writing. I wonder, what caused this amount of greif?
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Review by Destiny
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I like this, more or so. Something that caught my eye was that you ended the whole thing with a question. That was genius. I gave your readers space to use there own imagination. I cant wait to read the rest of it. *Hint *Hint :)
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Review of Naruto again  
Review by Destiny
Rated: E | (5.0)
Okay, I guess Im reviewing all of your work. lol. So, I like this one because It expresses all of Mara's feelings and emotions as the story escalates. Also, I think I have already mentioned something about this, but maybe you could write another story that tells about Negi and Mara after this story ends. You know? Like, what happened's with their relationship? And do they stay together? That what be great! Keep Writing, your good.
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Review by Destiny
Rated: E | (5.0)
Your words expressed this impressively. I. Loved. This! Keep writing!
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Review by Destiny
Rated: E | (3.5)
You executed your words well but Im a little confused on whats going on, if it was not for the title I would be utterly lost on what your trying to discuss. Other than that I loved to way you expressed your words.
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Review by Destiny
Rated: E | (3.5)
This is so sweet. I love your writing technique.
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Review of Sides  
Review by Destiny
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
This is great!!!
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Review by Destiny
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
haha funny love it!!!
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Review by Destiny
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I think this is really cool although Im a little confused, can you explain a little bit of whats going on to help my understanding? I write fan fics all the time so I think that this would be super awesome if I knew whats going on, you know?
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