J.S. Downing's (doomsday106) Reviews

You know, in Canada we still prefer Tobogganing in a lot of places. I was definitely always the one egging the other kids on to stand up, or go backwards. Sadly, my brother was often the one to take the fall haha. Nice piece!

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Review of Truthsayer Chapter One

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

Interesting read!

It took me a minute to realize his inner dialogue(or was that his moral compass?). I am curious to see where it leads, and if it is indeed him talking to himself, a third party or entity, or perhaps the narrator himself.

Regardless it is a good hook with intriguing possibilities! Well done!

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Review of Anger

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

I wasn't expecting that ending! Well written :) I have trouble writing short pieces like that, but this is a perfect template for me to refer to! Well done!

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Review of The Longer Road

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

The muddied roads of good and evil are long indeed :) well written piece!

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Review of Yasoo

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

Nice poem! I like the way the Greek language sounds, I actually use a bit of it in my book haha. Well done!

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Review of Day and Night

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

This is definitely the best poem I've read today! Very gritty, and I felt the futility you were trying to convey. Well done!

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Review of Nothing To Be Afraid Of

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

Lol! Good sense of humor. Very simple scene, but good practice nonetheless. You could start a snow witch anthology :)

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Review of Jessica Kate

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

I love these types of poetry. Simple and silly, but clearly you are very in love with your little ones :)

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Review of s c a r e d . . . .

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

Well written! I feel for you. Sometimes things must be broken or they will never change. One had to first break the marble that became the statue of David, or no one would have ever seen the beauty of the possibility within.

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Review of The Performance

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

I like it! The parallels between the scene and your feelings are well illustrated. Very introspective - well done!