*Magnify*
SPONSORED LINKS
BY ONLINE AUTHORS
Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/profile/reviews/dragondawn/sort_by/r.review_creation_time DESC/page/1
Review Requests: ON
305 Public Reviews Given
305 Total Reviews Given
Public Reviews
Previous ... -1- 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 ... Next
1
1
In affiliation with Flights of Fantasy Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
This poem was quite incredibly clever. The only reason it's not a 5 is because you completely made up words just to continue the rhyming. However, I do get that this was more or less required. Well, on to the positive stuff. I loved how this was a Halloween take of the classic Christmas rhyme. I also loved the content scenes such as the dancing skeletons. Then of course there is the fact that you gave a nod to the Charlie Brown Halloween special. There is just a lot to love about this item. Keep writing!


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
2
2
In affiliation with Flights of Fantasy Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
This was a very good entry! I loved the description of both objects and actions alike. The story itself flowed rather nicely. I could easily picture all that you wrote in my mind. I do however have some questions. Was this item a result of a prompt because it certainly felt like it. The ending felt a little off. Aside from the words being in bold, the use of that particular phrase didn't make much sense to me. The story also feels like it is missing something. I can't seem to identify what though.


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
3
3
In affiliation with Flights of Fantasy Group  
Rated: E | (3.0)
This was a nice poem and I enjoyed the subject matter. However, in my opinion, the work was rather average. This is not to say it was not well done though. Quite the contrary in fact. The rhyming was really well done. I also think it was the perfect length. It was long enough to obtain a nice "meaty" structure without it feeling like the words were just rambling on. It is quite difficult for me to find anything wrong. If I had to make a critique then I'd say that some of the wording felt rather redundant.


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
4
4
Review of The Whisper  
In affiliation with Flights of Fantasy Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
This was an interesting, albeit a long read. Emotions are obviously a big part of how you retain the readers attention. Your descriptions felt extremely relistic. I almost felt like I was there witnessing the tragedy myself. This was a great item to get lost in. Keep up the good work!


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
5
5
In affiliation with Flights of Fantasy Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This was a very sweet poem indeed! These days it is much more common to have online friends. While there are definitely dangers, that doesn't mean you can't find true blue friends. During my Discord role play days I made some really great ones myself! One of them would even pester me to go to sleep if I got too wrapped up in chatting! The hallmark of a true friend is not what they do in your physical presence, but their intangible vibe you begin to know which knows no barriers or boundaries. This poem was a case in point.


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
6
6
Review of Facebook Photos  
In affiliation with Flights of Fantasy Group  
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
This was an interesting read. My favorite part was how you portrayed the dangers involved in using Facebook. You made it very easy to understand just how powerful it can be & how easily it can be turned against you. I also liked how the story had an open ending allowing the reader to image how things worked out.


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
7
7
Review of Seventeen  
In affiliation with Flights of Fantasy Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
It is wonderful to know that you got to see one of the best joys in life for your friends. This was a wonderful little poem. I am rather curious where the number seventeen came from. Was this a result from a prompt? Was the number seventeen meaningful in some way?


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
8
8
In affiliation with Fantastical Review- Aider  
Rated: E | (3.0)
I think you should have added Star Wars to the list.
9
9
In affiliation with Fantastical Review- Aider  
Rated: E | (4.0)
This felt like a very honest telling of a dark part of your life. I want to commend you on your courage for writing this down, even though it was emotional and painful to bring up. On another note, I thought it interesting that the Cherokee were mentioned because that's the tribe of my great great grandma. I hope you are doing and feeling better.


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
10
10
Review of Five Points  
In affiliation with Fantastical Review- Aider  
Rated: 13+ | (2.5)
This was... confusing. I have no clue why the title is "Five Points". I'm also stumped as to how all the cancellations fit into the context of the poem. For that matter, I'm lost as to what the poem's subject is entirely. A brief explanation would be helpful.


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
11
11
Review of Olympiad  
In affiliation with Fantastical Review- Aider  
Rated: E | (3.0)
This felt rather average and a bit short. That said, I thought the rhyming was unusually clever. However, it feels like the poem lacked a point or meaning. Could you elaborate, perhaps refer to the lighting of the torch or how the games promote peaceful competition.


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
12
12
Review of Magical Vault  
In affiliation with Fantastical Review- Aider  
Rated: E | (2.0)
I have no idea what this supposed to be, but I liked how you inserted the bit on the dragon. Maybe you could elaborate on the vault or at least clarify what kind of writing you are doing here. If you meant for it to be vague, perhaps you could create more similar, related items to expound on the concept. Another idea I had would be to invite others to fill out the missing details, like a mad-lib with blank concepts instead of words.


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
13
13
In affiliation with The palace for various activit...  
Rated: E | (3.0)
What do you mean by revamp? Clarify please. Do you mean reboot, remake, another series true to the original or what?
14
14
In affiliation with The palace for various activit...  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Had to be the first one. I mean great plot, is already done as a cartoon, & the best PS2 series other than Spyro (which would be impossible as a movie)
15
15
In affiliation with The palace for various activit...  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hmm. This sounds like an extremely fun activity. I like the wacky it is and how it is not made as a way to make a profit. The only thing I see as a potential problem is it sounds like you need quite a bit of GP so this limits the users who can afford to participate.
16
16
In affiliation with The palace for various activit...  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This place does indeed have many various activities. I love the variety of what you have to offer & how you always are adding more things to do on the news feed. The only critique I'd make is because there are so many, they should be organized by type like on the WDC activities page.
17
17
Review of User Polls  
In affiliation with The palace for various activit...  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Make more


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
18
18
Review of SILENT WOMEN  
In affiliation with The palace for various activit...  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow! This is a great poem! I loved the Hillary Clinton reference. I totally got the reference to Hinduism and Muslim dresses for woman. I have always been an advocate for woman's rights (or the rights for anyone) so this struck a personal chord in me.


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
19
19
Review of The Wise Knight  
In affiliation with The palace for various activit...  
Rated: E | (4.5)
This was an interesting poem to read. I loved it. I especially liked the last line with the pepperoni pizza. After all, even a dragon would prefer pizza to a princess. That said, they normally wouldn't bother with eating humans. Too much bone and not enough meat.


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
20
20
Review of Battle  
In affiliation with The palace for various activit...  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hmm. This was an interesting poem to read. However, now that the contest is an invalid item, you need to explain the form for us as we can not follow the link to look it up ourselves. I am rather curious as to the explanation for the form as well as more about the prompt itself.


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
21
21
In affiliation with The palace for various activit...  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hmm. This was pretty interesting to read. I have to be honest though. I don't quite get the ending. Why is the word "now" in red? What was the deal with mentioning uniforms worth a "for pete's sake"? Other than that, it is a nicely written short story.


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
22
22
Review of Lost dreams  
In affiliation with The palace for various activit...  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Aw man. I can totally feel your hurt expressed through the poem. That must have been an awful experience. There are two things I wish to say. First, the people who don't accept you for who you are are not your friends. Second, it's not them who is stopping you. If you truly wish to sing, no one can stop you. Whether you do a YouTube video or just sing in the shower, it's YOUR voice.


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
23
23
In affiliation with The palace for various activit...  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Wow! This was interesting to read! For something so short it packs quite a punch! It really hit me how you combined so much into such few words. I got to say that this was quite an amazing free verse poem. The one critique I'd make is to capitalize both words in the title.


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
24
24
Review of Cracks  
In affiliation with The palace for various activit...  
Rated: E | (4.0)
This was interesting to read. It was full of emotion and sort of heart wrenching at the same time. The poem flowed very well and the words were nicely chosen. My favorite part is the last two lines about either being good at hiding the cracks or others just not caring.


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
25
25
In affiliation with The palace for various activit...  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This was a very interesting poem/prose. I enjoyed the different bird metaphoric labels for each of the characters. The free verse flowed very nicely. You had great detail. It was very beautifully written. Nicely done. I thought it was a great way to honor our elderly.


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
195 Reviews · *Magnify*
Page of 8 · 25 per page   < >
Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/profile/reviews/dragondawn/sort_by/r.review_creation_time DESC/page/1