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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
This is a nice signature. I always liked dragonflies with their iridescent wings and somewhat unusual body shape (for an insect). The spiderweb is very well done. The detail in the signature overall is amazing. The one downside is that the name is rather hard to read.
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Review of Fall  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
This was a really nice poem about fall. I like how you pointed out how it was nature putting on a show as the season changes from summer to autumn to winter. I also like the line about the birds. Autumn is indeed beautiful and should be appreciated more. You may have even convinced me to choose autumn as my favorite season. I do, however, have one critique. You could have added more to what fall brings. For example, you could have mentioned backyard BBQ or baseball/football season. There is room for more "meat" in the poem.


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Review of Lost in Space  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
This was an interesting item. I can't say that I'm familiar with this particular poem format, but that doesn't mean that I didn't enjoy the story! I liked the ending that let the humans and aliens settle among another peacefully. My one criticism is that the stories plot was rather mediocre. I do, however, understand that this was due to the item being an entry to a prompt contest. It was a nice short read, perfect for a random read (length wise). I wish you luck for any other contests you might enter in the future. I just got one question. How do you recognize an alien police station?


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Review of The Case  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
I loved this story very much. It was riveting. I could have sworn that I was there watching the trial unfold. The way you animated your characters was astounding indeed. I thought that the "glimpses" in the accused was a great way to add to the story. They were well timed giving just enough to wonder without giving anything away. I'd like to give extra points for telling the story like it was an actual trial. Realism is more engaging than a cheesy drama. The only reason why it's not a 5.0 is because I save that for a precious few.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow. This is a great poem. As a christian I have come across countless praises and prayers and this one really hit me. I think I even cried a little. Jesus is indeed someone deserving to be thanked. It reminds me of the twelve leapers where only one came back to say thanks. I am also reminded of David's prayers. Even with many things going wrong, he acknowledged that God was with him. In a world with so much sin, it's awesome to come across someone who continues to cling to "the life and the way".


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Rated: E | (5.0)
You should make multiple choice an option and add both Metroid & Minecraft. I'm stuck between thd two I mentioned, Zelda, Spyro, & Sly Cooper. All so good!
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Review of Tired  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
I may be rating this poem as average, but that doesn't mean I did not like it or that I thought an aspect of it was sub-par. I thought the topic/subject of choice was a nice widely identifiable one. Personally it was one of well timing. We all have our difficulties and the sharing of such issues can go a long way in helping others handle their own. Thank you for putting this out there. I, for one, feel that life is a little more bearable now. I hope this review may give you some sunshine in return.


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Rated: E | (4.5)
This poem was quite incredibly clever. The only reason it's not a 5 is because you completely made up words just to continue the rhyming. However, I do get that this was more or less required. Well, on to the positive stuff. I loved how this was a Halloween take of the classic Christmas rhyme. I also loved the content scenes such as the dancing skeletons. Then of course there is the fact that you gave a nod to the Charlie Brown Halloween special. There is just a lot to love about this item. Keep writing!


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Rated: E | (4.0)
This was a very good entry! I loved the description of both objects and actions alike. The story itself flowed rather nicely. I could easily picture all that you wrote in my mind. I do however have some questions. Was this item a result of a prompt because it certainly felt like it. The ending felt a little off. Aside from the words being in bold, the use of that particular phrase didn't make much sense to me. The story also feels like it is missing something. I can't seem to identify what though.


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Review of The Whisper  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This was an interesting, albeit a long read. Emotions are obviously a big part of how you retain the readers attention. Your descriptions felt extremely relistic. I almost felt like I was there witnessing the tragedy myself. This was a great item to get lost in. Keep up the good work!


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Rated: E | (5.0)
This was a very sweet poem indeed! These days it is much more common to have online friends. While there are definitely dangers, that doesn't mean you can't find true blue friends. During my Discord role play days I made some really great ones myself! One of them would even pester me to go to sleep if I got too wrapped up in chatting! The hallmark of a true friend is not what they do in your physical presence, but their intangible vibe you begin to know which knows no barriers or boundaries. This poem was a case in point.


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Review of Facebook Photos  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
This was an interesting read. My favorite part was how you portrayed the dangers involved in using Facebook. You made it very easy to understand just how powerful it can be & how easily it can be turned against you. I also liked how the story had an open ending allowing the reader to image how things worked out.


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Review of Seventeen  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
It is wonderful to know that you got to see one of the best joys in life for your friends. This was a wonderful little poem. I am rather curious where the number seventeen came from. Was this a result from a prompt? Was the number seventeen meaningful in some way?


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Rated: E | (4.0)
This felt like a very honest telling of a dark part of your life. I want to commend you on your courage for writing this down, even though it was emotional and painful to bring up. On another note, I thought it interesting that the Cherokee were mentioned because that's the tribe of my great great grandma. I hope you are doing and feeling better.


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Review of Five Points  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (2.5)
This was... confusing. I have no clue why the title is "Five Points". I'm also stumped as to how all the cancellations fit into the context of the poem. For that matter, I'm lost as to what the poem's subject is entirely. A brief explanation would be helpful.


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Review of Olympiad  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
This felt rather average and a bit short. That said, I thought the rhyming was unusually clever. However, it feels like the poem lacked a point or meaning. Could you elaborate, perhaps refer to the lighting of the torch or how the games promote peaceful competition.


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Review of Magical Vault  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (2.0)
I have no idea what this supposed to be, but I liked how you inserted the bit on the dragon. Maybe you could elaborate on the vault or at least clarify what kind of writing you are doing here. If you meant for it to be vague, perhaps you could create more similar, related items to expound on the concept. Another idea I had would be to invite others to fill out the missing details, like a mad-lib with blank concepts instead of words.


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Rated: E | (4.5)
Had to be the first one. I mean great plot, is already done as a cartoon, & the best PS2 series other than Spyro (which would be impossible as a movie)
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Review of Random activities  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Make more


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Review of The Wise Knight  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This was an interesting poem to read. I loved it. I especially liked the last line with the pepperoni pizza. After all, even a dragon would prefer pizza to a princess. That said, they normally wouldn't bother with eating humans. Too much bone and not enough meat.


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Review of Battle  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hmm. This was an interesting poem to read. However, now that the contest is an invalid item, you need to explain the form for us as we can not follow the link to look it up ourselves. I am rather curious as to the explanation for the form as well as more about the prompt itself.


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Review of Lost dreams  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Aw man. I can totally feel your hurt expressed through the poem. That must have been an awful experience. There are two things I wish to say. First, the people who don't accept you for who you are are not your friends. Second, it's not them who is stopping you. If you truly wish to sing, no one can stop you. Whether you do a YouTube video or just sing in the shower, it's YOUR voice.


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Rated: E | (4.5)
Wow! This was interesting to read! For something so short it packs quite a punch! It really hit me how you combined so much into such few words. I got to say that this was quite an amazing free verse poem. The one critique I'd make is to capitalize both words in the title.


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Review of Cracks  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
This was interesting to read. It was full of emotion and sort of heart wrenching at the same time. The poem flowed very well and the words were nicely chosen. My favorite part is the last two lines about either being good at hiding the cracks or others just not caring.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
This was a very interesting poem/prose. I enjoyed the different bird metaphoric labels for each of the characters. The free verse flowed very nicely. You had great detail. It was very beautifully written. Nicely done. I thought it was a great way to honor our elderly.


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