It is wonderful to know that you got to see one of the best joys in life for your friends. This was a wonderful little poem. I am rather curious where the number seventeen came from. Was this a result from a prompt? Was the number seventeen meaningful in some way?
This felt like a very honest telling of a dark part of your life. I want to commend you on your courage for writing this down, even though it was emotional and painful to bring up. On another note, I thought it interesting that the Cherokee were mentioned because that's the tribe of my great great grandma. I hope you are doing and feeling better.
This was... confusing. I have no clue why the title is "Five Points". I'm also stumped as to how all the cancellations fit into the context of the poem. For that matter, I'm lost as to what the poem's subject is entirely. A brief explanation would be helpful.
This felt rather average and a bit short. That said, I thought the rhyming was unusually clever. However, it feels like the poem lacked a point or meaning. Could you elaborate, perhaps refer to the lighting of the torch or how the games promote peaceful competition.
I have no idea what this supposed to be, but I liked how you inserted the bit on the dragon. Maybe you could elaborate on the vault or at least clarify what kind of writing you are doing here. If you meant for it to be vague, perhaps you could create more similar, related items to expound on the concept. Another idea I had would be to invite others to fill out the missing details, like a mad-lib with blank concepts instead of words.
Had to be the first one. I mean great plot, is already done as a cartoon, & the best PS2 series other than Spyro (which would be impossible as a movie)
Hmm. This sounds like an extremely fun activity. I like the wacky it is and how it is not made as a way to make a profit. The only thing I see as a potential problem is it sounds like you need quite a bit of GP so this limits the users who can afford to participate.
Wow! This is a great poem! I loved the Hillary Clinton reference. I totally got the reference to Hinduism and Muslim dresses for woman. I have always been an advocate for woman's rights (or the rights for anyone) so this struck a personal chord in me.
This was an interesting poem to read. I loved it. I especially liked the last line with the pepperoni pizza. After all, even a dragon would prefer pizza to a princess. That said, they normally wouldn't bother with eating humans. Too much bone and not enough meat.
Hmm. This was an interesting poem to read. However, now that the contest is an invalid item, you need to explain the form for us as we can not follow the link to look it up ourselves. I am rather curious as to the explanation for the form as well as more about the prompt itself.
Hmm. This was pretty interesting to read. I have to be honest though. I don't quite get the ending. Why is the word "now" in red? What was the deal with mentioning uniforms worth a "for pete's sake"? Other than that, it is a nicely written short story.
Aw man. I can totally feel your hurt expressed through the poem. That must have been an awful experience. There are two things I wish to say. First, the people who don't accept you for who you are are not your friends. Second, it's not them who is stopping you. If you truly wish to sing, no one can stop you. Whether you do a YouTube video or just sing in the shower, it's YOUR voice.
Wow! This was interesting to read! For something so short it packs quite a punch! It really hit me how you combined so much into such few words. I got to say that this was quite an amazing free verse poem. The one critique I'd make is to capitalize both words in the title.
This was interesting to read. It was full of emotion and sort of heart wrenching at the same time. The poem flowed very well and the words were nicely chosen. My favorite part is the last two lines about either being good at hiding the cracks or others just not caring.
This was a very interesting poem/prose. I enjoyed the different bird metaphoric labels for each of the characters. The free verse flowed very nicely. You had great detail. It was very beautifully written. Nicely done. I thought it was a great way to honor our elderly.
This was a very interesting read. Astounding work! I need to read this from the beginning. It is very well written, provides good detail, a great plot/story, and it has everything else a fantasy needs. I hope the whole story is finished and if not, that you continue to work on it.
This was an interesting story! I am going to have to read the whole thing from the beginning now. It is action packed, flows well, and immediately grabs the reader's attention. Just a little more detail and description would be nice though. Keep up the good work!
This makes for an interesting and helpful read. Mindfulness or even just de-stressing is a pretty broad topic. Perhaps you might want to follow up with other techniques like dropping anchor. Also since you are talking about mindfulness, you should give ACT (acceptance and commitment therapy) a brief mention.
This was an interesting read. I loved how you depicted the story in a hybrid first/third person point of view. Trying to figure things out at that age, especially when it comes to a guy wanting to kiss a gal is always awkward. You did a great job describing this.
This was an interesting set of Haiku. I loved your choice of words to describe "Ireland". The haiku itself was average, yet beautiful nonetheless. I wold make the suggestion of separating the multiple Haiku with a blank line. Please keep up the good work!
Honestly, this needs a lot of work in grammar and spelling. For example, you have a space between the "a" and "m" in the first sentence. It also should be written 2AM or 2am. You do not spell out the hour in words. I would suggest a lot of proofreading.
This was an interesting poem and it was very beautiful. There is indeed a lot to enjoy about spring. Your descriptions were nicely detailed. I could practically feel the mud between my toes and hear the birds singing. Very nice work! I hope to read more like this.
I thought this was very interesting. I never read Dante's Infernal so I can't comment on that part. However, this explained everything really well. It felt like a Cliff Notes book it was so polished. Now that I've read your item I am more inclined to read the real thing.
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