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Review of Light to dark  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
That's your first poem?! I've written the occasional poem for my whole life and I could never create something that good! It was disturbing, yet beautiful which is hard to accomplish in my opinion. My only negative comment is I'm struggling with the meaning.


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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
This was "Epic"! I loved your "Strange World" of movies and how they go "Onward" toward their membership so much I could "Sing"! What can I say? My tongue is "Frozen" from how awesome of this entry. I knew I would love it after I "Red" the first line. I felt like this was "Uncharted" territory. I just have one question. Have you been left "Home Alone" once too often to come up with this?


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Review of Fishful Thinking  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
This limerick was both interesting and "fishy". It was very short which I felt was a bit of a downside, but it gave me a chuckle. I did enjoy the clever rhyming. You also got me on the last line. I thought for sure you would end with a "tasty dish", not "Give a Wish"!


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Review of Teachable  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Great item! I love learning Biblical ins & outs like this. I thought the points were expressed well, even if they were all over the place (biblical wise). Might I suggest a group collaboration to organize these by topic & book? We could dissect the whole Bible together!


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Rated: E | (3.0)
This was interesting. I am aware that this is a contest entry so I will not say too much on the subject matter. That said, what kind of form was this writing? It was not free verse was it? I kind of liked the last one best. For your first try at the form, it wasn't bad.


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Rated: 18+ | (1.0)
No items or anything to do. I don't mind being in the group but I'm wondering what's the point?
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I found this to be an interesting read and very informative. The only change I would suggest would be to refine the formatting a bit such as spacing, item lists, etc. It gave detailed information while being easy to read and not too daunting. The source links provided are appreciated as well. Nicely done.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
First, I came across this as a random read and review, so my apologies for missing the others! I'll be sure to fan the series! Second, I found this to be an ambitious, yet successful undertaking, so I'm adding that to my score. Finally, this reads so well and the plot is so rich that I absolutely adore it!


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Review of Lyla  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
This was very interesting to read. The subject matter alone was so different, I told myself I had to try it. The verse flows quite well despite it being "free". It's a very tender moment expressed in a tender manner. Also, congratulations on your child!


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Review of Underwhelmed  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I loved this so much! First, it is so well based on fact and an actual person (Elon Musk) that I personally would refer to this as a "predicted future" rather than "science-fiction". Your descriptions were excellent and the insertion of the explanatory flashback was well timed.


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Rated: E | (3.5)
The story had a wonderful amount of detail. I felt like I was transported to a new place entirely. I am a little confused though. In the description you said this was three short stories. I only see one. You also put this item in the mythology genre, yet there is nothing remotely "myth" about it. Lastly, the ending was a sad twist that was nicely led up to.


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Review of Group Therapy  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I loved the poem. The fact it felt so complete while being so short made it feel like a very comfortable bite sized meal. Then there's also the matter of picking a topic that many can relate to. An overall well done prose, even if it was not particularly special.


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Review of Ginger Lee  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I rather enjoyed this up to the last two lines. I loved how you continued to use the word "ginger" without repeating the same definition usage. For example, ginger cat, ginger tea, and gingerly are completely different in what they mean (color, spice, and carefully respectively).


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Review of the toe incident  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (2.0)
This story is full of errors. Recheck your capitalization (especially the word "I"), punctuation (especially using commas and apostrophes), and spelling in both the short description and body. Lastly, your item title should have the first level of every word capitalized.


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Review of As My World Burns  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This was a real interesting read! Were these real letters or just the memories of an actual part of your life? Either way, I enjoyed how each letter added to the story as time went on. Disregarding any personal opinions made, there clearly were some serious issues that such protests cause. It is first hand account like this that might help to change the future.


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Rated: E | (4.0)
I can tell there were a lot of feelings behind this prose. The world can truly feel like an awful place while you begin to doubt if God truly loves you and is with you. This dark depression totally warrants writing it out, not just for your relief, but for others to see and share their feelings as well.


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Review of Camp 39  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I got to ask. Was this a real story? The prose and poetry was beautiful. The theme of going on a camping trip to enjoy mother nature for the story was well thought out and used. The words were descriptive while not being overly so. An all around solid work.


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Review of Feeling Gassy  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
This was an interesting read from your actual life. While the story and the telling of it does not warrant much of a rating, it is solidly told; Unlike the pump house! I found no grammar or spelling issues. Do you have more such tales from your life because this would make a great short story collection.


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Review of The Watermelon  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
An interesting and fun read. What kind of prose were you using? Your descriptive word choice was absolutely amazing. I could swear that a watermelon was right in front of me! I can't wait until they are in season now. Your work gave me quite the craving!


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Review of Beach  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Great poem. I always wondered how the name for a female dog ("bitch") became synonymous with cursing. We don't say someone is a mare or a nanny goat with disdain. I agree that this is nonsense and is completely contradictory as they can be and are very friendly, sweet, and kind.


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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
This really opened up my mind and taught me a few things about the Russian-Ukrainian war. The dialogue shed a lot of interesting light between the two factions and how they viewed their own countries opposition to one another. That said it was a bit hard to follow as it was hard to tell who was speaking when.


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Review of Ashes to ashes  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
This was an Interesting what if scenario for Yellowstone. The writing, spelling, grammer, theme, and detail were all good. The problem for me was that it rambled around on different subjects without making or settling on a point. There also didn't seem to be a story.


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Review of An Important Test  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Pretty darn good, but also pretty darn short. For this item that's a good thing though. I thoroughly enjoyed how you carefully kept the nature of the test under wraps, revealing only a little at a time until the entirety of the situation was unveiled.


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Review of Times Like These  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
You should feel very proud of yourself. You just made a grown dragon cry! But seriously though, this was a tear shed from a mixture of beautiful prose and respectful remembrance. I always enjoy a work that honors those who have served. I give you two claws up!


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Review of Troubles brewing  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Very interesting poem. The theme is not quite to my taste, but the wording is very catchy. I do have one question though. On the very last line the last words are "I wonder why?" It doesn't make any sense to me as there is no context. She wonders why what?


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