Overall Opinion: This is a wonderful detailed information about writing free-verse poetry. The question and answer kind of setting really makes the information stand out and makes everything clear. I never thought about having a prose be turned into a poem. LOL Keep up the great work!
Overall Opinion: This is a great simple poem about awareness. It shows how a poet wants to use awareness whenever they write a poem. All the lines does achieve unity. I don't see any mistakes here. Keep up the great work!
Opinions: This is a spooky story. A promise of something that never did existed caused a person to die with false hopes. It is bad to start a wildfire as is. Good descriptive words to bring up images of the horror~ Keep on writing!
Opinions: This poetry made me laugh~ especially the first stanza. Great use with the language and voice~ it really shows through. There is a sense of confusion and frustration about what's going on. I can even picture it. Great job and keep on writing!
Overall Opinions: This is a very cute angelic poem. I enjoy seeing the picture as well as reading it. It is quite a twist to imagine angel wings being made up of scales. Great job with the flow. I don't see any mistakes. Keep up the good work!
This series sounds great so far. I know I am reading the summaries even though I haven't read the inteeractive. Looks like the worlds are thoruugh and Zena had a lot of trouble just to be able to survive. Planet Animalus would be great to live on. Hmmm... All I can say is- get the books published! :-d Keep up the great work!
Overall Opinions:This is a great poem. In the first stanza it describes the lonliness felt and how life seemed empty. Then, in the second stanza, there is a change leading into the third stanza, where the woman gives the pure joy and happiness the person longed to have. I always love to see happy endings- and this poem express happy feelings in the end. ^_^ I do not have anything to suggest to change. It is good as is. Keep on writing!
Overall Opinions: I loved reading about the dog world- where they share no conflicts humans inflict upon themselves. This land would be great to dwell in. This poem deserves to be published (yes I know you said where it's published in). Keep up the good work!
Suggestions: "Now look a the faeries all around." I'm not sure if you intended for at instead of a here. Somehow at sounds better to me.
Overall Opinions: I enjoyed reading this poem. Four-leaf clovers must be faerie magic's enemy since it'd undo the magic casted by a fairie. Ring of mushrooms are beautiful, yes the way into the fairie world. Keep on writing!
Overall Opinions: This poem can be related to troubles we have in life as well as just the friends we have. I can see where it can be both. I would say the two lines "Where are those days by the river? Where are those nights in the park?" I would not change anything. Keep on writing!
Overall Comments: Instead of the jungle it's the tiger, almost like a lullaby type of song- what you would sing to a small child just before they go to sleep. I enjoyed reading this! Too bad I couldn't sing it out loud- not that I'd stay on key anyway. Keep up the good work!
Overall Opinions: This poem gives a different perspective from others. In third person it shows how the toddler feels whenever the word humbly is said. It's always hilirous to see a toddler entertained. Great poem and keep up the good work!
Overall Comments: A good connection for what to name your children. Uriah and Shiloh are interesting names to pick yet the meaning of it makes complete sense. Maybe oh, more children should be named based on these things. :-d I think this is a lovely poem. Have fun with children and keep up the good work!
Overall Opinions: From the description I can imagine it being a very good day to sit around the fire and relax. I wouldn't want to go outside on that night anyway, unless it's to chase wood around. :-d I enjoyed reading this poem! Don't see anything wrong with it. I especially love the warm scenery part of this poem. Keep up the good work!
Overall Comments: This is a different read. I would say my favorite part would be "...we too may clearly hear, deep in the potent night, blue wind across blue water..." since it gives a clear sense of action as well as scenery. This is a nice memorial poem. I have nothing to suggest to you. Keep on writing!
Overall Opinions: This is a list of things that creates happiness. I don't have any suggestions for you. I enjoyed 4, 5, and 10 the best. Some of the numbers would be great advice for someone who has been having a bad day. Keep up the good work!
Plot:Colt did a dramatic proposal to Chelsea, which the rest of the team knew except her. Content:A police officer wanted to have Chelsea for a wife, but Chelsea was concerned about the safety of Colt in case he became in trouble. Suggestions: None. Overall Opinions: Add a fantasy creature to the cuffs and it'd be even more interesting. :-d I enjoyed reading the story. Keep up the good work!
Plot:Darla found what she wanted for Christmas in a shop she's never seen, then puts it on the mantle. After that, when Darla realized what was happening, she bought the necklace and found someone at the party. Content:What Darla wanted wasn't the item that wanted her. In the end however Darla decided to buy the necklace, the item that wanted her and felt a happier life. Suggestions:None. Overall Opinions: I think this story was interesting. The prompt would be hard to work from and you did a great job for using the prompt. It's too bad the pony didn't want Darla. Keep up the good work!
Overall Opinions: I like this poem. The snow represents the softness and beauty of winter and the season's weather creates lasting memories. There's a happy moment going on for the winter, that is its snow. Keep up the good work!
Overall Opinions: This is a fun poem to read. "Fire ants, cottonwood... Tall grass, hot tar roads mosquitoes are a' teeming" is all things that make summer enjoyable in my opinion. Great descriptions of summer as well as adding your feelings about it too. No suggestions for you. Keep up the good work!
Overall Opinions: Great mountain scenery created. I can imagine just standing on a mountain seeing all these things with the first sunrays after a snow storm. I enjoyed reading this poem. Keep up the good work!
Overall Opinions: The foretelling of evil and omnimous weather sets up a mystery in this poem. I wonder what kind of evil is it- it leaves the imagination to take over and I imagine some pretty cool things, especially with the confirmation of the wind. I enjoyed the poem. Keep up the good work!
Overall Opinions: I can relate this poem as to how a vampire attacks his/her victims- though not all the time. I enjoyed the darkness quality it contains. The descriptions and use of words show emotions of how the vampire felt. It flowed with consistancy and I do not see any mistakes. Keep up the good work!
Content: Digging out the car which is buried underneath the snow. The main character was angry with the weatherman being wrong. Technical Errors: Some of the sentences seem a little of run on sentences. Impressions:The description though is very well written. I can understand what was going on in the persons mind. Some spots seemed confusing to me- like where you typed "finger sleeved and flapping..." just because it seemed a lot- different from what I'm used to. Overall Thoughts: This story looks like once you've edited it will be a great story. Some parts seemed confusing, but other areas I understand. Keep up the good work~
50 s is actually what this forum deserves. I love it when people are honest and positive about their work. I think this is the best way for an author to improve themselves. I especially like your introduction picture- it is very colorful and inspiring. I'd encourage anyone to join in. Keep up the good work~
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Hmmm... All I can say is- get the books published! :-d Keep up the great work!
Keep up the good work!
Great poem and keep up the good work!
I wouldn't want to go outside on that night anyway, unless it's to chase wood around. :-d I enjoyed reading this poem! Don't see anything wrong with it. I especially love the warm scenery part of this poem. Keep up the good work!
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I think this is the best way for an author to improve themselves. I especially like your introduction picture- it is very colorful and inspiring. I'd encourage anyone to join in. Keep up the good work~ 