|Hi Bscholl: Found this short short while moving through the Read and Review collection. There is a lot of action in few words, Robin's debate about what she was about to do, is clear. The fact that she wasn't about to let him walk this time shows her character.
I think my favorite part is when the woman in the bed who has obviously been beaten makes a move to help herself using a frying pan.
Couple of glitches: 1/When the patrolwoman is talking to the dog, you used "now" twice. I think you could leave out the second use ie "You're a real watchdog, aren't you?"
2/When speaking of the oaks above the trailer, I'm not sure that oaks can hover, especially the tops since they are rooted to the ground. You could try something like swayed instead.
Still a great read. Keep it up!