I liked this, I hope you find peace with your mom. I dream about my dad never my mom. We did not get along that well. I like all the detail, it brought me in with your story.
I love Cozy mysteries, this is a good start but needs more work so it will flow easier. I hope you continue to work on it and add a lot more. I read a lot of Cozy so hope you will finish this J.A. Whiting is my author right now.
This made me laugh! My husband is always loosing something! I always envisioned the "lost" object just sitting there and laughing at me because we could not find it!
I like your writing and think you wrote this well. There are many things that cannot be explained by normal standards. There's an old saying 'trust your gut' only you know what you saw that day.
I have enjoyed reading this story and look forward to reading more. There are minor grammatical errors such as the word 'widen' should be 'widened'. I have trouble with grammar and punctuation also.
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