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Review of ROBERT FROST  
Review by Lazy Writer
Rated: E | (4.0)
I like this. I like Robert Frost.

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LW
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Review of Valentines Day  
Review by Lazy Writer
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is a serious issue in our lives today. I thank you for the encouragement that you have given to those that are in need of it.

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LW
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Review of Writing.Com 101  
Review by Lazy Writer
Rated: E | (4.0)
Can you buy your membership with points? I thought you could at one time. If so how much would an UPGRADED membership be for a year? 6 months?

Thanks
Lazy Writer
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Review by Lazy Writer
Rated: E | (5.0)
I liked this, I hope you find peace with your mom. I dream about my dad never my mom. We did not get along that well. I like all the detail, it brought me in with your story.

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LW
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Review of Starting Over  
Review by Lazy Writer
Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
I love Cozy mysteries, this is a good start but needs more work so it will flow easier. I hope you continue to work on it and add a lot more. I read a lot of Cozy so hope you will finish this J.A. Whiting is my author right now.

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LW
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Review by Lazy Writer
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Please tell me there is going to be more! I liked this story and want to know what happened.

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LW
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Review of Enjoyment  
Review by Lazy Writer
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I like this poem. I agree time does not heal all wounds. You just have to keep moving forward.

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LW
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Review by Lazy Writer
Rated: E | (4.0)
I agree with you but if there is no love to give the child the child is better off without them. I speak from experience.

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LW
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Review of Life  
Review by Lazy Writer
Rated: E | (5.0)
J this was very good. I liked it.
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LW
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Review of The Pharoah  
Review by Lazy Writer
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Made me laugh!

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LW
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Review by Lazy Writer
Rated: E | (5.0)
This made me laugh! My husband is always loosing something! I always envisioned the "lost" object just sitting there and laughing at me because we could not find it!

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LW
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Review by Lazy Writer
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I like this and think we all need to remember.

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LW
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Review by Lazy Writer
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like your writing and think you wrote this well. There are many things that cannot be explained by normal standards. There's an old saying 'trust your gut' only you know what you saw that day.

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LW
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Review by Lazy Writer
Rated: E | (5.0)
You have touched on something here that I have trouble with - forgiving - a member of my family. I keep trying maybe one day I will get there.

This makes you think.

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LW
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Review of Living for God  
Review by Lazy Writer
Rated: E | (5.0)
I really liked this essay, thank you for sharing it with me.

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LW
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Review of WeedLand  
Review by Lazy Writer
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like this poem! I grow weeds very well too!! Very little to no work!

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LW
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Review of My Psalm  
Review by Lazy Writer
Rated: E | (5.0)
I love this and it is so true!

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LW
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Review of THE DRUMMER  
Review by Lazy Writer
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like this, is it part of a longer story? I think you wrote it well.

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LW
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Review of The Light  
Review by Lazy Writer
Rated: E | (5.0)
That light is heaven and peace is God - we will all experience it if we believe in Jesus the son of the only living God.

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LW

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Review by Lazy Writer
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
I have enjoyed reading this story and look forward to reading more. There are minor grammatical errors such as the word 'widen' should be 'widened'. I have trouble with grammar and punctuation also.

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LW
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Review by Lazy Writer
Rated: E | (5.0)
I really like your writing and determination with health issues. You and your wife will be in my prayers.

Keep Writing and put this toward your membership.

LW
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Review by Lazy Writer
Rated: E | (5.0)
That is a truly beautiful poem! If he is still here, I hope you read it to him or gave him a copy! I am step mother and the road has been very rocky.

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LW
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Review of Carlie's Wish  
Review by Lazy Writer
Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed this short story. I think that you wrote it well.

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LW
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Review by Lazy Writer
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I like your writing style. I liked this story and will be waiting for the rest to be posted.

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LW
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Review of A Poultry Mishap  
Review by Lazy Writer
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I enjoyed this and it made me laugh
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