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Rated: E | (5.0)
Good luck going forward!
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Review of Joy  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Amen
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Review of Tired  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I do so understand.
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for entry "Chapter 5" 
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Ready for the next chapter!
Very good story.
Keep writing
Dianne
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I enjoyed this story very much. I see you wrote it a few years ago, I would like to offer a suggestion as to formatting. When writing dialog each person who speaks is a different paragraph. It makes it easier for people to read.

It is a good story and would like to read more if you decide to make it longer or make a series of short stories about your characters.

Welcome to the site, theres lots to do here and many great writers.

Keep writing
Dianne
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Review of Katie Sings  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Beautiful!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is great!
Dianne
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I have just read all these chapters and I cant wait for more!

I think you wrote it very well. I could see everything clearly in my mind.

I hope you post more soon.

Glad you came to WDC. Hope you like it here.

Dianne
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for entry "Back To The Present" 
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This is trama and no one should trivialize it. I am glad you are at peace with your life now. I wish you only the best.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I am sorry you had to go through that. You have written a very compelling story and I will be reading as you post more.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Very well said.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I like that weatherman!I also like this poem.
Keep writing
Dianne
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Review of Drought  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Sad but a good story.
Keep writing
Dianne
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed this short story. Hope to read some more.

Keep writing
Dianne
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Very good story. I enjoyed reading it.

Keep Writing
Dianne
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Review of Shutterbug  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I enjoyed this short story. That would be quite a camera! Keep Writing

Dianne
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I like this one too. Please keep writing and I will keep reading.

Dianne
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Review of Recommendation  
Rated: E | (4.0)
I enjoyed this short story. I think you wrote it well but it would be an easier read with paragraphs. I am looking forward to reading more of your work.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
This is a good story. I enjoyed reading it. It would be easier to read if divided into paragraphs.

Were you considering making this a longer story? What happened to cause the fall of civilization?

I really liked it, please keep writing.
Dianne
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I love this! Good writing, keep writing!
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Review of Still Swedish  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Time never stands still! We're old before we know it!
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I hope you are enjoying your life in a new country. I always wanted to travel but not likely now. Take it one day at a time, it's all we can do.
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Review of I, Katrina  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This sounds like a hurricane! I like your poems.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Very good story! I found it funny, I like this time change cause I like it light later instead of getting dark so early.

Keep writing
Dianne
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A very moving story. I was not sure what the end was going to be and this was very nice and moving.

Keep Writing
Dianne
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