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Review of More Why  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I love this, a truly wonderful piece of writing about God and faith. This had to have been inspired by God.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I like this story. I dont think I would want to work everyday. These people did not have freedom.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I always knew robots would take over! Cyrus is a different kind. I like this story.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I would like a little more info on the family. I know you have a word limit for the contest, maybe make this into a longer short story.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I do like this story, I know I keep saying that, but it is true. What I would like to know is how you keep track of what you have written against what you still have to write. Do you use a program or anything like that? an outline? I've never been good with outlines. Anyway, can't wait to hear what else Cleo is hiding.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Very interesting. Will have to think it through.
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Review of A New Dawn Ch.1  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I enjoyed this story and would like to read more. Inn the second paragraph I think the word 'mourning' should be 'morning'. I did not see anything else. I would like to read more to see where these boys go.

Keep writing
Dianne
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Review of Nosedive No More  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Great story I really enjoyed it.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A very good and uplifting poem about positivity. I enjoyed it.`
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I used to ask a lot of questions glad no one threw me out! Good story I enjoyed it.
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Review of Missing: One Muse  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed this poem, it made me laugh. I do understand though, my muse or whatever thinks it's great fun to leave me alone to write by myself.
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Review of Glice  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Congratulations on your poems being published. I did not understand anything you said about the style etc., but I did enjoy reading them. Keep Writing, Dianne
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Review of Super Hero  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very cute story. I liked it. It's hard to believe a story in 299 words.
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Review of Bridge Mix  
Rated: E | (5.0)
That was truly awful!! Don't know if I could bring myself to go there again.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Very good chapter, I would have a panic attack myself going into such a place. Looking forward to more when you have the time. Have a good week.
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
This is a great poem. I enjoyed reading it and glad the soldier made it home safe. All war is Hell.
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Review of The Thunderbird  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I really enjoyed this poem. I too do not like hunting. Animals and birds of all kinds are beautiful things.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I like this poem, although I dont really understand it. Can't decide who is speaking.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Another good chapter! I don't think Mr. Tosscano is Millen's father. I thought I read where Mr. Tosscano has a brother. I think it might be him. I can't wait for the next chapter. I hope you are enjoying writing this as much as I am enjoying reading it.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I was wondering when she was going to be Theodore again. I am glad the family was with him on this. This type of change can be very hard on the family.

Another good chapter; can't wait for the rest.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I think about this book all the time. I can't wait to hear the rest.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Again very good. I really enjoy this story.

Keep Writing
Dianne
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
The intrigue grows! I can't wait to read the next chapter! I am trying to decide if the twins are really twins and what happened to Molly. Mr. Toscono is Millens' Dad?

Keep Writing, please,
Dianne
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Review of Darkness wins  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like the poem. I hope you were able to get past this and not still depressed. God grant you peace and keep writing.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
A good story, but sad.
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