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Review of Harvest Ball  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I don't write poetry, I read the definition below the poem but do not understand it. I don't critique poetry I just tell you I like it and wish it were fall now!
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I read thru some of the other posts and just cleared the browser. I will try this. Thank you for the help.
Dianne
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Review of Misled  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I don't write poetry so do not try to critique it, other than to say I like it and I think it flows and I understood it.😊

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Dianne
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I really like the story so far. There are some word choices that you should consider changing. I think when you do a complete edit you will find them. I think you have done a very good job on this story and would like to continue reading as you get the chapters ready.

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Dianne
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Ok, I knew something devious was behind this virus! Wonder how many superspreaders are out there running around? I like this story and I think you wrote it well.

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Dianne
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Well, I like it so far, can't wait to read some more.

Keep writing
Dianne
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I like this story, is it going to be longer? I would like to continue reading. I am interested in what happens to the three girls. I think you wrote it well.

Keep Writing
Dianne
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Review of In Her Memory  
Rated: ASR | N/A (Review only item.)
This is a very touching memorial for your mother. I am sure she knows how you feel and loves you still.

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Dianne
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Review of Still  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is excellent!

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Dianne
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Review of Enlightenment  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This makes me see both him and Dorothy sitting in the field. I liked it.

Keep Writing and congrats on third place!

Dianne
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I like this little story. Hope Jonesy continues to fly high.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
What a great poem for your grandmother! I really liked it.
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Review of Complex Numbers  
for entry "Changes in Attitude" 
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Somethings we learn to live with and other things we try to change. Change is inevitable.

Dianne
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Review of The Wood Carver  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I really enjoyed this poem. I could see him in my mind. It flowed and told the story very well.

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Dianne
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Review of Flipping Liam  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I like this, could maybe be a longer story, what made her turn on Liam? I know it was flash fiction and it was good.

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Dianne
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Review of Write On  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I really like this poem I know it has another name but can't remember it. I don't really write poetry so I don't critique it, just to say I like it.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Oh I really liked this story! I would really like to have some real coffee instead of decaf but can't. Also liked the aliens in the story. I enjoyed this story.
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Dianne
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Review of The Body Double  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a sad but good story.
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Review of Living in a Dream  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like this poem, it reads easy and flows.

Dianne
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Review of Living in a Dream  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like this story, hope she continues to live her dream.

Dianne
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A sad story but a good ending. She needed a friend. I think you wrote this very well.
Keep Writing
Dianne
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This made me laugh, I really liked it! Good poem!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I like this poem, it is sad, but it tells a story. Keep Writing.
Dianne
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Review of Syl  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Oh I loved this story! I love happy children's stories or stories about children. I think you wrote it well and I like the little girl.
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Review of Day 43  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I have enjoyed reading this series of stories. I would like to read from the beginning but cannot find it in your port. It is disheartening to think of a war in America, but looks like it might be headed that way. I would like to read all of these stories if possible.
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