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Rated: E | (5.0)
Oh, I like this one, the picture especially! Makes me want to know how it got there and why it was just left. Your poem is really great. I enjoyed it very much.
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Review of Hidden Trail  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Thank you for requesting me to review your short story! And thank you for reading my Pickle Kids stories.

I enjoyed this story! I could see Craig and all the scouts camping. My son was a scout too, and went all the way to Eagle. So I understand the other kids picking on the kid they saw as a "know it all".

Some of the sentences are a little long and maybe should be shortened. I use a lot of dialog in my stories between the characters. I was always taught that a different paragraph was necessary for different speakers. I am 74 and have not been in school in a long time, so this could have changed.

I did not find any misspelled words or bad grammar. I am not a grammar expert. I have had a lot of reviews that have corrected my grammar! I have had very helpful reviews on my writing.

When I am writing my stories, the kids take over and I write what they say. I hear them in my head and go where they lead.

I enjoyed this story and I plan to visit your port and read more of your writing. I hope you will find this review helpful. If you have any further questions or if I can help you in any way just email me.

Keep Writing
Dianne
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Review of Choices  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed this little story. We have to pay attention to our choices.
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Review of The Umbrella  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I'll be honest this one confuses me.
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Review of Dear Santa  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Love it!!
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Review of The Snowman  
Rated: E | (5.0)
What a wonderful Christmas story!

Keep writing
Dianne
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Review of The Bob  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I enjoyed this story very much!
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
You are a very good writer. I'm glad he got caught.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
A good story and well written even if it is a bit gruesome.
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Review of The Naughty Gift  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I love it. Told from puppy's point of view!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed this very much. Will we ever learn? I dont think so.

Keep writing
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Review of Valkyrie  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
A really good story. I'm just sad it ended in her death.

Keep writing
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Review of The House Elf  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I love the story! Now what happens?!
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Review of Having forgotten  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I did try to ride my bike after many, many years! I got a little way and then fell, the bike on top of me, and could not get up. Avery nice gentleman and his son stopped and helped me get up and watched until I got home. Bike riding is out for me!
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I like this short story. I think you wrote it well, I also think this would make a good longer story. Keep Writing.
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Review of Christmas Morning  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I'm glad it worked out for Thomas. I was hoping it would not end sad. I can see this being a longer story.
Keep Writing.
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Review of The Gathering  
Rated: E | (5.0)
A very nice Thanksgiving poem. I enjoyed reading it and could picture it in my mind. Keep Writing.
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Review of Something Old  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Traditions do matter and this is a great poem. I enjoyed it very much. Keep Writing
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A very good story of the sea, the lighthouse, and the keeper. A very compelling story. Keep Writing
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Review of The Letter M  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I don't write poetry, but I really enjoyed this poem. I think it flows nicely. Welcome to WDC and please post more of your writing.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Very good and scary!!
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I have a tuff time with maps too! I get explicit directions if I'm going somewhere new!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A sad story. I think you wrote it well. First loves hurt sometimes.
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Review of First Contact  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Very good! I can actually see that happening!
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Review of A Longship Tale  
Rated: E | (4.5)
I like it.
Keep writing
Dianne
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