I like this, is it a poem or the beginning of a story? I would have used "couldn't keep us apart" in the last line. It is your writing so write it your way.
This is a good story. I like the way you wrote it. The ending is different and definitely on the creepy side. I like the end of the world stories. I watch a lot of those on TV.
I wish you well here on WDC; it's a good place to be.
I think this is very good to keep track. I also am trying to lose weight, it is hard. Those who do not have a problem do not understand. You can do it so keep trying and keep at it. It will come off. I am not losing as fast as I used to that's for sure. It is coming off slowly.
I've only been texting 6 or so years now. I still use good grammar (I hope). I don't understand most of the abbreviation used. I do use emojis if I find one that goes with my text.
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