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Rated: E | (4.0)
It might be nice to live in the forest in a treehouse. A good story.

Putting it in paragraph form would make for easier reading.

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Dianne
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Review of Haircut  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good story! I like it. Umbrellas can be hateful things!
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Dianne
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Review of JUNO  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I love a good paranormal story. Thanks for writing.

Dianne
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Review of HIGH and DRY  
Rated: E | (5.0)
But what happens when he meets the boss-man again? Loved the story.

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Dianne
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I like this story but it is really kind of sad. What happened to Peter?

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Dianne
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Review of silent huntress  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I don't write poetry but I read the prompt for the poem and that sounded tuff to do! I like your poem and I think you did a great job with the prompt.
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Review of Wood Nymph  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I can see the little wood nymph dancing under the stars. Good poem.

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Dianne
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Review of Dear Dad  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Beautiful poem. My Dad passed in 1998 but I miss him still.

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Dianne
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I loved this story. It reminds me of my son and husband as my son went thru every level of scouting and camping. He finished with his Eagle badge and made Order of the Arrow! We were so proud of him.

Good story
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Dianne
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I love your children's poems.

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Dianne
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Review of Unicorn Wishes  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Love it! I love unicorns and always wanted one.

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Dianne
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Review of Nafan Orange  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like this poem and I would leave the L's alone. I guess it depends on how old the child speaking is, but I would leave them L's.

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Dianne
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Review of At two  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It made me smile. I liked it a lot, I don't write poetry so I cannot really critique it other than to tell you I liked it.
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Review of The Bad Guy  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I enjoyed this story. I could envision the little birthday boy!

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Dianne
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Review of The Perfect Pet  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a very good poem. I enjoyed it.

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Dianne
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Review of First drum set  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like your poem. I don't know about poem structure, but I think it is good.

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Dianne
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I like this, just like kids.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Good story and I like its ending. Looks like she might have found a friend.

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Dianne
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Review of The Water Vole  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Interesting story, I liked it. I liked the ending, the man turning into an animal.

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Dianne
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Review of Dream Vacation  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I really don't like spiders of any kind or size! Good story, I enjoyed it and wanted more.

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Dianne
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I like this poem it has a message of hope.
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Review of Depression  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I understand this poem. You wtote it very well.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Interesting...I can actually see and hear the water boiling!

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Dianne
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I love it! I can just picture the cats having a good time.
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Dianne
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Review of The Mystic Hole  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a great poem and I could picture it as I read it. Well done.

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