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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Loved it! I love the wizarding world. This was a great story.
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Review of Making A Splash!  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I am not a poet, so I don't really know how to review poetry except to tell you that I liked it. I thought it flowed well and was easy to read and understand and it made me laugh.
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Review of Madam President  
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
I like this short story. I think you wrote it well. It looks like you followed the headlines a little. I really like the ending. Put a smile on my face first time today.

Keep writing
Lw
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I started to just pass this by, but please start counting your blessings.
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Review of Life on a Farm  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
This is really great! I love it. That is life on a farm.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I liked this, Is this part of a longer write? I think it would make a great short story or longer. The only thing I saw was in 2nd paragraph is 'been' supposed to be 'be'?
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Review of Puzzled  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I really like this poem, it flowed and was easy to understand, the story is great. I've read some poems on here, that I just don't get, so I was really happy to read this one. I don't write poetry (or very little) so it is hard for me to critique other than to say I thought it very good.
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Review of Doll Magic  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I like your story.
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Review of The Knight's Tale  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I do not write poetry so I cannot critique it, I will say that I liked it, I liked reading it.
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Review of Emily's Steer  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like this short story, it would be really hard to make 3 wishes. I think it would change way too much. I think you wrote it well.
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
I like your story, I love unicorns. The pictures of the unicorns are beautiful!
Keep Writing
LW
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed this, had not thought about the different ways. I would like to know what nigh time dreams mean, but I don't think anyone really knows.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Very good short story, loved it, I love unicorns too.

Keep Writing
LW
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Rated: E | (4.0)
There is much to do, Christ is returning soon and people are not ready. Tell it everywhere.
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Review of Surving Insanity  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I liked this poem, it is about life how it really is, you are a strong person, don't let anyone label you. I read this as it being about you, if not you wrote it well.

Keep Writing
Dianne
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Review of Treasures  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I am not much of a poet and I do admire those who can put words together the way you just did. I love the poem.

Keep Writing
LW aka Dianne
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I love this, I don't know what the style is, but it is great!
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Review of "Eleanor Rigby"  
Rated: E | (4.0)
I enjoyed this, I've often thought about trying a romance story, but that is just not me. This was good.
Keep Writing
LW aka Dianne
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I agree with you, prayer is the best answer! God does hear and answer our prayers!

Thank you for your insight and writing.

Have a good day.
Keep Writing
LW
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Review of ROBERT FROST  
Rated: E | (4.0)
I like this. I like Robert Frost.

Keep Writing
LW
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Review of Valentines Day  
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is a serious issue in our lives today. I thank you for the encouragement that you have given to those that are in need of it.

Keep Writing
LW
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Review of Writing.Com 101  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Can you buy your membership with points? I thought you could at one time. If so how much would an UPGRADED membership be for a year? 6 months?

Thanks
Lazy Writer
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I liked this, I hope you find peace with your mom. I dream about my dad never my mom. We did not get along that well. I like all the detail, it brought me in with your story.

Keep Writing
LW
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Review of Starting Over  
Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
I love Cozy mysteries, this is a good start but needs more work so it will flow easier. I hope you continue to work on it and add a lot more. I read a lot of Cozy so hope you will finish this J.A. Whiting is my author right now.

Keep Writing
LW
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Please tell me there is going to be more! I liked this story and want to know what happened.

Keep writing
LW
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