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Review of The House Elf  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I love the story! Now what happens?!
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Review of Having forgotten  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I did try to ride my bike after many, many years! I got a little way and then fell, the bike on top of me, and could not get up. Avery nice gentleman and his son stopped and helped me get up and watched until I got home. Bike riding is out for me!
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I like this short story. I think you wrote it well, I also think this would make a good longer story. Keep Writing.
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Review of Christmas Morning  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I'm glad it worked out for Thomas. I was hoping it would not end sad. I can see this being a longer story.
Keep Writing.
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Review of The Gathering  
Rated: E | (5.0)
A very nice Thanksgiving poem. I enjoyed reading it and could picture it in my mind. Keep Writing.
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Review of Something Old  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Traditions do matter and this is a great poem. I enjoyed it very much. Keep Writing
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A very good story of the sea, the lighthouse, and the keeper. A very compelling story. Keep Writing
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Review of The Letter M  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I don't write poetry, but I really enjoyed this poem. I think it flows nicely. Welcome to WDC and please post more of your writing.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Very good and scary!!
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I have a tuff time with maps too! I get explicit directions if I'm going somewhere new!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A sad story. I think you wrote it well. First loves hurt sometimes.
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Review of First Contact  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Very good! I can actually see that happening!
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Review of A Longship Tale  
Rated: E | (4.5)
I like it.
Keep writing
Dianne
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Good luck going forward!
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Review of Joy  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Amen
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Review of Tired  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I do so understand.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I enjoyed this story very much. I see you wrote it a few years ago, I would like to offer a suggestion as to formatting. When writing dialog each person who speaks is a different paragraph. It makes it easier for people to read.

It is a good story and would like to read more if you decide to make it longer or make a series of short stories about your characters.

Welcome to the site, theres lots to do here and many great writers.

Keep writing
Dianne
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Review of Katie Sings  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Beautiful!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is great!
Dianne
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I like that weatherman!I also like this poem.
Keep writing
Dianne
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Review of Drought  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Sad but a good story.
Keep writing
Dianne
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed this short story. Hope to read some more.

Keep writing
Dianne
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Very good story. I enjoyed reading it.

Keep Writing
Dianne
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Review of Shutterbug  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I enjoyed this short story. That would be quite a camera! Keep Writing

Dianne
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I like this one too. Please keep writing and I will keep reading.

Dianne
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