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Rated: E | (5.0)
Good luck going forward!
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Review of Joy  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Amen
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Review of Tired  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I do so understand.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I enjoyed this story very much. I see you wrote it a few years ago, I would like to offer a suggestion as to formatting. When writing dialog each person who speaks is a different paragraph. It makes it easier for people to read.

It is a good story and would like to read more if you decide to make it longer or make a series of short stories about your characters.

Welcome to the site, theres lots to do here and many great writers.

Keep writing
Dianne
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Review of Katie Sings  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Beautiful!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I like that weatherman!I also like this poem.
Keep writing
Dianne
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Review of Drought  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Sad but a good story.
Keep writing
Dianne
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed this short story. Hope to read some more.

Keep writing
Dianne
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Very good story. I enjoyed reading it.

Keep Writing
Dianne
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Review of Shutterbug  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I enjoyed this short story. That would be quite a camera! Keep Writing

Dianne
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I like this one too. Please keep writing and I will keep reading.

Dianne
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Review of Recommendation  
Rated: E | (4.0)
I enjoyed this short story. I think you wrote it well but it would be an easier read with paragraphs. I am looking forward to reading more of your work.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
This is a good story. I enjoyed reading it. It would be easier to read if divided into paragraphs.

Were you considering making this a longer story? What happened to cause the fall of civilization?

I really liked it, please keep writing.
Dianne
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I love this! Good writing, keep writing!
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Review of Still Swedish  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Time never stands still! We're old before we know it!
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I hope you are enjoying your life in a new country. I always wanted to travel but not likely now. Take it one day at a time, it's all we can do.
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Review of I, Katrina  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This sounds like a hurricane! I like your poems.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Very good story! I found it funny, I like this time change cause I like it light later instead of getting dark so early.

Keep writing
Dianne
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A very moving story. I was not sure what the end was going to be and this was very nice and moving.

Keep Writing
Dianne
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Review of Those That Wait  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I like this story. I would like to see a longer version.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
One more reason not to like to fly on the airlines! I liked the story and was not surprised at the ending. Except maybe the last line. So the character must have known about the type of flight this was.

Very good
Keep Writing
Dianne
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I love this story!! Ive had cats and dogs. My cat was15 when she died. My dog is now 11. Good luck with them!
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I found this in the Read and Review section. This made me think, I don't admire many people, and I don't believe in any kind of cruelty. My time is just as important as the rich person or whoever. However, I do agree that gossip can take down just about anyone. Gossip is cruel and can totally destroy a person and their reputation.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
Would love to have read this and commented, but unfortunately, I do not understand the language.

Keep Writing
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Review of Sunny Saga  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I found this story in the Read and Review section. This is a very entertaining story of two motorbikes and their human. I really enjoyed it and could see it plainly in my mind's eye! I think it must have been fun to ride them around town. It reminds me of the small motorbike my brother had when we were younger. Since you don't have Hema anymore, do you have another bike? I like the way you wrote about them as having a life of their own.
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