|Hi Lisa Noe Kittyluv um Puppyluv and good morning. I'm Grateful Jess , a judge for kiyasama's "Letters of Life, Love & Hope" by iKïyå§ama , and I will be reviewing Breast Cancer Letter for Susan G. Komen for the Cure. Please remember that these are only my opinions; feel free to use whatever suggestions you feel are right.
Although this is a short letter, I think your letter makes a great impact. It's heart felt, emotional, especially as someone who experienced a little of it - but fortunately walked away from. I hope you're still getting checked and remain healthy.
Although you have not experienced the full effects of breast cancer, I really love how you write about your experiences with the tests. I also love how you empathize with those that are diagnosed and have the long road of breast cancer (or any type of cancer for that matter) ahead of them. I think that is important, especially the emotional ties to the cause, are important in these types of letters. It gives good reason to why we should fund, sponsor, and help these causes.
I found no mechanical errors in this letter - I thought it read well, especially from an emotional standpoint.
Thank you for sharing your story and sharing about why it's important for people to be screened. Thank you for entering the contest as well. Keep up the good work, keep writing, and good luck!