|I'm reviewing this Because I found your's and Andre's Monkeys special 4th of July trinket. I'm not a professional reviewer and these are only my opinions. Take what you find useful. Ignore the rest. All comments are given with love and respect for you and your writing.
My overall impression and emotional impact: What a beautiful way to celebrate the 4th this year with poetry.
Form, format, rhyme and meter: Somewhat rhymed
Grammar, spelling and mechanics: Saw no problems here.
Suggestions for improvement: None with the poem but with the hunt for the trinket.
Did you have to go somewhere besides the Newsfeed to collect the Trinket? It only took me 1 click on an image in the newsfeed to find the trinket.
After you found the portal, were you able to get the Trinket? yes pretty easy.
What did you think of the item you found at the end of your journey? loved it.
Should these guys be locked up without computer privileges? no
And last, Andre says this was too easy! Is he right, should the boys make these harder? Monkeys need to be more sneaky.
My favorite parts: Love it all but my 3 favorite lines are: 1) Our Nation is still quite young, with so very much to learn. 2) Lift up the Torch of Freedom, so that all may see its glow. and 3) A Home we can be proud of, and Our Freedom's lasting flow.
Thank you so much for sharing your writing! It was a pleasure to review and I hope you find my comments helpful. Remember, they are only my opinion. You're the writer and know what's best for you.
You got this! You can do it! I believe in you!