Answering your question with my own beliefs: Don`t give anyone a chance, not when the person may hurt you, not when it`s not near perfect. When it`s right, you`ll know. You also know when it`s not, but we try to fool ourselves. Be fooled no more, give chances no more.
Beautiful, lovely well written, loved it. Your feeling amaze me and creates deep admiration, as a person and author. Great read, lightened my evening. Great work!
Wow! Congrats on all the talent. Loved the rhymes. I am not sure I get it completely, but I am sure that there's a clever and deep meaning in it too. Great work!
Impeccable language, coherence and organization. The narrative flows naturally and caught my attention from the first to the last word. It was fun, made me curious about the characters and empathic about the narrator. Wonderful job! Loved it and look forward to the re-write!
Great article! You pictured very well something I think almost everyone once felt. I saw myself when I was 14-15 and this is exactly how I felt! Good work on that.
Also, if I may say, personally, don't worry too much about this, man! We all feel this once, it's part of life. Believe in yourself, face your fears, but don't hate yourself if you can't. Some time in life we all overcome things that once feel impossible to.
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