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Review of Married to Life  
Review by Edwina Carol
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Very impressive use of words to draw in the reader and get them emotionally involved. Despite the arranged marriage the couple seemed to have the same problems that every body else has, trying to get to know and understand each other. Juilia's character is very perceptive and warm and surprisingly Sammy's character is reasonable and giving despite the fact that he is unhappy about his arranged situation. Great job
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Review of The Better Half  
Review by Edwina Carol
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello:
I love the transformational language in the story. I love how the writer transforms the story to allow the reader to get to know that the character Marli is still a flesh and blood person and then allows the reader to experience transition of the character into a spirit. Excellent example of creating a dynamic character.
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