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Review by Effy Bee
Rated: E | (5.0)
Okay so as someone with BPD, I tend to get BPD Rage. I really liked how you broke down the different types of anger and how they affect people. It's also nice to see that with the information you gave, were also answers to how to find happiness. The stigma surrounding medication you tackled awesomely as well, as I agree no shame in trying to function! I got inspiration from this, to try to make quality of life better. Also I like the way you separated the topics of anger and depression, while they might work together, can also be very different. Keep this up! This could help someone !
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Review of Prisms  
Review by Effy Bee
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi! I love this, being a lover of prisms and rainbows and rain and crystals. The descriptions even though alphabetically placed - work in the way that prisms would, reflective and random. It's cool how you took us from the beginning of the rain to the quick changes in weather. Also it being relatable I think you captured Prisms wonderfully and this inspires me to try an Alphabet poem as well! *RainbowL*
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Review by Effy Bee
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Wow, I really like this!! It's very vintage the way you write, also the way you rhyme. The part that got me was "But words less fair make me succumb-When dropped from ruby lips sublime." I feel like this really captures when someone says something in a happy tone but is hurtful. This definitely takes you to the 1800's, a romantic vibe to it as well!
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Review by Effy Bee
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi! I'm super new here would love to join this group!Love the idea with the angel with one wing so we can support eachother *ButterflyG*
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