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Review by Eric Wharton
Rated: E | (5.0)
Excellent article. You're absolutely right, we want to come up with full-proof methods for everything we do, as if what works for one person works for everyone. The truth, as you've expressed so well, is to seek first a relationship with God. Everything else follows from there. Very well said.

The flow of the article was good, the example were nice (38 million? Wow!). You took us through to a logical conclusion. Very well written.

I found no grammar errors.
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Review of A Moment In Life  
Review by Eric Wharton
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is so relaxing. Your tone contributes to the overall impression of the piece. It's not only the words but the easy way your writing comes across that makes this a great read.

I also like all the attention to the senses, particularly sound and touch. Writers too often, myself included, lean too much on sight. You did a good job of including all the senses, except taste of course. But who would want to taste bubbles. *Smile*

All in all, very well done.
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