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11 Public Reviews Given
Review Style
I don’t really have a specific style yet because I’m relatively new at reviewing. In my reviews I almost always mention how the piece made me feel and how I relate to it. I tend to give extra attention to plot/timeline, flow, feeling, and any clever use of a word, phrase, thought or reference. I like to start my review stating the things I enjoyed and focus most of my energy on that, but I will always be honest about my thoughts.
I'm good at...
I give my best reviews on poetry, prose, spoken word and lyrical pieces.
Favorite Genres
Dark, Adult, Erotic, Thriller/Suspense, Drama, Romance, Young Adult, Horror, Psychology, Philosophy, Tragedy, Self-Help, Inspirational, Emotional, Cultural, Fantasy, Friendship, Health
Least Favorite Genres
Comedy, Political, Scientific,Religious
Favorite Item Types
Poetry, lyrics, article, essay, short story
Least Favorite Item Types
Novel, Thesis
Public Reviews
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Review of Email Song  
Review by Black Widow
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is beautiful. After reading it I had to go see what it sounds like and I was not disappointed. This is very uniquely written. It feels very real. It feels almost like you are writing this from a personal place. Which even if you aren’t, it’s amazing that you were able to pull that off! The only thing I would change is the repetitiveness, but that isn’t my opinion as a reviewer. It’s just a personal thing. I know with lyrical pieces that’s totally acceptable. This has a nice rhythm. Keep writing babe! 🖤🖤
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Review of Thinking of You  
Review by Black Widow
Rated: E | (5.0)
This piece really took my breath away. Though it is short and simple, it spoke volumes to me and definitely touched a nerve. I get the feel that this is about someone overseas, fighting perhaps. But it can be interpreted in different ways. For me it automatically made me think of my relationship and the physical distance between us. This was beautifully written, I love it.
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Review by Black Widow
Rated: E | (5.0)
I’m at a loss for words because of how beautiful this is. My favorite lines in this:
“In moments a happy heart turned heavy,
And I dream of unpleasant things.”
“It’s your eye line that I’m too scared to meet.”
This piece gave me chills over and over again. It reads more like a poem than lyrics to me, but nonetheless is absolutely beautiful.
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Review by Black Widow
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
This is amazing! First of all, your rhyming is beautiful. Normally I would advise against the number of times you used the word magic. But each time it’s used somehow it sounds fresh, like it belongs there. I really like the line
“It feels as though we've nothing,
and nothing to do
but to quest for the magic
that can sneak up on you.”
That one gave me goosebumps. Then you switched it up and used the term hoodoo. That was fantastic. Overall amazing job, I love this! 🖤
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Review of "Rapture"  
Review by Black Widow
Rated: E | (5.0)
My favorite poems to write and to review are ones relating to mental health. When you said it was inspired by your bi-polar diagnosis, I knew I had to read it and you did not disappoint. I wasn’t sure how you were planning to use the “rapture” reference or how it would work but you did so flawlessly and I am so impressed by this. The rhyme scheme you chose (ABAB) is difficult to pull off and yet this flowed beautifully. Every time I thought this poem couldn’t get better, it continued to blow my mind through and through. Your use of language is great. I like when poems require me to keep a dictionary/thesaurus handy. I feel this entire poem so deeply and I enjoyed every moment of it. Well done!
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Review by Black Widow
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
First of all let me say that I am speechless. The poems I enjoy the most are ones that either make me feel something or have a dope rhythm. This, my friend has both and that is such a rare treat for me.
About your rhythm: The ABAB rhyme scheme is not an easy one and you did it so well, so hats off to you!
The crashing jet was perfect imagery.
“...as I think out my suicide;
I could slit my wrist with a knife
or pop pills to end this dark "ride.””
This line spoke to me beyond anything I’ve read in a while. For personal reasons but nonetheless.
The mentions of Sylvia Plath and Virginia Woolf were fantastic and absolutely necessary. I can hear and feel the panicked mind behind this writing.
It’s absolutely beautiful. I can’t say I would change anything. I am very impressed.
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Review of Accept  
Review by Black Widow
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is flawless. I had to read it over and over again because of how much it made me feel. These are the very thoughts that weigh on my mind regularly and it’s one of my favorite things to write about. This piece hooked me in immediately, reminding me of being a teenager; Starting to rebel when I realized that authenticity was dying out. How everyone stopped being themselves and started trying to be like everyone else. This was so thought-provoking and so relatable. I wish I could say something helpful that I would change about it but there’s honestly nothing I would change. Well done, keep writing.
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Review of The Journey  
Review by Black Widow
Rated: E | (4.5)
First of all I absolutely love your style and choice of language. I can’t put my finger on it precisely but this piece is very unique. Actually something I can relate to in many ways. Honestly this is just totally well written and is such a great read. If you post regularly maybe I can follow you, so I can see more of your work.
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