|“Who wants to become a writer? And why? Because it’s the answer to everything. … It’s the streaming reason for living. To note, to pin down, to build up, to create, to be astonished at nothing, to cherish the oddities, to let nothing go down the drain, to make something, to make a great flower out of life, even if it’s a cactus.”—Enid Bagnold
Hi J Cosmos
My name is Lyn and I am doing a review as a judge for WDC's Dear Me contest
As a writer, I know what it feels like to be reviewed! Please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!
Title: Dear Me, letter to Jake Cosmos
First Impression: Congratulations on turning 65. Yes, this is going to be an interesting election, hopefully, the democrats will get their act together and defeat Trump. He has destroyed our integrity world wide. It will not be easy regaining the trust of the world again.
What needs your attention: I noticed that the brackets to hyperlink in the beginning were not in place to achieve the look you desired.
Favorite Parts: I love traveling and the locations you discussed sound awesome. I hope you consider a travel blog, especially on tumblr or flicker. Many bloggers would enjoy reading about the locations.
Overall Impression: You have given a lot of thought to what you want to do for 2020. I hope you're successful in your pursuit. Although, I think you may want to consider making a list prioritizing your goals.
Thank you for letting me read your work. It was my pleasure! Lyn