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Review of song  
Review by embe
Rated: E | (4.0)
In this moment today
lyrics to go with melody,
in this song by ache4hope
to take one step at a time.

I built my house on sand
but was the only place,
that i could see
last forever.

Together now
with this review,
lovely by embe here
in your singing words.

Simply Positive Review.
 song  (E)
lyrics to go with melody, in progress
#2068322 by ache4hope




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Review of Don't Run Aground  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In this moment in time
a ship follows blindly,
now headed for a shoal
now astarboard or alee.

Saved all these hands
love being no weakness,
if you can see the fault
lovers might stay there.

We never have full sight
then don't follow blindly,
when never trying to see
look explore and be free.

By our dear poet catdok
reviewd by embe here,
in your fine words.

Simply Positive Review.
 Don't Run Aground  (E)
Poem for Weekly Image Prompt contest
#2062051 by catdok


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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
In this moment in time
preserving butter yes,
its done different
in my glass jars.

Easier to get at
on a cookie sheet,
by setting the oven
in 350 for 15-20 min.

Let sit on the towel
with cooling down,
there be sealed
popping sound.

By our Dovaine
the poem writer,
reviewed by embe
in your fine words.

Simply Positive Review.
 End Time Canning/Recipes  (E)
Preserving Butter?-Yes you can, but its done a little different
#2068022 by Dovaine




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Review of My Biography  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Just in time for being retired
my real blessing in life is,
for my daughter and son
such wonderful people.

I have copyrighted now
with self-published book,
in Beyond the Lighted Path
this book to answer questions.

By our self-published GerMac
reviewed by embe in your words
lovely for writing your poetry.

Simply Positive Review.
 
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My Biography  (E)
2015 Quills Nom Best New Port, promoted to Preferred Author
#2067894 by GerMac




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Review of In The Night  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
In this moment in time
hoping it would feel better,
talk about my pain but doesn't
at night when it hurts the worst.

I'm used to your arms holding me
you were the one held me there,
you are the one who broke me
for you to come back to me.

By our dear poet Foxx21
reviewed by embe here,
with your fine words
in the night.

Simply Positive Review.
 In The Night  (E)
I was hoping it would feel better to talk about my pain, but it doesn't.
#2067888 by Foxx21


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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
In this moment in time
the cat who played piano,
there in the dark night time
but he wouldn't play it for me.

My neighbors were quite puzzled
for it was very late you see,
the cat cared not at all
he had nowhere to be.

By our dearest Crow
reviewed by embe lovely,
in your descriptive words.

Simply Positive Review.
 
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THE CAT WHO PLAYED PIANO   (E)
Do you know what your pets are doing in the middle of the night?
#2067830 by Crow


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Review of Grandpa's Back!  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In this moment in time
the vision and symbols,
letters laid on a table
magnifier with no label.

Live your life with joy
stop uttering muttering,
this life is just by day
I lie awake now forgiven.

This ghost hasten to aid
when I'm lonely and afraid,
all symbols I leave behind
come alive within my mind.

By our Joy-Happy Hanukkah
reviewed by embe lovely,
with your fine words.

Simply Positive Review.
 
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Grandpa's Back!  (E)
A vision and symbols
#472213 by Joy


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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In this moment in time
with the word rain,
like tears drops
from the skies.

Storm lets out
this lonely sigh,
with her loneliness
waving her a goodbye.

Lost her a true love
everyone will pay,
drops in tears
it'll rain.

Stormy Lady
our dear poet,
reviewed by embe
in your fine words.

Simply Positive Review.
 When The Storm Cries  (E)
Tears drop from the skies.
#693463 by Stormy Lady




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Review of Last Night  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time
poem to remind ourselves,
or forget to use our voice
last night I dream of shadows.

Things aren't always so clear
at night a dream of secrets,
in those prisoners of pain
binding memory and fear.

Last night dream of fire
kindled by my single spark,
a reminder that if nurtured
by flame we overcome the dark.

Reviewed by embe lovely
for our Deck the Halls,
using your wording.

Simply Positive Review.
 Last Night  (E)
A poem to remind ourselves not to become complacent or forget to use our voice.
#2067391 by Deck the Halls


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Review of The Dark Hole  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
In this moment in time
Ghazel the hole in ice,
light fights to shine
icy edges a dark hole.

It comes from beneath
in all this darkness,
climbing the incline
so difficult to see.

They come together
and intertwine now,
in that dark hole
was a panda's paw.

By our PandaClaus
reviewed by embe,
your fine words
for the scene.

Simply Positive Review.
 The Dark Hole  (E)
A Ghazel about a hole in ice.
#1977763 by PandaPaws Licensed VetTech




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Review of The Cola Can  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In this moment in time
cola can tells harms,
with the drinking of
carbonated juices.

I am a Cola can,
i am drunk by man,
it make me to think
i would be used again.

But you people wont
say i am this one,
who pollutes
this city.

By Khavya
being Indhavi,
reviewed by embe
in your fine words.

Simply Positive Review.
 The Cola Can  (E)
Cola Can tells the harms of drinking carbonated juice and how these tins pollute the city.
#2067515 by Khavya Indhavi



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Review of Sisters.  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
In this moment in time
a sisters relationship,
she was a best friend
talking boys with me.

Then we grew apart
but kept in touch,
it was my sister
stayed strong.

Little in time
the best for her,
my earnest concern
to know where she is.

By our poet S.Valdez
reviewed by embe,
in your words
being sad.

Simply Positive Review.
 Sisters.  (E)
A sisters relationship.
#2067368 by -S.Valdez



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Review of A Poem About Time  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In this moment in time
greatest friend and foe,
one has ever come to know
then makes the soul divine.

In mender of hearts divided
helps a runner to compete,
with the teacher of men
in the ager of wine.

Reviewed by embe there
for our dear Hyperion,
advising this below
By: Adam Kaiser (Me)

Simply Positive Review.
A Poem About Time  (E)
Tick Tock Tick
#1987244 by A. Prescott






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Review of Berserker  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
In this moment in time
with the Viking poetry,
the call of the warrior
and of those defenders.

As with a rage against
the modern day mounts,
all hidden in the mind
beneath fields of snow.

A thousand years since
my ships of the dragon,
roaring from the North
will it be time again?

By our Thomas Morris
reviewed by embe now,
in your Viking poetry
within the Berserker.

Simply Positive Review
 Berserker  (E)
Viking poetry
#2067064 by Thomas Morris




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Review of I'm Inferno.  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
In this moment for now
my bleeding these days,
let the alphabets bleed
wonders was it destined.

Every inch of my soul
then it's desperately,
every pour of my body
fierce in passing day.

By our poet Inferno
in a review by embe,
within your wording
perfectly describes.

Simply Positive Review.
 I'm Inferno.  (E)
Let the alphabets bleed.
#2066876 by Inferno





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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
In this moment in time
is your dad here now,
asked the old cop
to this kid.

No he isn't
in a rush today,
was your mom here
she's not here either.

My parents scream allot
but never ever at me.
Kid i must tell you
remain silent now.

By Northern Optimist
reviewed by embe,
with your words
funny dialog.

Simply Positive Review.
 "My Parents Aren't Home"  (13+)
A funny dialog between a kid and a cop.
#1812219 by The Northern Optimist




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Review of Silence  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time
arose from my slumber,
on that silent morn
feeling melancholy.

I was joyously mad
feel my heart pound,
but not truly living
so deep in the ground.

But do not try alive
deep in the ground,
if laying so cold
singing no more.

By our Furlong
reviewed by embe,
in your fine wording
that dead man's tell.

Simply Positive Review.
 
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Silence  (E)
A Dead Man's Tell.
#2066797 by Furlong


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Review of Golden Years  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
In this moment in time
for the golden years,
being from yesterday
choose to relive.

If only it were
my power to give,
the special moments
time has locked away.

And I know this day
happiness than tears,
the children came along
our love sang sweet song.

By our Ann Ticipation
reviewed by embe now,
in your loving words
for golden years.

Simply Positive Review.
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Golden Years  (ASR)
I wrote this for a golden wedding. Alzheimer's meant Don no longer knew Hilary, his wife.
#1992071 by Ann Ticipation



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Review of WINTER  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment with time
every season has a breath,
character for defines life
where this may come and go.

For they can only aspire
to bequeath her beauty,
being the virgin white
from the other three.

Particularly that one
before I can open mine,
gift from others for me
there by dear lady-love.

By our dear ponkacheese
reviewed by embe here,
in your lovely words
for the winter.

Simply Positive Review.
 WINTER  (E)
Every season has a breath to it - a character that defines its life. It comes and goes...
#2065808 by ponkacheese




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Review of The Best Age  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time
for the best age today,
is not any of the ones
I've ever been before.

It's only going to run
there when out of time,
I'm ready for that now
brings me ever close.

Without the worries
to being adulthood,
child knows nothing
but blissful living.

By our dear Pony Tale
reviewed by embe here,
in your lovely words
for the best age now.

Simply Positive Review
 The Best Age  (E)
The Best Age
#757890 by Pony Tale


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Review of Symmetrical Sea  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E
In this moment in time
with the words of old,
symmetry challenges me
about the ebb and tide.

I fear the misty spray
where I have been lost,
voiceless to call out
here from where I lay.

Clamorous from spent
return is heaven sent,
within reversing walls
restore atrophy orders.

By our B Keith Compton
reviewed by embe here,
with your famous words
I relish arriving day.

Simply Positive Review.
 
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Symmetrical Sea  (E)
Symmetry challenges me in this poem about ebb and tide.
#1160976 by Brian K Compton


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Review of Rosanne  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time
all dressed up in black,
just like her daddy now
there in his footsteps.

Singing lots of sings
to writes most of her,
on old Gibson guitar
she is more at peace.

Oh Rosanne like a rose
in the golden sunshine,
like the raven flying
in the deep blue sky.

By our moontigerntn
reviewed by embe here,
in your lovely words.

Simply Positive Review.
 Rosanne  (E)
A description of Rosanne Cash, daughter of Johnny Cash. She has become a superstar.
#2066739 by moontigerntn




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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
In this moment in time
the short poem of hope,
for someone so special
with one in the future.

Each day that comes by
will bring us our joy,
in happiness will stay
never again my bye-bye.

My side ‘till I’m dying
now I wrap this prayer,
hope would end the way
then be my special one.

By our poet Tian Bi
in a review by embe,
lovely your words
in hope for you.

Simply Positive Review.
 Pray (Hope for you)  (E)
a short poem of hope for someone to be my special one in the future.....
#2066667 by Tian Bi


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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In this moment of reality
trying to act confidently,
cool with acting patiently
the things will always be.

But don’t be so foolish
can’t tell this future,
now let’s wait and see
in some idea absolutely.

Walking with a purpose,
our feet that are light,
with God’s vision right
there must be the fight.

By our fine poet Tim Chiu
reviewed by embe lovely,
your words God’s vision
of reality within faith.

Simply Positive Review.
 Let’s Wait and Not See  (E)
A helpful poem about reality and God's vision.
#1647598 by Tim Chiu



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Review of GRIEVED  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time
grieved this feeling,
to lose a loved one
in burrow of pain.

Within our crying
sitting by the bed,
the helpless partner
were never comforted.

Now my hope restored
relieved this rest,
now with sadness
time's healing.

By Endy Noble
reviewed by embe,
in your fine words
within being grieved.

Simply Positive Review.
 GRIEVED  (E)
Grieved is a poem that describes our feeling when we lose a loved one.
#2066692 by Endy Noble


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