The Steel Dragon in that moment in time sank in a squall
the rudder was used trying to help her steer to the shore,
but far too late she was leaking and singing fast
the Magic Horse now a memory forever
.
By our fine poet of note, PandaPaws
reviewed so lovely by embe,
your dearest friend for life.
Simply Positive Review.
In this sad moment in time the old cemetery
I take along my weed eater and a heavy rake,
I'd help him by raking the leaves from the trees
I'll think of my Dad when we'd pay our respects.
By our dearest poet of note being, Kings Tazzy,
reviewed by embe, I will pay my respects,
in your words that I have borrowed
in my deepest felt sympathy.
In this moment in time the thinker there
with the isolation effect their lives cease,
misery comes and attacks without joy
then left and the shrew was all alone.
Lovers isolation was this empty shell
fed on slugs and centipedes he caught,
on the day a cobra came and attacked
some people live like this shrewd shrew.
By our fine writer of note today
being reviewed by embe now,
seeing it there - Thinkerme.
Simply Positive Review.
ISOLATION EFFECT (E) isolation of any kind or form can not bring joy to one but sharing and friendship bring. #2034079 by thinker
In this moment in time the tower of words
some a strange circle then two words,
holds life.Three words, in one hand.
And his other, He grips death.
Above his head. No words, .
Circles those released.
Down at his feet,
Rot those deceased.
Many.Have been placed.
By him and his ways. Such sins.
His. Are like immovable stones.
That he at some point.Must find a way to carry.
He will have no choice.Not a one.The weight.
Will be crushing. So should it be .By embe.
in this review, Strange as it seams today,
for our fine poet of note lovely this scenery.
For Keaton Foster, ending with the title.
In This Kingdom. Simply Positive Review.
In that moment in time when the heat has risen
I pauses and then asked why invite me there.
Gary grinned and said what do you mean
to discover the sound that surprised me.
Well I’m glad I could come and find it
haystacks chow mein and noodles,
they’re my favorite snack if cold
i'm that awkward kid with jokes.
There at day camp saying my 'hi'
your friends and you are very nice,
they welcomed me forever and a day
now we are quite a team in this review.
Simply Positive Review, by embe there,
for our fine writer of note being -Than Pence.
STATIC
Winter Summer Party (E) I'm invited to a birthday party with an unusual theme and for someone I don't really like. #2007884 by Than Pence
Filth in this moment in time
with the stench of my honesty.
believe me not, is that strange
embe will review in these words.
By our fine poet of note joseph
steps that may lead me in clarity,
guiding me with your fine thoughts
this want of my life to be arranged.
In the shade of guilt it won't be dim
now helping me, Almighty man above,
in the scene of begging for mercy please
for a final verdict - Simply Positive Review.
Filth (13+) Filthy habits die hard, change is harder, but with faith, everything is possible #2034278 by JosLav
My vision of tomorrow in this moment in time
is self inflicted sorrow piled on in my sums,
the winning hands we crave every day
in this most stupid cupid’s game.
Now crumbling into debris
before our very eyes,
restructured now
in peacetime.
For my heart
the mind now relies,
from memories of old
there in the space of time.
By our fine poet of note
for wonderful member Logan,
reviewed by embe in this scene -
My Simply Positive Review Lovely.
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When i was a child twelve tears old in that moment in time,
my roots were planted on the other side of the fence,
calling out in an embrace welcoming me home,
figuring out the path to my sanctuary
there forever more in my mind.
The air smells much cleaner up here,
that place in which to escape all by myself,
this is where my love of trees began in my mind,
memories of TJ Marie reviewed lovely there by embe.
In this scenery of wonderful for - Simply Positive Review.
Sanctuary (E) Description of my favourite place when I was 12 years old #2034326 by TJ Marie
In this moment in time a whomble is real
so rare when touching the softest fur.
Ralphie slurred sarcastically
what an idiotic name.,
glaring at Annabelle.
She called back
do I have to apologize
you screaming ripped off?
Ralphie slurred sarcastically
with his twisted prominent nose.
Watching the creature stretch out
its wings there in the breeze,
for embe to review lovely
the Rising Star Review,
Carly - No Chocolate.
In this moment in time the smiling head
dressed in purple with a grin a happy face,
I have a slight problem that needs fine skills,
maybe a call to our fine, Hello,Dr. Frankenstein,
of course, I would never expect to request your head
now been diagnosed with a mild case of schizophrenia.
It would be amusing to see this astonished look now
to kiss the mirror on a suitor's nasty dreadful face,
by our fine poet of note in my seeing Whitemorn
reviewed by embe - Simply Positive Review.
In a moment in time of grief, I should have beat him more
appalled by the words my baby just uttered today,
that gift from the bastard evil monster.
Satan himself was there today
hearing the dreadful screams,
now I am so furious.
The judge called for order
a parent's grief is immeasurable,
I could barely keep it together anyway.
You should know I raised him knowing Jesus,
by our famous poet of note being J. E. Durham,
reviewed by embe, I hope it was your fine story of fiction.
She will stare and stare until I share it with her
these many things for which I give thanks,
but my kitten has taught me about life
she will melt into this soft sleep.
Staring until I share it with her
when stranded on top of it falling now,
don't you ever dare for me to touch it again
as long as we have fun along the way to bed.
By our wonderful poet of note, silverfeathers,
reviewed by embe in this scenery today,
my lovely Rising Stars Review.
A billionaire tried and true in this moment in time
to raise money for charity we gave trinkets,
bright decorations throughout are free
only if you pay me in a bribe.
Advertising is my skill lying
the soul and shows are in m new will,
I'm a business man why can't you see it
now I regret things that are between the lines.
By our fine poet of note being Rhychus there
for embe to review, my Simply Positive Review.
In this moment in time of laughter
she plugged the toilet with her pillow,
but with a batting of her eyes, she asked
I don’t ever want to be your uncle anymore.
But o so sorry this child is a ton of trouble
during nap time, she won't stay in bed,
when my sister finally came i cried
but I really hate a naughty kid.
By our lonely poet of note
hiding in Writing.Com,
reviewed by embe
in this scenery
for Courtney.
Simply Positive Review
STATIC
Courtney (ASR) One child, a ton of trouble. Wrote this for a humorous poetry contest. #2033822 by Tab
In that moment in time when I was young and innocent
I wish I could remember all the words in a melody,
she loved to sing this lovely new rhapsody
that seemed her saddest in the rain.
I must have shed a thousand tears
lonely she died, it happened in that rain,
seemed the saddest in the dark skies above
maybe my mother died wishing for her thousand tears.
By our fine poet of note, for dear C. Blake Thornton.
Reviewed by embe sad it happened in the rain,
with this my Simply Positive Review.
Mother (13+) When I was young & innocent my mother sang a song. I wish I could remember all the words. #1736397 by C. Blake Thornton
In this moment in time the fear goes into me
all I can see is silver and red like a needle,
wishing that it would just end it today
covering me like a blanket of fear.
Everything is now crashing around
I stop and think, am I my own enemy,
another day of thought in this my silence
all I can see as my memory is fading away.
By our new member being - SilentDead
reviewed by embe with your words
to be my Simply Positive Review.
In this moment in time dedicated to my Grandpa
who jokes and sings with laughter all day,
hugs me tight with kisses so sweet
because Granma is jealous,
There is nothing he can't do
likes bananas and his best ice cream,
driving too fast there may be a stop sign
Oh, what laughtet when Grandpa comes to dinner.
By our dear poet of note Cubby laughing at embe
in this my funny review, in a scenery below.
My Simply Positive Review.
In this moment in time the rusty bells doleful shout
leaving this world with echoes of a final chime,
with the old rusty clock also a sorrowful sight
chiming as in this lovely refrain poem.
With all my loves and all my friends
no there is no peace for my soul in sorrow,
it's time for one last peal, to know, “It’s time.”
by our dear fine poet of note being bumblegrum.
Reviewed by embe in the scene below.
My Simply Positive Review.
In this moment in time to wipe away your tears
demons of solitude want to haunt you forever,
it's screams echoing through a lonely soul
light of my love will always be yours.
That God will answer you prayers
the darkness will never consume you,
his whispers speak to your heart and mind
leading the way through darkness into the light.
By our fine writer of note on this page
for embe to review the long poem,
by Whispers Of A Broken Angel.
Simply Positive Review.
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