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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this sad moment in time the church is withering away
I am filled with questions that I ask God in this life,
to experience his saving grace on my knees
feeling his blessing in my life today.

Being a part of the human race
is something that needs my daily worship,
I can remember the days of wondering if my life
would be outside the church if I didn't pray every day.

By our fine writer of note the drifter so amazing
being reviewed lovely in this scenery below -
My Simply Positive Review.
 The church of the withered hand  (E)
I will use this to get ready for a sermon this week
#2033673 by drifter


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Review of Mind Walls  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time whitewashed walls of my mind
stained the colors red now bleeding through why,
this the time to take me back to the wards
now in the hospital deeply breathing.

Old air trapped between the boards
fresh oxygen is taken in daily,
now my nails are removed
thrown into the trash.

By our SusanF
reviewed by embe,
lovely in the scenery -
Simply Positive Review.

 Mind Walls  (E)
A poem comparing memories to walls.
#2033632 by SusanF




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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time the treasured memories
filling my dreams at night and day today,
the past is gone in my thoughts
love for eternity there.

Dreams are better
so may God bless you now,
my darling for leaving me all alone
I pray each night you will come back home.

By our fine poet of note for dear Kings
reviewed by embe in this scenery -
Simply Positive Review.


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Review of Reflective Sorrow  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This moment in time I don’t want you to cry again
I simply want to ease my heart and live again,
no alcohol, no drugs to blame my body
in innocence tormented this day.

That rage within portrayed evil
beating me behind these closed doors,
all that is left in this dark deep black hole
though in time has eased my heart from pain.

By our fine poet of note being alfcollier
reviewed with sadness by embe.
Simply Positive Review.
 Reflective Sorrow  (E)
reminisces of the past
#2033323 by alfcollier



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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
In this moment in time of repetition lovely
ElaineElaine where are you hiding,
trying to dig these new holes
on the worn out linoleum.

Filling it with your wiggles
with a mop and bucket,
chuckle, chuckle
there you are.

Laughing now
I don't need this,
biting my finger nails
where is ferret Bradley?

By our fine poet of note
reviewed lovely by embe,
in this new scenery below.
My Simply Positive Review.


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Review of Unbroken  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
In this moment in time that shapes two into one.
within the Infinite faith a strength over doubt,
now withstanding these tests of time
when silence is piercing the ear.

Will it all remain unbroken
in tempests tears and sorrow,
quiet lonesome and melancholy
within the mind lies the answers.

By our fine poet of note
for dearest L A Powell.
Reviewed by embe
in this scenery -

Simply Positive Review.
 Unbroken  (ASR)
Infinite faith, a strength over doubt, forms an uncommon bond that shapes two into one.
#1373473 by L. A. Powell







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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In this moment in time with these forty lines
Jatog the Green named Ebenezer Scrooge,
that saw the day but not the light today.
this revelation of his tender soul.

Now so noble and unselfish goal
there this new place to hide,
his feelings in plain sight
the Christmas spirit.

By Jatog the Green
scowling now,
in a photo
staring,

At embe now
with my review,
lovely on this page,
Simply Positive Review.
 
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Exposing the Underbelly  (E)
The softer side of Scrooge.
#2033609 by Jatog the Green


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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In this moment in time for her demons
he would do anything for her today,
wiping away her sad tears
there in the darkness.

They tore her apart
hiding from these fears,
let me take them far away
this way to stop their attacks.

By our fine poet HannahChatelier
reviewed lovely by embe here.
Simply Positive Review.
 Even if Saving You Sends Me to Hell...  (E)
He would do anything for her. Anything to save her from her demons.
#2033562 by HannahChatelier



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Review of Cosmos  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this the time time with jagged lines
some are long and others so short.

a marker of life guides the way
watches silently from a distant star

where the lights go out
shades of black shift to purples

waiting
for stars to die

solidifying our fate with their own
by our fine poet Emily Quinn.

Reviewed by embe
lovely in the scenery - Cosmos.

Simply Positive Review.
 Cosmos  (E)
Poetry of the Stars
#2033068 by Emily Quinn



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Review of I'm mad  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
In this moment in time I am mad by River,
to open the door to a wall of snow today,
grabbing my shovel smashed the wall
for embe to say how lovely you are.

Welcome to writing . com forever
winter will never make you mad,
skating along in your kitchen
if you shovel fast enough.

Simply Positive Review.
STATIC
I'm mad  (13+)
Poem for The Humorous Poetry Contest
#2033232 by River


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Review of Motion Blur  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time because we are dying
one second when you are lost and lonely,
my life is now going by too fast
will you miss me now?

Take a job and money
just tell them no to my needs,
I will stand up high and don't you fear
how you may feel before it's too late now.

Reviewed by embe for our fine poet,
welcome to Alexander Holiday.
Simply Positive Review.
 Motion Blur  (E)
A poem about not waiting too long.
#2033144 by Alexander Holiday




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Review of My eyes  
Review by embe
In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment of emptiness
my eyes by MFrederick,
there in the distance
a blank stare.

So emotional
in this my attempt,
portrayed I can't explain
forced this stuff on the page.

I'v tried for weeks and days
in this most physical pain,
for embe to review
this new day.

Paper Doll Gang Rockin' Reviewer's Group.

 
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My eyes  (E)
A brief description of emptiness.
#1944014 by Matthew Frederick






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Review of Walks in life  
Review by embe
In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time, jimminy cricket the critic
for paper doll gang lovely, featured in shadows
contemplating, he takes his time today.

Follows what was a well beaten path,
walking alone remembering the forest so deep,
there he walks in Faith to find the truth within him.

Reviewed lovely for - The Paper Doll Gang Contest.
by embe - Featured in Shadows.


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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time when the moon is high
Selene looks down on the earth below,
where you can feel the presence
of the reaper.

Grim and proper
gathering these lonely souls.
that once were on their sailing vessels
dreaming and desires magical and mystical.

Reviewed lovely for our poet, Spanky De.
By embe in this - Simply Positive Review.
 When The Moon Is High  (E)
Poem about life under the high moon
#2032765 by Spanky De - We Got This!





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Review of I Was  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In this wonderful moment in time
to review a stunning poem,
by our dear poetpea
for embe today.

So beautiful
there on a page,
lovely the scenery
like your hour glass.

Counting the time
spinning me around,
seeing the stars in space
will you stop me catch me,
in my Simply Positive Review.

 I Was  (E)
A poem on love
#2032542 by poetpea


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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
In that beautiful healing moment with time
I gave him a home with everlasting light.,
the loving ability to live a normal life
this bright light to come alive.

Sweet music I can hear again
once loved me when I was young,
now confessing my sins of the past
eternity now would stay in my company.

By our famous poet of note today.
Elisa, Bunny Stik in my review,
by embe in this scenery -
Simply Positive Review.

 Give Me That Light  (18+)
It was a beautiful night...
#737410 by Elisa the Bunny Stik


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Review of She Is  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
In this moment in time when your future looks bleak,
you will move on to write until your heart breaks
plucking up the courage to manage it,
feeling souls sorry for her.

She is not there anymore
now that you're gone again to end it,
the poor boy she left broken unreachable again
so now she’ll move on wanting to find a new target,

By our Antimony, runandhide reviewed by embe,
lovely in this scenery below -
Simply Positive Review.

 She Is  (E)
For the boy she left heartbroken
#2032479 by Antimony


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Review of Toymaker  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time the toy maker
in this glistening world of silver rain,
willows pirouette all night and day
with that stardust paintbrush.

As the night shines energy
power to hold the light,
residing behind me
with open eyes.

In the galaxies
of the purple sky,
in the space of time
utopia existing outside.

By dear Doormandan
reviewed by embe here,
in those sparkling images.

Simply Positive Review.
 Something In the Woods (PART 1)  (18+)
The story is finally done! Enjoy!
#2032016 by TheGrunt_Ryan


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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In a moment in time an ode to dissociation
she is a vision I speak into existence,
within the old glass house I live
where she cleans a window.

Introducing transparency
or forgetting it belongs to me,
when I stumble over these words
shattering things that protect me most.

By our fine poet of note, Katethepoet
reviewed by embe in this scene -
Simply Positive Review.

 An Ode to Dissociation : She  (E)
This is a poem a wrote that is intended to be pretty personal.
#2032207 by KateThePoet



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Review of A man unknown  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time a man unknown
bewildered by ignorance to be known,
discernment may be bewildered
like an old man's hand.

For I am sad and lonely
dreaming the horror of tomorrow,
this deathly feeling of being ignored
the dying thought that may never leave.

By our fine poet here, Ignatius Reilly.
Reviewed by embe in this scene -
Simply Positive Review.

 A man unknown  (E)
Jail time for all
#2030675 by Ignatius Reilly




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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
In this moment in time the Doctor was here
he would destroy Earth there and then,
this planet has come to its end
let this lesson be given.

He refused to change
destroying the ship long after him,
they would never have a third chance
the black hole of death will not be enough.

By our fine poet of note being Kirby,
reviewed by embe in this scene -
Simply Positive Review.
 The Doctor Was Here  (ASR)
Nero survived again...but not for long.
#1745163 by Kirby



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Review of Hourglass  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In the hourglass of time
the sand trickles,
along so fast
in our lives.
Waiting
to live again,
so often we cry
shedding our tears.
Remember your life
hold each grain so close
and who we cherished,
in special moments
every day now,
in this hourglass
for our poet of note
in the review for Sum!
by embe in this scenery.

Simply Positive Review.
 Hourglass  (E)
A Shape Poem. We live our lives day to day; they flow by, like sand through an hourglass.
#1803220 by Sum1



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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In this moment in time
I would if I could,
do it all over
Ohhhh....

If only
for our lives,
so much better
I would do it all over.

lives so much better
being so young,
in a flash
today.

Yes
in a song,
for my mother
brighter tomorrows.

By dear Temagami
a poet of note,
lovely here
by embe..

Simply Positive Review.
 I WOULD IF I COULD  (E)
A Mother looking back at the hurts & struggles over the years for her and her children.
#2032078 by Temagami (Guiding Light)



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Review of Black Train  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
In this moment in time the black train
hush while passing souls away,
midnight comes along
whistling to escape.

In a memory dark
my booze and smoke,
penetrating these lungs
I wake dazed and confused.

Deep there crying why me
my eyes are wandering,
floating in the air
in my ear.

By Rhayven
our fine writer of note,
reviewed lovely by embe
this SimplyPositive Review.

 Black Train  (13+)
The hush of the midnight train comes along to whisk passing souls away.
#1882302 by Rhayven



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Review of Loaded  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
In this moment in time.
Loaded by Jellyfish,
about depression
on earth.

Upon me
so crushing,
weight of the world
crushing my footsteps

By passing strangers
shouting out loud,
like screaming
dying here.

Cool water
for coconuts,
here in heaven
earth disappearing.

By our poet of note
lovely Jellyfish,
in a review
by embe.

Note -
Your other review
three stars a disgrace.

Simply Positive Review.
 
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Loaded  (13+)
Freeform poem about depression
#2031804 by Jellyfish-on holiday


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