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Review of Despair  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this most sad moment in time
broken within a storm of pain,
by these wounding winds
now lost in pain.

So young to cry
weeping lonely tears,
eyes dimmed in blindness
without your comforting arms.

Caused to carry the weight
these battered, bruised,
in life's casualties
of despair.

by our Vivian
the poet of note,
reviewed by embe
in this scenery below -

Simply Positive Review.

 Despair  (E)
Divorce effects a child negatively when adults won't be adults.
#548185 by Vivian


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Review of If Only  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time if only
take back, undo, remove it,
revise, rewrite or lose it
to edit or atone

No guarantee
that we will see it,
the better life for you
with this brand new deal.

If only I could change it
the chance for when,
to congratulate
our poet of note.

Elby Wordsmith
reviewed by embe,
with this starry scene
Simply Positive Review.

 If Only  (E)
The past is done the future a blank canvas
#1502748 by Elby Wordsmith



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Review of Winter  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In this moment in time
when I rise from my bed,
I love to eat right every day
downtown at the health club.
Reading to the tiny elves
about those ice fairies,
writing a new poem
whimsical waves.
There all white
this frosty king,
married the queen
our dearest Maryann.
The lovely poet of note
reviewed by embe today,
with these stars shining
 Winter  (E)
Acrostic poem about winter
#1843455 by Maryann - House Martell


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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In this moment in Ireland
hooves is staring at me,
there in the green grass
nearby the old grey wall.

Holding my breath
as he wants to go,
serious conditioning
I am trying my best.

By our lovely writer
Fenton Bullontino,
reviewed by embe
lovely the scenery.

Simply Positive Review.
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Hooves - a self portrait  (E)
Picture of Me Taken By Me - Artistic Breakthrough, Stunning Beauty
#1065107 by ♥Hooves♥


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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In that moment in time
as I wander'd all alone,
there with this thought
our America's nature.

Minnesota snowflake
I admired the beauty,
crystalline essence
in the bright sunlight.

By our poet of note
dear lovely Kraken,
reviewed by embe
seeing the scenery.

Simply Positive Review.

 As I Wander'd Lone through Nature  (E)
An original poem in the style of Walt Whitman.
#591761 by St. Patrickraken


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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
In a moment in time he is Bile Smog's last of the hopeful,
for he is the only resident to imagine that he could live
to achieve, locating heaven's atmos as the explorer.

The bile smog is for the poor. sixteen year old Glint
in a place where a child's aspirations go to die,
abandoning the bile smog in a cloud.

By our fine writer in space
being our santocorey,
reviewed by embe.

Simply Positive Review.
 the lowest of the atmos  (13+)
Glint Blindside, a mirror adaptable wielding 16 year old boy from bile smog dares to dream
#2029103 by santocorey


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Review of Enough Rizal!  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In this moment in time at the funeral
you gave us your heart, body and soul,
enough Rizal, enough! rest now in serenity.

Your dreams in this lovely land we appreciate
carve in our hearts and soul forever now,
brightened up our hearts to dwell.

By our poet of note, Mage Gervic
reviewed lovely by embe here..
Simply Positive Review.

 
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Enough Rizal!  (E)
A poem dedicated to our national hero, Dr. Jose P. Rizal
#1771493 by GERVIC 🐉 House Targaryen


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Review of Without You  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In this moment in time without you
I dreamed I miss you in my life,
the inspiration now needed
from a true friend of mine.

Angels in my ear
lovely Audria_k,
your contest
in kindness.

Lovely there
for our members,
smiling and singing
delighted when winning.

Reviewed by embe now
in a Simply Positive Review.

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Without You  (E)
I hear you in the wind.
#1971465 by Angels in my Ear





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Review of fit  
Review by embe
In affiliation with  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time
things' in life "fit together,
synchronized information
watching like a scientist,
looking into the brain cells
beneath the white blanket.

When first i found a smile
lips twisted in this curve,
cupping my butt as i lay
my thoughts bubble-up,
if my mouth opens up
to review our Christo.

The fine poet of note
by embe, a lovely poem
in my Rising Star Review.

 fit  (E)
an attempt to portray how 'things' in life "fit tiogether"... a work in progress...
#1858015 by christo


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Review of The Past Inspires  
Review by embe
In affiliation with  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In that moment in time
the past inspires me,
when I look back
to my ancestors.

In family's life
praying each day,
there on my knees
these fine treasures.

A wondrous thought
there in her soul,
for my child
smiling.

Singing
her hymns,
tilling the land
taming the forest.

Reviewed by embe
lovely this scene,
our poet of note
Jeanne Riggs.

Rising Star Review.
 The Past Inspires  (E)
Appreciation and encouragement of seeking ancestry.
#1413068 by Jeanne Riggs Workman



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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In a moment of truthfulness
forgive me my weakness,
help me I ask you
with trust.

Who I am
with faithfulness,
and I shall honor you
please help me I ask you..

When crying why me now
I try to see the good
with things in life
every day.

By embe
in a fine review,
for our poet of note
darling honeysuklerose.

 Lost in the wilderness  (E)
I wrote this at a low point, it is a prayer of sorts.
#2027961 by kittyloving


Simply Positive Review.


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Review of Portraits  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In this moment in time
the portrait on the wall,
with her smiling at me
in that poem she wrote.

Take me by the hand
in the setting sunshine,
gazing at the dolphins
under the cloudy sky.

Reviewed by embe
for our poet of note,
Sharlea and Sharon
maybe twins for me..

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Portraits  (E)
A poem I wrote for Hopeless Romantics Contest when I first joined WdC
#1256009 by Sharon


Simply Positive Review.


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Review of What Do I Have?  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In this sad moment in time
all along the horse was mine,
now she's gone; the track is bare
no one taught me how to lose,
or what I shouldn't choose.

I thought we'd never part.
behind the fence by the road,
love flowed through my heart
by embe with this review,
Ponito our poet of note.

 What Do I Have?  (E)
I had thought all along the horse was mine, but I was wrong.
#1305081 by Pony Tale


Simply Positive Review.


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Review of Monthly Goals  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In this most busy time
for the weekly goals,
in your January
by Diane.

Our darling moderator
staffmember,
sgambill 72
lovely.

Poetry 100 %.
Horror Newsletter
always the same 100%.

The Winter Romance
closed for judging
now at 5%.

To relax
on a holiday,
time to dine out.

By embe today
for our writer of note.
Simply Positive Review.

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Review of The Shoes  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
In this horrific moment in time
so damn many pairs of shoes,
left behind as a remembrance
never again to hope in a prayer.

Wept raged hoped and dreamed
these lessons we never learnt,
huddled together being so cold
three and four on that dirty bunk.

Will we ever see the light again
being those echoes of the past,
by our so saddened poet of note
LiveToWrite Kimberly D. Huggins.

Reviewed by embe in sympathy.
The Shoes  (13+)
A freestyle poem about The Holocaust and the lessons learned.
#2025868 by LiveToWrite


My Simply Positive Review.
Image - #1208115


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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In that moment in time
memories of Napatree
at the point in January,

hiking on the beach
my eyes got misty
there with my tears.

Memories in thought
toasting each other
our years together,

my darling Mary
in her resting place
she always requested.

By our loving writer
Sailior M in a review
by embe for my friend.

 Memories Of Napatree  (E)
Hiking on the beach; strolling through memories.
#1831582 by Sailor M


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Review of Ode to the Moon  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In this moment in time
with ode to the Moon,
the flowers will bloom
showing its grandeur.

elegance venerated
there in the Heavens,
beauty praised by all
light in the night sky.

Beautifully decorated
fair maid of the sky,
you bring the light
by our poet of note.

Welcome Shafayet
with your lovely poem,
for embe here below.
A Review from "Simply Positive Forum.


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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
With time and faith in prayer every day
let us respond to Christ's invitation of love,
there on our knees we may see face to face
Jesus shares his awesome power of resurrection.

Do this in remembrance of the body of dear Christ
your mountains of worry would now be removed,
his Holy Spirit will be guiding us day by day
by our faithful writer of note the kind drifter.

Reviewed by embe with my regards,
in this Simply Positive Review.

 God's Greatest Gift  (E)
A sermon about God's greatest Gift
#2007855 by drifter


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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time
here by the sea and sand,
is such an enchanted place
designed by Natures Mother.

The beauty of this creation
essential with formation,
sand to hold it down
the sea so smooth.

With coarse grain
forging such a nature,
by our fine poet of note
reviewed lovely by embe.


Simply Positive Review.
 The Sea and the Sand  (E)
The Sea and the Sand
#2025151 by Mac1







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Review of Dust  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This moment in time in Gambia
they are on a lonely journey,
to find this better world
will I say come?

Crawling now
my limbs are filthy,
but their way is clear
they say we trust our feet.

By our dearest Serendipity
a wonderful poet of note,
reviewed by embe
for - Dust.

Simply Positive Review.
Dust  (E)
Written when I was living and teaching English in The Gambia.
#2018712 by Serendipity M


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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
In this moment in time
with regards to racism,
a call for change for all
we need to change now.

For sons and daughters
may they live in society,
portraying young blacks
now to be our neighbors.

Confirmed within laws
by Ben Langhinrichs,
our fine poet of note
reviewed by embe.

Simply Positive Review.
 My fellow white Americans  (13+)
A call for change for all, but especially white Americans, with regards to racism.
#2021253 by Ben Langhinrichs


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Review of The Priest  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time
penalties do tempt me,
in saints and spirits
what I see now.

Into the heart
can I still find it?
Way into my mind
I pray for the answer.

See queries as a start
a path to redemption,
inside the book
I will find it.

ByTophers
a poet of note,
reviewed by embe
Simply Positive Review.

 The Priest  (E)
This is a short poem about finding true religion.
#2023355 by Tophers



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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (3.5)
In this moment with time
that snowy girl with parasol,
led me there by nature's call
to the angel of the icy squall.

There I see though the years
this youth walking in snow,
on that cold winters day
now in my mind's eye.

Reviewed by embe
for our fine poet,
dear catdok
today.

Simply Positive Review.

 Snowy Girl With Parasol  (E)
Poem about a girl in winter
#2022296 by catdok


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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In a moment of sadness
my Dad has Alzheimer's,
helpless and depressed
coped with his disease.

I thank God for his love
and influence everyday!
He taught me all I know
in the good values of life.

Life is this precious gift
reviewed by embe now,
for our writer of note
dearest Janicepistek.

Simply Positive Review.

 
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How My Father's Alzheimer's Impacted Me  (E)
Alzheimers impacts the individual and family members. profoundly.
#1967101 by express




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Review of All For Her  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
In a moment in time
with some rhyme,
all for her now
feel her love.

Keep her safe
on that new day,
by the good Lord
fighting for freedom.

Sending her prayers
to find him alive,
keep him safe
from dying.

Going home
in his memory,
by StarvingArtist
our fine poet of note.

Simply Positive Review.

 All For Her  (13+)
A poem not only in honor of our troops, but for the women who support them.
#2022928 by StarvingArtist





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