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Review of Death  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
In this sad moment in time
human beings are helpless,
I never imagined why this
if their beloved ones die.

In front of their eyes
but cannot do anything,
once living then dead
Soul is out of a body.

By our fine poet HRK
reviewed by embe now,
within your wording
life is so short.

Simply Positive Review.
 Death  (E)
Life is short so one should live it responsibly.
#2066406 by HRK


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Review of Positivity  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
In this moment in time
para bout positvty 4m,
percption of D Grl Wd
too Mny Extravgnt Drms.

Outside world is dark
a sun will soon smile,
portrays your positive
it is in a reflection.

Everything will happen
in you depends on how,
when you perceive this
it's no rocket science.

By our dear a,srivasta
reviewed by embe here,
in your fine wording.

Simply Positive Review.
 Positivity  (E)
A smll para bout positvty 4m my percption, percption of D Grl Wd Too Mny Extravgnt Drms...
#2066397 by The Girl With Too Many Extravagant Dreams


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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
In this moment in time
how to select ten jobs,
this was originally now
published BroBible.com.

The career satisfaction
is diminishing yearly,
with these statistics
to leave your comments.

By our Clemens Augustus
reviewed by embe here,
in your fine wording
for everyone to share.

Simply Positive Review.
 10 Jobs You Wish You Had  (13+)
This was originally published on BroBible.com.
#2066309 by Clemens Augustus


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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
In this moment in time
digitally and in print,
in suburban newspaper
doing it for Halloween.

With a lot of pumpkins
you know your carving,
making pumpkin dessert
a Halloween attraction.

By our Clemens Augustus
reviewed by embe here,
in your fine wording.

Simply Positive Review.
 What are you doing...David Liu?   (E)
Originally published in Suburban Trends newspaper - both digitally and in print.
#2066306 by Clemens Augustus



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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In this moment in time
with two and a half stars,
a disgrace for the reviewer
by embe with my correct review.

Leaves all around fall fashion
published in Darpan magazine,
the wind will be blowing
what will you be wearing?

Dress for the season now
in power of Mother Earth’s,
most fashionable season yet
planning execute and work it.

Reviewed by embe so lovely
for poet Clemens Augustus,
in your fashion season
words of wonder.

Simply Positive Review.
 Leaves All Around...Fall Fashion 2015  (E)
Originally published in Darpan magazine - digitally and in print.
#2066308 by Clemens Augustus





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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In this moment in time
with so many questions,
on one should be loved
when love for the poor.

One to suffer for food
treat them with no wick,
not the money they find
love will be in the air.

By our poet Khavya Indhavi
reviewed by embe lovely,
in your fine words.

Simply Positive Review.
 Love is in the air  (E)
This poem tells the basis on which one should be loved.
#2066275 by Khavya Indhavi





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Review of Splayed Fingers  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
In this moment in time
he sits there beside me,
with his splayed fingers
my nerve is aware of this.

I watch lecturer blindly
to hear if he is deafly,
with nervousness quivers
now there in my stomach.

Excitement in my chest
hand upon my own thigh,
now smooth fingers curl
breathing again I smile.

By our poet JD Obermeier
reviewed by embe here,
in your word contest
possible newbie.

Simply Positive Review.
Splayed Fingers  (E)
Possible newbie 100 word contest entry.
#2065215 by JD Obermeier


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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
With this moment in time
our canvas life awaits us,
so blank at the beginning
when we wake each new day.

Blank until we decide now
which colors to splash on,
painting the asymmetrical
end the day as a portrait.

It can be our own design
or we will allow others,
to add their own creation
key to life knowing which.

By our dear poet Kenzie
reviewed lovely by embe,
in your lovely wording.

Simply Positive Review.
 Life is Like an Artist's Canvas  (E)
Another entry for the Life Analogy Contest.
#598368 by Kenzie


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Review of The Abyss  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
With this review for you
in your words by embe,
edge up to the rim
toes gripping.

Never ends well
refuse this journey,
inch closer and closer
you've been here before.

Tears forming in eyes
trying to avoid it,
the nobody cares
why come?

Simply Positive Review.
 The Abyss  (E)
Do you dare to look into its depths?
#2065137 by Free Gift With Purchase


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Review of Untitled 1  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (3.5)
In this moment in time
poem about fishermen,
in all their life
no money to buy.

Or cook a lamb
or to buy a coat,
misery in their life
carry on live so plain.

By poet peacefulhippie
reviewed by embe now,
in your fine words.

Simply Positive Review.
 Untitled 1  (E)
A poem about fishermen losing their livelihood due due to a growth in industrialization.
#2065110 by peacefulhippie


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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time
Happy Birthday with love,
to my Grandma and Grandpa
I will miss the two of you.

Her family is great all day
and you’d love them there,
great time with Grandpa
give love to Grandma.

By our dear poet Amay
reviewed by embe,
in your words
so lovely.

Simply Positive Review.
Happy Birthday, Daddy  (E)
Birthday Greetings- Acrostic format for my Dad's birthday 9/5
#1808376 by Amay



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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (3.5)
In this moment in time
what will be left there,
after we die and missed
trying to say a good by?

Would you bite your lip
and say that you're okay,
when if my soul was taken
there if my memory fading.

By our new poet Lissa
reviewed by embe here,
in your lovely wording.

Simply Positive Review.
 What Will Be Left   (E)
What is left after we die? Will we really be missed? What do we leave behind?
#2065129 by Lissa


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Review of Madame Birch  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
In that moment in time
with this gold and green,
dappled frieze of speckles
swaying in the autumn breeze.

Filigree of lace-like leaves
dancing under ice-blue sky,
Autumn her elegant best
kissing summer's rest.

By our dear poet Annie
reviewed by embe now,
in your fine words
so lovely here.

Simply Positive Review.
 Madame Birch  (E)
A poem about a weeping birch tree losing its summer glory as autumn begins.
#2065086 by Annie


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Review of Untitled Dos.  
Review by embe
Rated: E | (3.5)
In this moment in time
with the untitled dos,
dreams of many now
and hopes of one.

Living in a tower
but living in a lie,
when having to cower
hope to find the place.

By poet peacefulhippie
reviewed by embe here,
your corporate world
the lyric poem.

Simply Positive Review.
 Untitled Dos.  (E)
A lyric poem about the race up the ladder in the corporate world.
#2065111 by peacefulhippie


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Review of November  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In this moment in time
she blows the trees bare,
sprinkles snow dust in air
a frosting with morning dew.

November takes a nip or two
fading light brings day close,
so quickly now in sweet repose
November exits to snowy December.

By our dearest poet being Sabaka
reviewed by embe in your words,
lovely in the creation here
simply positive review.

 
STATIC
November  (E)
What a character November can be! 3rd place in Newbie Poetry Contest for November 2015.
#2065002 by tucknits


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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In this moment of remembrance
the living years from a song,
by Mike and his famous band
we would listen for hours.

Remember driving in a car
where it really hit me hard,
when he was alive to remember
dad and I never saw eye to eye.

By our dearest poet Lynda
reviewed by embe there,
in your minds eye
the memory.

Simply Positive Review.
 In the Living Years by Mike and the mec  (E)
say the things to your love ones while they are alive
#2029443 by Lynda Miller



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Review of My wife  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (3.5)
In this moment in time
how I want my wife to be,
when i'm ill this morning
I can't go outside anymore.

Now I am sad and depressed
I want her to calm my fear
here gently and comforting
I will be my good husband.

By our poet Poemwriter
reviewed by embe here,
in your caring words
how to be a wife.

Simply Positive Review.
 My wife  (E)
How I want my wife to be
#2064993 by Poemwriter


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Review of A Light Puzzle  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In that moment in time
with this light puzzle,
my dear brother pointed
spot an odd-shaped end.

Snapping the sky piece
flashed a boyish grin,
as lights were dimmed
then a room grew dark.

Now huddled together
in awe of that fear,
familiar voices cry
our rescue was here.

By our poet Sabaka
reviewed by embe,
in your wording
lovely scenery.

Simply Positive Review
 
STATIC
A Light Puzzle  (E)
What happens to a puzzle when the lights go out? A Writer's Cramp Entry.
#2065050 by tucknits




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Review of Just a Girl  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (3.5)
In this moment in time
just the girl they say,
traveling through pain
sorrow life and death.

Those people may say
only make this girl,
now more courageous
walk through fire.

To be recognized
as that woman,
now fearless
by Poet.

Reviewed by embe.

Simply Positive Review.
 Just a Girl  (E)
Poetry- hope this inspires all, this is one of my favorite poems that I've written enjoy!!
#2065020 by Poet


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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time
on the first and third,
Wednesday of the month
I express my emotions.

With grief counseling
acceptance of reality,
in no one to care for
mileposts that passed.

By our famous poet
reviewed by embe,
in your wording
for PS (Neva).

Simply Positive Review.
 Grief Counseling Sessions  (E)
On the first and third Wednesday of the month,
#1939800 by Prosperous Snow celebrating



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Review of Old Slow Tortoise  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
In this moment in time
slow life of a tortoise,
who lives inside a hole
bought mango and basket.

Stole mango from behind
then eat it on his bed,
by a tortoise screaming
his mangoes are missing.

By our poet Poemwriter
reviewed by embe here,
in your funny words.

Simply Positive Review.
 Old Slow Tortoise  (E)
My poem explains the slow life of a tortoise
#2064989 by Poemwriter


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Review of ADHD  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In the moment in time
when bouncing around,
in the mind and body
is never ever boring.

To have the thoughts
replay over and over,
like rushing waters
or fluttering wings.

By our fine poet Q
reviewed by embe
in your words
so lovely.

Simply Positive Review.
 ADHD  (E)
something i wrote for mental health awareness
#2064943 by Q


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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
In this moment in time
the image for the aged,
latent echoes do spill
from the scepters flame.

The unbridled mistakes
now defiled with grace,
with conniving embraced
enigmas battle of ammo.

By our fine poet Hubris
reviewed by embe here,
in your Poetic Prose.

Simply Positive Review.
 Image for the Ages  (13+)
Poetic Prose- Iambic Pentameter
#2064913 by Hubris


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Review of Fog  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (3.5)
In a moment in time
pretty white clouds,
touching the ground
covering every inch.

Blocking the view
with surroundings,
holds this mystery
how do we find out?

The second thought
some of us so soon,
start to disappear
into white silence.

By poet Rose Scott
reviewed by embe,
in your fine words.

Simply Positive Review.
 Fog  (E)
It was foggy so I wrote this for the day.
#2064910 by Rose Scott



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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (3.5)
In this moment in time
he seated opposite me,
the old man I noticed
in the road rush hour.

With strange knobstick
I feel this mysterious,
is he maybe that angel
been looking for years.

By our poet AsmaHosna
reviewed by embe here,
in your story words.

Simply Positive Review.
 A Short Story: An Angel  (E)
The story has written with a limit of 100 words.
#2064856 by AsmaHosna


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