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Review of Autumn Bride  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In this serious moment in time
wedding has an unexpected turn,
Ashen hue her desperation new
free from chains of him less.

Long tangles in a white mess
there running from the groom,
her pulse rises the dark ride
escaped to hide Autumn Bride.

By our famous poet PandaPaws
my mentor and loving friend,
reviewed by embe lovely
in your wedding words.

Simply Positive Review.
 
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Autumn Bride  (E)
A wedding takes an unexpected turn. A Trois-Par-Huit poem.
#1962301 by PandaPaws Licensed VetTech


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Review of ADHD  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In the moment in time
when bouncing around,
in the mind and body
is never ever boring.

To have the thoughts
replay over and over,
like rushing waters
or fluttering wings.

By our fine poet Q
reviewed by embe
in your words
so lovely.

Simply Positive Review.
 ADHD  (E)
something i wrote for mental health awareness
#2064943 by Q


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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
In this moment in time
the image for the aged,
latent echoes do spill
from the scepters flame.

The unbridled mistakes
now defiled with grace,
with conniving embraced
enigmas battle of ammo.

By our fine poet Hubris
reviewed by embe here,
in your Poetic Prose.

Simply Positive Review.
 Image for the Ages  (13+)
Poetic Prose- Iambic Pentameter
#2064913 by Hubris


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Review of Fog  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (3.5)
In a moment in time
pretty white clouds,
touching the ground
covering every inch.

Blocking the view
with surroundings,
holds this mystery
how do we find out?

The second thought
some of us so soon,
start to disappear
into white silence.

By poet Rose Scott
reviewed by embe,
in your fine words.

Simply Positive Review.
 Fog  (E)
It was foggy so I wrote this for the day.
#2064910 by Rose Scott



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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (3.5)
In this moment in time
he seated opposite me,
the old man I noticed
in the road rush hour.

With strange knobstick
I feel this mysterious,
is he maybe that angel
been looking for years.

By our poet AsmaHosna
reviewed by embe here,
in your story words.

Simply Positive Review.
 A Short Story: An Angel  (E)
The story has written with a limit of 100 words.
#2064856 by AsmaHosna


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Review of Love's Journey  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time
when I'm not with you,
a love that's so true
you completed in me.

Growing old together
living in this life,
till a time is done
a whole other world.

There for me to see
if it had to be you,
who showed it to me
we know that is true.

By our dear poet Jen
reviewed by embe here,
in your loving words.

Simply Positive Review.
 
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Love's Journey  (E)
Poem I wrote about me and my fiance~entering it into contest!~
#2064845 by Jen~


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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time
tears down his cheeks,
chemotherapy failed
never can save him.

I'm dying this way
but I don't know,
if it can change
life as a child.

Regret bombards
in consciousness,
gently slips away
and his eyes widen.

By our fine poet DJ
in a review by embe,
in your sad words
reap and sow.

Simply Positive Review.
 Reap and you shall sow...  (E)
Enjoy...my dark short. Written for the under 300 word short story.
#2064764 by DJ





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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time
knowing your indifference,
in your future on the cross
looked away when he suffered.

As you turn your back to love
goodness knocks on that door,
your indifference continues
day to day then at night.

Come into light my child
iv'e been waiting for you,
your timing is so precious
open your eyes the champion.

By our fine poet royalkees
reviewed by embe today,
in your faith words
Godly inspirations.

Simply Positive Review.
 Your Champions Cry  (E)
A Poem from my book: Godly Inspirations for the Troubled Soul
#2064815 by royalkees




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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
In the moment in time
right now what to do,
my Cessna is rocking
nearly stopping here.

Over the Dales seems
burst my own bubble,
one too many flights
a propeller stutters.

By our poet siameezi
reviewed by embe,
in your words
so lovely.

Simply Positive Review.
 Mayday Over Yorkshire  (E)
An aerobatically challenged acrostic
#2064739 by siameezi


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Review of Responsible  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
In this moment of my time
with the responsibility,
yes to be Wagon Master
if everyone remembers.

The price of greatness
if I led my wagon train,
holding lives in my hands
I wouldn't never get lost.

By our dear poet Pengthulu
reviewed by embe lovely,
with your wise words.

Simply Positive Review.
Responsible  (13+)
"The price of greatness is responsibility."
#1284035 by ⭐Princette♥PengthuluBells


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Review of Gachoner  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time
with that Irish tale,
a fairy creature
from folklore.

O'lass O'lass
with hair gold,
away to keep safe
don't give ye heart.

Your sun golden hair
will ye be freed,
ye heart broken
so eaisly.

By our poet
a Brokenhunter,
reviewed by embe
in your fine words.

Simply Positive Review.
 Gachoner  (E)
A poem about an interesting fairy creature from Irish folklore.
#2063553 by Brokenhunter


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Review of Guarded By Lions  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
In this moment in time
miracles happen by lions,
maybe the savior was a blur
testing faith of unbelievers.

True guardians they are now
behind wonderment that day,
and many call it in hope
if you truly believe.

By our fine poet Harry
reviewed by embe lovely,
in your wondrous wording.

Simply Positive Review.
 Guarded By Lions  (13+)
A storoem about a true happening.
#985087 by Harry



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Review of Silence  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
In this moment in time
for the quiet of morn,
deafening is silence
in timeless bliss.

Now resting here
in brother’s chair,
while resting there
hearing his footfalls.

To wrestle with loss
denial on the day,
then grasp how
slipped away.

By Sabaka
in my review,
with your words
in sympathy by embe.

Simply Positive Review.
 
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Silence  (13+)
In the foggy morning silence I try to comprehend my emotions and my brother's absence
#2064647 by tucknits


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Review of The Journey  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time
on that journey by God,
we can do anything now
with many souls I lie.

And the voices we hear
we share in this life,
the rain is like tears
from the heavens above.

Reviewed by embe here
words by ponkacheese,
in this loving review
simply positive review.

The Journey  (E)
We can do anything in Him.
#2064419 by ponkacheese



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Review of Pride  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time
long may Old Glory wave,
hear the National Anthem
then all I can do is feel.

The goose-bumps on my arms
every time with the song,
hair raises on my neck
that I’m so blessed.

Cheer our brave men
safe in battle prevail,
long may Old Glory wave
stand and cheer then cry.

By soldier the GrueSum1
reviewed by embe proud,
using your fine words.

Simply Positive Review.
 Pride  (E)
I hear the National Anthem, and all I can do, is feel,,,,, Pride!
#1703714 by Sum1


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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
In this moment in time
names in your family,
first is Thadd Baker
the Father Friend.

Husband a Mentor
with a Brother Son,
sadly life cut short
left to grieve lonely.

Always there a memory
your stars shining,
so sail on Sailor
in fair winds.

By Grantbakeraz
reviewed by embe,
in your loving words.

Simply Positive Review.
 My Father My Friend  (E)
After my dad I felt lost lonely and alone I was asked to write something so here it is,
#2061084 by Grantbakeraz


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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
In this moment in time
sickness and in health,
you are always with me
even when you go crazy.

Mother will you be mine
when you have grown old,
calling you Grandmother
praying prayers for you.

Now when you are dead
and no longer with us,
you still be my mother
in a lovely photograph.

By our member BBWOLF
reviewed by embe,
in your words
of a memory.

Simply Positive Review.
 Mother, Will you be Mine?  (ASR)
I have something to ask you Mother.
#1883060 by BIG BAD WOLF



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Review of Timeless  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time
about remembrance there,
while Autumn Dawn gleams
without the day's regrets.

Sunbeams defy dark skies
the horizons with light,
between my rusty leaves
reflecting teeming dew.

Jewels iridescent hue
in time's blinding fog,
is when never forgotten
and not the coming years.

By our poet wanderinjase
reviewed by embe lovely,
in your descriptive
fine words.

Simply Positive Review.
 Timeless  (E)
About remembrance.
#2060799 by wanderinjase




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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (1.0)
In this moment in time
the joys of gardening,
a lifeblood of earth
in my fingernails.

Gingerly I grope
among her tresses,
anticipating fruits
within my daily labor.

Regretfully I am not
as careful as ought,
if in this death
destruction.

By our poet
dear Sophyween,
reviewed by embe
in your fine wording.

Sorry this must be
only one star,
bless you.

Simply Positive Review.
 The Joys of Gardening  (13+)
Round 2 Entry for the April Anti-SLAM!
#662996 by Sophy - Happy B'Day Cramp 🥳


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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
In this moment in time
more fun with poems,
than my stories
in a contest.

One early morn
pain from knots,
realized her error
that brush she threw.

The comb caught again
knots came clearer,
in no connection
fell through.

Review by embe
for Kat Helvetica,
in your dream words
left rigid enrapture.

Simply Positive Review.
 Parallel Universe Contest  (13+)
I have more fun with poems than stories
#2060646 by Kat Helvetica



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Review of Momma Was Right  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
In the moment in time
dear Momma was right,
about my heartbreak
may become a song.

Your perty looks
in my silky words,
everyone is amazed
that wallflower girl.

It'll take some time
to find myself now,
in being so used
through you.

By A Michelle
reviewed by embe,
in your lovely words.

Simply Positive Review.
 Momma Was Right  (E)
A poem about heartbreak it might become a song at some point.
#2056805 by A Michelle feeling alive again



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Review of The sorrow  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
In this moment in time
for your sorrow words,
she stood so huddled
with arms wrapped.

Futile the effort
around my body bare,
winds reaching through
there down to her bones.

A spirit had been silent
for the several months,
stand it her ritual
in this place.

By Cheri Annemos
this review by embe,
in your title sorrow
for this flash fiction.

Simply Positive Review.
 
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The sorrow  (E)
Love lasts through the sorrow
#2002457 by Cheri Annemos



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Review of The Key  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
In this moment in time
it seems an eternity,
the jail of my mind
through the night.

Dream of that key
the lock to my cell,
in my torturous sight
freedom I have to find.

But one day I'll hear
that I have sought,
in my footsteps
the plight.

By Justinian
reviewed by embe,
in your romantic words
my simply positive review.

{bitem:#2060694


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Review of Faceless  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
In a moment of surprise
take your clothes off,
don’t have whole day
he noticed abruptly.

She recoiled there
seeing being so bare,
with just that second
waiting my instructions.

This light for his eyes
image started to see,
a back of her body
but not even him.

By our poet lorenz
reviewed by embe here,
in your surprising words
for simply positive review.

bitem:#2060719}


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Review of be a man  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (3.5)
With this short moment in time
the future of the man by hat,
when tomorrow comes soon
I'll be that star.

These men fight
shine fighters always win,
waiting when tomorrow comes
I'll be a man I'll be this star.

By our be a man poet today
reviewed by embe in your words,
for this simply positive review.

 be a man  (E)
future of a man
#2060500 by hat


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