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Review of Today  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
In this moment in time
for failed choices there,
met him on a seat cushion
the new storyteller's trade.

With wolves and fairy tales
in winds and Summer gales,
told of how the vampires
looking fine with time.

Must alight at station
leave this dandy journey,
and in one day soon or else
return to my fabric's stitch.

By our poet Failed Choices
reviewed by embe here,
in your fine words
for this humor.

Simply Positive Review.
 Today  (E)
A humorous write
#2056263 by FailedChoices



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Review of I Cry Silently  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
In this moment in time I cry silently
while waiting for comforting hands,
no one comes for my daily needs
with that noise of my tears.

No longer a remedy for pain
my cries have now been silenced,
to survive I must care for myself
but still my new tears remain silent.

There's another woman called my Coach
helping me work through outbursts,
and now I understands who I am
other woman--she's my mother!

By our dearest poet of note
reviewed lovely by embe,
using your fine words.

Simply Positive Review.
I Cry Silently  (13+)
2nd place in Under A Shadow Contest; 4th place in "I Cry Silently" Contest.
#1432026 by Pat ~ Rejoice always!


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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
In a short moment in time
to review these few words,
a soldiers eyes after war
returning home in hospital.

Description now suffering
being the oldest of men,
torment behind the eyes
feeling like the child.

By our dear caring poet
reviewed for Matt by embe,
using your descriptive words
for my simply positive review.

 The Soldiers' Eyes  (E)
A description of a soldier after war.
#2056198 by Matt



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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
In this moment in time
to reflect his sad life,
and the excuses he used.
that made his life easier.

The lack of love and care
in these things he heard
said done by the boss
your stealing here.

The tears that fell
in the biggest sin,
for his Creator
saved today.

By our Lani
the fine poet,
reviewed by embe
in your loving words.

Simply Positive Review.
 The Gray-Faced Man  (13+)
how different his life would be if he could do it over
#1399556 by Lani


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Review of My Storoems  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In this moment in time of doubt
should I write only a few lines,
or maybe to use my esoteric words
like poets with Master of Fine Arts.

That simple until their poem imparts
scant meaning coming rather absurd,
expressed single my poems suffice
sometimes a compact poem shines.

But on my second thoughts here
I strive to tell a simple story,
for most of these new daily poems
longer can delve deep in my acclaim.

By our wise poet of note - Harry
reviewed by embe with regards,
using your learning words.

Simply Positive Review.
 My Storoems  (E)
A storoem about my writing storoems.
#1598969 by Harry





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Review of Murder of Crows  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In this moment in time
the reason for crows,
lonely does it go
waiting death.

Rows in fields.
on the lines above,
squawking of the end
beneath darkened hearts.

Fate will not be denied
for creatures below,
it will always be
matter of time.

By our poet
Keaton Foster,
reviewed by embe
using your fine words.

Simply Positive Review.
 Murder of Crows  (E)
A simple, short poem about death via a murder of crows.
#1889147 by Keaton Foster: Know My Hell!



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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time
with something lighter,
watching Hachi a movie
from this great story.

For nine years he sat
at these station doors,
so patient and so loyal
masked heart in turmoil.

Waiting a friends return
in their reunion up above,
but I feel he was teaching
in this greatest story told.

By our fine poet Erik Woods
reviewed by embe lovely,
in your story words.

Simply Positive Review
 Hachiko - Definition of Loyalty  (E)
Something lighter. I was inspired to write this after watching Hachi the movie.
#2055003 by Erik Woods


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Review of Time Away  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time away
some advise to my teenagers,
take time to smell the roses
and time to count the stars.

With this give a kiss or hug
time to talk about the scars,
away from fast cars and bars
and from the cheats and liars.

Make sure you eat your greens
and pray and see old friends,
to say thank-you and please
to our poet of note Thaddeus.

Reviewed by embe so lovely
for our parent who cares,
in his words of love
my delight for him.

Simply Positive Review.
Time Away  (E)
4 quatrains, 8 syl. per line Some advice to my 3 teenagers in '95. Modern day Polonius?
#2051865 by Thaddeus Buxton Winthrop





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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
In this moment in time here
I was lost until she came,
an angel sent to save me
in the news of adoption.

Eyes so blue like heaven
whereof sure she came,
I focused on the task
of giving her a name.

Save from the poverty
if she would have known,
about that lovely couple
raising her as their own.

By our poet flashramey
reviewed by embe lovely,
in your deep caring words
my simply positive review.
 Secret Daughter   (13+)
Breaking the news of adoption after 19 years.
#2019430 by flashramey


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Review of Long Time  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In a sincere moment in time
since I have had your love,
because you were untrue
cast it to the wind.

Away and forgot me
with all those many men,
so continue on in a search
hoping you may find a church.

Except a broken heart you left
I started with nothing there,
and now don't have anything
so I will bid you goodbye.

By our fine poet Kings
reviewed by embe now,
in this sad scenery
with your words.

Simply Positive Review.
 
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Long Time  (E)
A long time has passed since I have had your love.
#2032901 by Kings



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Review of On My Own  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time
being when on your own,
could have been friends
when I need to be there.

Friendships love shown
as I pay for my mistake,
I will never do it again
for friends are valuable.

When that door was open
grace the healing balm,
to accept a new friend
by embe in these words.

For a dear poet Khariyya
using your lovely words,
never more on your own
simply positive review.

 On My Own  (E)
A poem I wrote for a contest.
#2012193 by Khariyya Jia Li ~ Studying 247



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Review of Treasures  
Review by embe
In affiliation with  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
In this moment in time for my treasures
within her reverie so sweet she lies,
journeys to find her great chest
of gemstones known to fairies.

The day is done but she cries
to pass from here then the rest,
yet never now had she been so blessed
a royal rights for the Queen of the Fae.

By our fine poet of note April Desiree
reviewed by embe in your fairy words,
lovely for my Rising Star Review.

 
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Treasures  (13+)
In reverie so sweet she lies...
#1996891 by April Desiree-I'm back!


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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In a moment in time an "oot" mostly about war
neither his militia nor me intended to shoot,
the soldier lunched on spicy chili and beans
the old coot mishearing fired followed suit.

The historical significance of this battle
I am becoming the astute player of lute,
having to practice except for hearing
keeps banging on my wall to go mute.

By our dear famous soldier Harryg
reviewed by embe in your words,
for my simply positive review.
An "oot" Poem Mostly About War  (E)
A humorous poem using -oot words. Comedy!
#580676 by Harry


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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time
for your contradictions,
as you kiss not my lips
but embrace inner beauty.

You can see not what is
yet love for you daily,
you never speak words
but follow the deity.

Reviewed by embe
with my welcome,
for our Surabhi
lovely scenery.

Using your wording
creative questioning,
simply positive review.
 Making World a better place  (E)
Try it, take baby steps, and then stride!!
#2052212 by Surabhi


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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
In this moment in time to plea
personal thoughts on troubles,
continued in Northern Ireland
so many blame their religion.

The Republicans scream there
Royalists are often thrown,
are they now to the right
or it has become a game.

Look in the other's eyes
give our peace a chance,
so lay down the lance
with miracle eyes.

By poet New Age
reviewed by embe,
so sad the scenery
in your fine expose.

Simply Positive Review,
 State of The Troubles.  (13+)
My personal thoughts on The Troubles and the continued campaign in Northern Ireland.
#2051489 by New Age


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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
In this moment in time sonnet and inversion
prayers and psalms like diamonds in my mind,
along the rambling rivers and verdant lawns
I found these vows were simple perfect lies.

Freedom life was all that we were stealing
when he had left and saw me so he could die,
as I should have known him better after all
along the rambling rivers and verdant lawns.

By our wonderful poet Dr Matticakes Myra
reviewed by embe your prayers and psalms,
the vision created simply positive review.
 Prayers and Psalms  (ASR)
Invisible like diamonds in the mind, all we were stealing was life.
#1712652 by Dr Matticakes Myra




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Review of I Cried For You  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
in the sad moment in time
I cried for you that day,
when you left me behind
so helpless in my tears.

No you have forsaken me
with my sad tears to say,
am I the prisoner in jail
this will no longer matter.

Tomorrow will be brand new
no longer a prisoner now,
nothing matters any more
that black hole closed.

From our poet Rhychus
reviewed by embe there,
using your fine wording
with your shadows poetry.

Simply Positive Review.
STATIC
I Cried For You  (E)
3rd Place in the Shadows and Light Poetry Contest ~ Round 25
#2048235 by Rhychus




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Review of Seven Days  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In this healing moment in time for new life
day one you are your own special person,
day two we were put on this Earth
day three angels on your side.

Day four people who hear things
day five God knows your name,
day six pray for this help
the lost and lonely.

Day seven in heaven
earth is journey,
for new life
forever.

Reviewed
by embe today,
the kind Christian
may God bless you all.

For our dear Autumn Wind
allowing me to use your words,
for this simply positive review.
 Seven Days   (E)
Seven Days of Comfort for Mentally Disturbed Children
#2051090 by Autumn Wind


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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
In this moment in time
a poem from found items,
beauty of a humble heart
with these abstract items.

Married while seen broken
but still it holds beauty,
the single within flight
images with creatures.

Seen lighter than air
then overheard her say,
glass and metal sparkle
memories pieced together.

Reviewer by embe here
by using your words,
the abstract poem
by iluvhorses.

Simply Positive Review
 Beauty of a Humbled Heart  (E)
abstract poem from found items
#2051244 by iluvhorses


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Review of Well-Hid Panties  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
In this moment in time for a friend of mine
he was the honest man tempted to be a looker,
she was a buxom girl and a stunner never shy.

I notice her charms and didn’t question why
this delightful or maybe I’m being evasive,
from luscious girls must my favor trust.

By our gifted poet of note dear Tim Chiu
reviewed by embe in your fine wording,
inspired as simply positive review.

 Well-Hid Panties  (13+)
An honest man is tempted by a looker - a poem.
#1591533 by Tim Chiu


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Review of Puppy Love  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time for puppy love
scene with the park where the sun set,
days passed by with nothing but regret
her eyes lifted when my curiosity grew.

I remembered her, did she remember me
like the dream that our eyes ever met,
I turned the corner and who did I see
not that girl but a girl of my dreams.

By our dear fine poet of note, JasonM
reviewed by embe using your wording,
to create simply positive review.
 Puppy Love  (E)
Teenagers don't know what they want, even when they're sure that they do. This is my take.
#2051105 by JasonM


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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
In this moment in time
when learning the ropes,
Gibson could not breathe
or while trying to scream.

Tried to swing his head
inches above his face,
disappearing there
in the cell door.

But now opened
then locked tight,
while he was smiling
hiding in the darkness.

By poet Winchester Jones
reviewed by embe here,
using your words.

Simply Positive Review.
 Learning the Ropes  (18+)
A Man's third day in jail...
#2051089 by Winchester Jones



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Review of THE BASHFUL LOVER  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
In this moment in time
for the bashful lover,
who always feels shy
with these feelings.

To raise my head
met my heart sore,
no words never said
in my expressions now.

Deafened by my silence
tried to speak there,
in flames of my love
my chance with her.

Our poet tubelsaviz
reviewed by embe,
in your words
lovely.

Simply Positive Review.
 THE BASHFUL LOVER  (13+)
A poem about a lover who feels shy to express his feelings
#2050654 by tubelsaviz


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Review of EARTH-ACHE  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In the moment in time for the earth ache
a horrendous scream aborted inner fears,
seeing the gleam in the night I hurried
past glorious days so helplessly mourned.

Droves of lost earthlings in dark streets
greed the sharpened claws dripping blood,
predators and preys there for a sanctuary
for life I gasped their senses with death.

By our serious poet of note Adamouadam
reviewed by embe in your fine words,
for my simply positive review.
 EARTH-ACHE  (E)
This poem is about the harm we do to our planet and what this attitude may bring about.
#2051091 by Adamouadam


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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time
I hate that I love you,
there into my very soul
almost as if you cared.

Pretending now i'm tame
just the glance at you,
there in your absence
clasped between arms.

Seen in my eyes now
were my first lover,
having waited daily
in lasting memories.

By our fine Mona N
reviewed from embe,
in your love words
deeply as I loved.

Please note the error
in stanza six it has
only 3 lines visable,
move line four down
Stanza 8 same problem.

 I Hate That I Love You  (E)
A short narrative about a first heartbreak.
#2051021 by Mona N


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