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Review of Sunny's Bunny  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
In this moment in time Sunny
that wanted to be the bunny,
always to be the only pet
her Mom said next winter.

Wow, she didn't know it
how could it be this hard,
buying bunnies need payment
monies would be nice to help.

By our lovely Miss OMG Dragon
reviewed my embe wonderful,
in your form poetry.

Simply Positive Review.
 Sunny's Bunny  (ASR)
Mirror sestet poem for Wodehouse Challenge
#2037234 by Dragon is hiding


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Review of Little Remote  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
In this moment in time a little remote
we can make this our new home today,
my heart is quiet and priceless
I want that beautiful girl.

With her camera for a face
she is just so beautiful a girl,
maybe I need a camera for her face
I hope she'll know that she's missed.

By our wonderful poet being Fivesixer
reviewed by embe in your fine words,
for my simply positive review.
 Little Remote  (18+)
3/08 If only it were as easy as we wanted it to be...
#1403452 by Fivesixer



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Review of Blind Date  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time
on that new blind date,
a girl named Millicent
would not go with David.

It started so innocently
where are you parked now,
walking in a quiet street
so we introduced ourselves.

Dave saw what was going on
Bob you were with Carolyn,
Mark you are with Sylvia
to end it pay for a cab.

By our poet Rogue Writer
reviewed by embe lovely,
in your flash wording.

Simply Positive Review.
 Blind Date  (E)
Fiction based in fact, this is not how I met my wife -(But Close)-
#1796676 by Rogue Writer


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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
In this moment in time
a song I wrote for you,
feelings for the woman
you're there by my side.

Nothing tears us apart
with tremendous pride,
for the jewel like you
my lovely dearest queen.

Words are too fragile
in depths of the sea,
until we have spoken
someone so dear to me.

By our poet tubelsavis
reviewed by embe here,
with your lovely words.

Simply Positive Review.
 A SONG I WROTE FOR YOU  (E)
A romantic poem expressing feelings for a woman
#2050650 by tubelsaviz


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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time
shadows of the street,
not so sure what it is
if I have to complain?

Problems weigh heavy
for my uphill battle,
not knowing tomorrow
if it will disappear.

So here I am asking
this world I enjoy,
returns to teach me
something profound.

By our poet Ghost
reviewed by embe,
using your words
show us the way.

Simply Positive Review.
 Shadows of the Streets  (E)
Not sure what this is, but here you go.
#2050646 by Ghost


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Review of Reality is cruel  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
In a moment in time the tower of words
I totally understand reality is cruel,
when love imagination is giving life
in happiness with joy accomplishment.

There you find hope for them in strife
without a place in life one who knows,
life the meaning to understand my fate
if this is not true then some may rule.

By our poet of note - Lars Jaig Andeson
reviewed by embe in your fine wording,
for my simply positive review today.
 Reality is cruel  (ASR)
I totally understand it does not make a lot of sense and is a rather dark one again.
#2050927 by Lars Jaig Andeson



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Review of My Secret Love  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This moment in time for my love
watched by you beside the door,
desperately hoping I'm right
especially now when back.

Because you smile my way
me my mi amor secreto,
love me I love you
never let me go.

Very soon there
you'll love me too,
your eyes into my soul
now reasons to being alone.

For dear poet Word Warrior
reviewed by embe lovely,
in your fine words.

Simply Positive Review.
 My Secret Love  (13+)
An ABC poem
#2029307 by Word Warrior beating cancer!!



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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time
the secret map and key,
for the love of books
Mom took my sister's.

Learned arts crafts
and watches movies,
all in my childhood
my love about books.

When I found them
I would get lost,
guess you can say
addicted to books.

By our fine writer
here our little d.
reviewed by embe
with your words.

Simply Positive Review.
{bitem:#2050678


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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time yes how sweet it is
love itself it’s so good when you feel it,
that sweet thing called love for another
it was my first plane ride and lift off.

Awesomeness It was my first plane ride
with the lift off so pure I fell in Love,
down the Seine at twilight the Effie Tower
Love does make the world to my home America.

By our dearest travelling writer of note
reviewed by embe so lovely the scenery,
in your words that will create
my simply positive review,
pity no bitem number
but stars for you.
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Review of One Harsh Moment  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
In this moment in time to say
so you want to hear about it,
shakes his head laughing low
his hands in his lap bowing.

Sits up straight in a chair
leans forward on those knees,
the way it happened yesterday
returns to relaxed pose again.

By this drama scene Vincent
reviewed by embe lovely play,
when lights dim then he exits
the Devil really in my details.

With my simply positive review.
 One Harsh Moment  (13+)
A short study of a scene for a possible play.
#2050542 by Vincent Coffin



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Review of Kelly Adored  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
In the moment in time working at light rail
in that support store as the bright student,
spending time at home with singing lovely
a youth sublime untouched hair and lips.

Reflecting the slender hips that sway
and dove white breasts dressed in time,
Kelly adorned with nothing but sunlight
reviewed by embe using your pretty words.

Simply Positive Review.
 
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Kelly Adored  (13+)
To Kelly - Someone beautiful walks this way.
#1978979 by jai J



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Review of Simply Short  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
In this moment of time
for a simply short story,
dear Mom may I be excused
it's time to chase the sun.

But it doesn't look right
with this in my thoughts,
sweet for mother's ears
to catch the sunshine.

I saw it there below
sun was shining bright,
seemed suddenly excited
I leaped to catch the sun.

By our dear poet of note
in this review by embe,
using your fine words
for our jjcochran.
 Simply Short  (18+)
Short Short Stories
#2049050 by jai J



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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)

In this sad moment in time
Grannie passed away last week,
I pruned and dug the soil today
this pot will come to you one day.

She left me her old plant to keep
with inspiration in the garden,
prodded and softened the clay
looking so fresh and neat.

It sits on my side board
time for me to prod her way,
Grannie had the secret to keep
my treasures to nurture them well.

By our fine poet calligraphy script
reviewed by embe in your words,
that moment of inspiration
simply positive review.

ON A JOURNEY WITH WDC AND ME  (E)
A poem just a moment of inspiration. GRANIES PLANT POT.
#2050441 by Mary Ann MCPhedran





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Review of The Hanging Tree  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time the twist in the tale
Talbot's horse jolted as the shot cracked the air,
Judd fell to the ground the pool of blood spreading
from that old shotgun charged bullet hole in his back.

Judd shrugged when he turned back to the broken limb
you'll need to knock me out and steal that horse,
then I can make this look so right he said
I'll let Mama know you're safe today.

By dear Ruth Draves, tale of the west
reviewed by embe in your fine words,
with this ending the surprise.

Simply Positive Review.
 The Hanging Tree  (E)
A brief tale of the old West
#2050399 by Ruth Draves


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Review of Maiden Voyage  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time a voyage never taken
doomed to fail that shore never reached,
best to row together the boat ashore
then let the wind chase the sail.

And hopefully the winds it knows
like that ship that sailed long ago,
X marks the spots my soul was seen again
this fantasy I dreamed what might have been.

By our fine poet Logan, the sailor reviewed
by embe in your most descriptive wording,
for this my simply positive review.
 Maiden Voyage  (E)
A voyage never taken, a shore never reached
#2050306 by Logan





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Review of Life fades  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time when life fades
that is when i was depressed and alone,
life was expecting allowing pressuring
to turn young wisdom collects thoughts.

Accepting in defeat losing your sight
gone were the days of hope in youth,
into an abyss this light fades away
finding none it glazes ending life.

By our fine poet of note - BPL
reviewed by embe with your words,
to create my simply positive review.

 Life fades   (E)
This is an old one when i was depressed Enjoy
#2049855 by BPL





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Review of Fierce Wonderings  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In this moment in time with questions
the fierce wondering about strangers,
their chance encounters are questions
will they grow old together forever?

Do they think to dream of the future
or maybe feel trapped by the present,
when remembering those days gone by
when her time here on Earth is over?

By Princess Pepper House of Stark
reviewed lovely by embe in saying,
I have used your wonderful words
for this simply positive review.

Fierce Wonderings  (E)
Wonderings about strangers
#1650260 by Pepper


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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
In this moment in time in the last line
his body rose but sadly could't chew,
in the tragedy of that Zombie
bitten by the dead bat.

And now this a question
why the review for our julymfox,
because this poem deserves my review
by embe welcome to our fine poet member.

Simply Positive Review.
 
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The Tragedy of a Zombie  (13+)
First getting bitten by an undead bat, and now this?
#2050153 by Julie


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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In this moment in time a child lost
tumbling down the old stone wall,
dared to stand before this house
beneath the swirling shadows.

Drawing me in silhouettes
taking the steps for safety,
wondering when I will be saved
will this suffocation never end.

By our dear fine poet Choconut
reviewed in a tower of words,
lovely the scene by embe.

Simply Positive Review.
STATIC
A Childhood Lost / 172 words  (E)
Poem written for Monthly Poetry Contest -Using 'Shadows' Prompt
#2048354 by Choconut ~ House Targaryen


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Review of Mistaken  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time for the tower of words
the moon nude the sky not blue the sun hidden,
what is true what I knew that time and place
all of it gone all of it now no more mistaken.

They want me gone and to tell you I’ll admit
so do I reluctantly I’ll admit and so do I,
but in a reality I no longer know is it me
the place in those days, God how I lament.

By our fine poet of note - Keaton Foster
reviewed by embe in your questioning words,
may it serve a purpose if improvement needed
I think the column layout of words is confusing.

Simply Positive Review.
 Mistaken  (E)
People who are close to me at times wish me ill, and lately, I'll admit, so do I.
#2050260 by Keaton Foster: Know My Hell!







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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In this most important moment in time
self reflective blog post biographical,
will we decide growing into the purpose
growing up in that Christian background.

Realized the passion coming from in me
didn’t know day to day what I wanted,
passion coming from me came from God
embarking on my educational journey.

By our serious poet of note Emily
supports this educational journey,
NYS Peer Specialists Certification.

Reviewed by embe as a Christian
the choice I made when having Cancer,
my prayers answered now fully recovered.

Simply Positive Review.
 Growing into Purpose   (E)
Self reflective blog post
#2050119 by Emily Finne



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Review of My Heart  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In the pink moment in time to write
I give you my heart now and forever,
treat it gentle it's easy to break
give me the strength to succeed.

You are my hearts desire in love
I promise to never break yours too,
always wanting you to be in my world
I am lost without you my sweetest girl.

By our famous poet of note, Kings
being reviewed lovely by embe,
in your descriptive words.

Simply Positive Review.
 
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My Heart  (E)
I give you my heart now and forever.
#1747301 by Kings


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Review of Twin Flame  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In this moment in time
for the twin flame,
an unseen force
in confusion.

Each of them
a man and woman,
there is one soul
but also for everyone.

Many are wondering why
feeling so different,
for the other half
why we pair up.

By dear TJ Marie
a fine poet of note,
reviewed by embe lovely
my simply positive review.

 Twin Flame  (E)
A poem about love
#2046709 by TJ Marie



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Review of Dancing  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
In this moment in time
dancing in a white room,
off the side of the house
content to be so near you.

My hand on your shoulder
your hand on my waist,
just to be with you
my face was so red.

How you guided me
so gracefully there,
the snow falling down
in the way we marveled.

By dear darling poet
June reviewed by embe,
lovely your poem for me
my simply positive review.
 
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Dancing  (E)
I write too many poems based off dreams but here's another
#2049885 by june401




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Review of A Meaningly Sound  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
In this moment in time
that meaningful sound,
it happens slowly now
circling a silent moon.

Returning back to me
in flickers and darts,
a dainty fairy dancer
will you cling to me.

Or remember me now
I don't imagine it,
caught in the storm
so warm in the sea.

By Dr Matticakes Myra
reviewed by embe here,
so lovely your poetry
simply positive review.

 A Meaningly Sound  (ASR)
It happens slowly, like the lethagic circles of the silent moon
#1625256 by Dr Matticakes Myra



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