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Review of I Cried For You  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
in the sad moment in time
I cried for you that day,
when you left me behind
so helpless in my tears.

No you have forsaken me
with my sad tears to say,
am I the prisoner in jail
this will no longer matter.

Tomorrow will be brand new
no longer a prisoner now,
nothing matters any more
that black hole closed.

From our poet Rhychus
reviewed by embe there,
using your fine wording
with your shadows poetry.

Simply Positive Review.
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I Cried For You  (E)
3rd Place in the Shadows and Light Poetry Contest ~ Round 25
#2048235 by Strange Brain




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Review of Seven Days  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In this healing moment in time for new life
day one you are your own special person,
day two we were put on this Earth
day three angels on your side.

Day four people who hear things
day five God knows your name,
day six pray for this help
the lost and lonely.

Day seven in heaven
earth is journey,
for new life
forever.

Reviewed
by embe today,
the kind Christian
may God bless you all.

For our dear Autumn Wind
allowing me to use your words,
for this simply positive review.
 Seven Days   (E)
Seven Days of Comfort for Mentally Disturbed Children
#2051090 by Autumn Wind


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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
In this moment in time
a poem from found items,
beauty of a humble heart
with these abstract items.

Married while seen broken
but still it holds beauty,
the single within flight
images with creatures.

Seen lighter than air
then overheard her say,
glass and metal sparkle
memories pieced together.

Reviewer by embe here
by using your words,
the abstract poem
by iluvhorses.

Simply Positive Review
 Beauty of a Humbled Heart  (E)
abstract poem from found items
#2051244 by iluvhorses


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Review of Well-Hid Panties  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
In this moment in time for a friend of mine
he was the honest man tempted to be a looker,
she was a buxom girl and a stunner never shy.

I notice her charms and didn’t question why
this delightful or maybe I’m being evasive,
from luscious girls must my favor trust.

By our gifted poet of note dear Tim Chiu
reviewed by embe in your fine wording,
inspired as simply positive review.

 Well-Hid Panties  (13+)
An honest man is tempted by a looker - a poem.
#1591533 by Tim Chiu


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Review of Puppy Love  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time for puppy love
scene with the park where the sun set,
days passed by with nothing but regret
her eyes lifted when my curiosity grew.

I remembered her, did she remember me
like the dream that our eyes ever met,
I turned the corner and who did I see
not that girl but a girl of my dreams.

By our dear fine poet of note, JasonM
reviewed by embe using your wording,
to create simply positive review.
 Puppy Love  (E)
Teenagers don't know what they want, even when they're sure that they do. This is my take.
#2051105 by JasonM


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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
In this moment in time
when learning the ropes,
Gibson could not breathe
or while trying to scream.

Tried to swing his head
inches above his face,
disappearing there
in the cell door.

But now opened
then locked tight,
while he was smiling
hiding in the darkness.

By poet Winchester Jones
reviewed by embe here,
using your words.

Simply Positive Review.
 Learning the Ropes  (18+)
A Man's third day in jail...
#2051089 by Winchester Jones



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Review of THE BASHFUL LOVER  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
In this moment in time
for the bashful lover,
who always feels shy
with these feelings.

To raise my head
met my heart sore,
no words never said
in my expressions now.

Deafened by my silence
tried to speak there,
in flames of my love
my chance with her.

Our poet tubelsaviz
reviewed by embe,
in your words
lovely.

Simply Positive Review.
 THE BASHFUL LOVER  (13+)
A poem about a lover who feels shy to express his feelings
#2050654 by tubelsaviz


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Review of EARTH-ACHE  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In the moment in time for the earth ache
a horrendous scream aborted inner fears,
seeing the gleam in the night I hurried
past glorious days so helplessly mourned.

Droves of lost earthlings in dark streets
greed the sharpened claws dripping blood,
predators and preys there for a sanctuary
for life I gasped their senses with death.

By our serious poet of note Adamouadam
reviewed by embe in your fine words,
for my simply positive review.
 EARTH-ACHE  (E)
This poem is about the harm we do to our planet and what this attitude may bring about.
#2051091 by Adamouadam


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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time
I hate that I love you,
there into my very soul
almost as if you cared.

Pretending now i'm tame
just the glance at you,
there in your absence
clasped between arms.

Seen in my eyes now
were my first lover,
having waited daily
in lasting memories.

By our fine Mona N
reviewed from embe,
in your love words
deeply as I loved.

Please note the error
in stanza six it has
only 3 lines visable,
move line four down
Stanza 8 same problem.

 I Hate That I Love You  (E)
A short narrative about a first heartbreak.
#2051021 by Mona N


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Review of Little Remote  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
In this moment in time a little remote
we can make this our new home today,
my heart is quiet and priceless
I want that beautiful girl.

With her camera for a face
she is just so beautiful a girl,
maybe I need a camera for her face
I hope she'll know that she's missed.

By our wonderful poet being Fivesixer
reviewed by embe in your fine words,
for my simply positive review.
 Little Remote  (18+)
3/08 If only it were as easy as we wanted it to be...
#1403452 by Fivesixer



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Review of Blind Date  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time
on that new blind date,
a girl named Millicent
would not go with David.

It started so innocently
where are you parked now,
walking in a quiet street
so we introduced ourselves.

Dave saw what was going on
Bob you were with Carolyn,
Mark you are with Sylvia
to end it pay for a cab.

By our poet Rogue Writer
reviewed by embe lovely,
in your flash wording.

Simply Positive Review.
 Blind Date  (E)
Fiction based in fact, this is not how I met my wife -(But Close)-
#1796676 by Rogue Writer


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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
In this moment in time
a song I wrote for you,
feelings for the woman
you're there by my side.

Nothing tears us apart
with tremendous pride,
for the jewel like you
my lovely dearest queen.

Words are too fragile
in depths of the sea,
until we have spoken
someone so dear to me.

By our poet tubelsavis
reviewed by embe here,
with your lovely words.

Simply Positive Review.
 A SONG I WROTE FOR YOU  (E)
A romantic poem expressing feelings for a woman
#2050650 by tubelsaviz


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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time
shadows of the street,
not so sure what it is
if I have to complain?

Problems weigh heavy
for my uphill battle,
not knowing tomorrow
if it will disappear.

So here I am asking
this world I enjoy,
returns to teach me
something profound.

By our poet Ghost
reviewed by embe,
using your words
show us the way.

Simply Positive Review.
 Shadows of the Streets  (E)
Not sure what this is, but here you go.
#2050646 by Ghost


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Review of Reality is cruel  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
In a moment in time the tower of words
I totally understand reality is cruel,
when love imagination is giving life
in happiness with joy accomplishment.

There you find hope for them in strife
without a place in life one who knows,
life the meaning to understand my fate
if this is not true then some may rule.

By our poet of note - Lars Jaig Andeson
reviewed by embe in your fine wording,
for my simply positive review today.
 Reality is cruel  (ASR)
I totally understand it does not make a lot of sense and is a rather dark one again.
#2050927 by Lars Jaig Andeson



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Review of My Secret Love  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This moment in time for my love
watched by you beside the door,
desperately hoping I'm right
especially now when back.

Because you smile my way
me my mi amor secreto,
love me I love you
never let me go.

Very soon there
you'll love me too,
your eyes into my soul
now reasons to being alone.

For dear poet Word Warrior
reviewed by embe lovely,
in your fine words.

Simply Positive Review.
 My Secret Love  (13+)
An ABC poem
#2029307 by Word Warrior beating cancer!!



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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time
the secret map and key,
for the love of books
Mom took my sister's.

Learned arts crafts
and watches movies,
all in my childhood
my love about books.

When I found them
I would get lost,
guess you can say
addicted to books.

By our fine writer
here our little d.
reviewed by embe
with your words.

Simply Positive Review.
{bitem:#2050678


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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time yes how sweet it is
love itself it’s so good when you feel it,
that sweet thing called love for another
it was my first plane ride and lift off.

Awesomeness It was my first plane ride
with the lift off so pure I fell in Love,
down the Seine at twilight the Effie Tower
Love does make the world to my home America.

By our dearest travelling writer of note
reviewed by embe so lovely the scenery,
in your words that will create
my simply positive review,
pity no bitem number
but stars for you.
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Review of Kelly Adored  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
In the moment in time working at light rail
in that support store as the bright student,
spending time at home with singing lovely
a youth sublime untouched hair and lips.

Reflecting the slender hips that sway
and dove white breasts dressed in time,
Kelly adorned with nothing but sunlight
reviewed by embe using your pretty words.

Simply Positive Review.
 
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Kelly Adored  (13+)
To Kelly - Someone beautiful walks this way.
#1978979 by jai J



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Review of Simply Short  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
In this moment of time
for a simply short story,
dear Mom may I be excused
it's time to chase the sun.

But it doesn't look right
with this in my thoughts,
sweet for mother's ears
to catch the sunshine.

I saw it there below
sun was shining bright,
seemed suddenly excited
I leaped to catch the sun.

By our dear poet of note
in this review by embe,
using your fine words
for our jjcochran.
 Simply Short  (18+)
Short Short Stories
#2049050 by jai J



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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)

In this sad moment in time
Grannie passed away last week,
I pruned and dug the soil today
this pot will come to you one day.

She left me her old plant to keep
with inspiration in the garden,
prodded and softened the clay
looking so fresh and neat.

It sits on my side board
time for me to prod her way,
Grannie had the secret to keep
my treasures to nurture them well.

By our fine poet calligraphy script
reviewed by embe in your words,
that moment of inspiration
simply positive review.

ON A JOURNEY WITH WDC AND ME  (E)
A poem just a moment of inspiration. GRANIES PLANT POT.
#2050441 by Mary Ann MCPhedran





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Review of The Hanging Tree  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time the twist in the tale
Talbot's horse jolted as the shot cracked the air,
Judd fell to the ground the pool of blood spreading
from that old shotgun charged bullet hole in his back.

Judd shrugged when he turned back to the broken limb
you'll need to knock me out and steal that horse,
then I can make this look so right he said
I'll let Mama know you're safe today.

By dear Ruth Draves, tale of the west
reviewed by embe in your fine words,
with this ending the surprise.

Simply Positive Review.
 The Hanging Tree  (E)
A brief tale of the old West
#2050399 by Ruth Draves


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Review of Maiden Voyage  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time a voyage never taken
doomed to fail that shore never reached,
best to row together the boat ashore
then let the wind chase the sail.

And hopefully the winds it knows
like that ship that sailed long ago,
X marks the spots my soul was seen again
this fantasy I dreamed what might have been.

By our fine poet Logan, the sailor reviewed
by embe in your most descriptive wording,
for this my simply positive review.
 Maiden Voyage  (E)
A voyage never taken, a shore never reached
#2050306 by Logan





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Review of Life fades  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time when life fades
that is when i was depressed and alone,
life was expecting allowing pressuring
to turn young wisdom collects thoughts.

Accepting in defeat losing your sight
gone were the days of hope in youth,
into an abyss this light fades away
finding none it glazes ending life.

By our fine poet of note - BPL
reviewed by embe with your words,
to create my simply positive review.

 Life fades   (E)
This is an old one when i was depressed Enjoy
#2049855 by BPL





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Review of Fierce Wonderings  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In this moment in time with questions
the fierce wondering about strangers,
their chance encounters are questions
will they grow old together forever?

Do they think to dream of the future
or maybe feel trapped by the present,
when remembering those days gone by
when her time here on Earth is over?

By Princess Pepper House of Stark
reviewed lovely by embe in saying,
I have used your wonderful words
for this simply positive review.

Fierce Wonderings  (E)
Wonderings about strangers
#1650260 by Pepper loving NanoWriMo!


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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
In this moment in time in the last line
his body rose but sadly could't chew,
in the tragedy of that Zombie
bitten by the dead bat.

And now this a question
why the review for our julymfox,
because this poem deserves my review
by embe welcome to our fine poet member.

Simply Positive Review.
 
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The Tragedy of a Zombie  (13+)
First getting bitten by an undead bat, and now this?
#2050153 by Julie


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