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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
In this moment in time to smile
for Johnny who laughed on that day,
he slashed his way to me with a razor
naming me one of these being abandoned.

Waking bleeding from the broken necks
when I fell screaming from the sky,
there as I danced a watery waltz
where he could never find me.

By our poet Ashen Sunflower
reviewed by embe in your words,
creating this scene horror of death.

 Johnny, Who Laughed  (ASR)
We could wield another death by the handle or we could let ours eat us from within.
#2049846 by Ashen Sunflower



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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
In this moment in time
why don't you look at me,
conversation with the mirror
I can’t stand the sight of you.

Are you saying was it my fault
you’re no spring chicken now,
used to be young and sexy
but you’re old,wrinkled.

I’ll visit you every day
improve the way if you look,
with that new better attitude
we’re a team we can get through.

By our fine writer riverbedwriter
reviewed by embe in your words,
for a simply positive review.
 Why Don’t You Look At Me?   (13+)
A conversation with the mirror gives River a reality check
#2049938 by River



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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In the scene for our two famous singers
Bing Crosby and David Bowie with a song,
Peace on Earth and a Little Drummer Boy.

Come they told me my pa rum pum pum pum
the new born King to see, pa rum pum pum
of finest gifts we bring pa rum pum pum.

Then a young child begins to honor him
Christ Child smiled at them with a drum,
when the ox and Lamb kept time in rhyme.

By our dear Christian being Scorpio
reviewed by embe in your fine words,
for my simply positive review.

 Little Drummer Boy  (E)
A little boy has nothing to give the Christ Child
#2021875 by Lynda Miller




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Review of I removed it  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
In this sad moment over time
my letter to my late husband,
I was 15 and you were only 18
together we have seen the best.

Then I had to return stateside
with our four loving children,
so scared from your your fists
may you return dying all alone.

By our dear writer - Kristina
reviewed by embe in sympathy,
for your sad confused husband
who would lay his hand on you.

Simply Positive Review.
 I removed it  (E)
A letter to my late husband
#2049774 by Chrys O'Shea



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Review of What waits  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In a serious moment in time
you cry up to the last tear,
all that's left is to accept
crying to the very last tear.

Even if you run all the way
through into an angry world,
you'll be back were started
crying your tears of sorrow.

Denial and anger saying why
never bargaining for this,
depression waits for you
in your false acceptance.

By our imperfectionist
second review by embe,
both are wonderful
but in sadness.

Simply Positive Review.
 What waits  (E)
What wait's for everyone...
#2049757 by imperfectionist





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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
In this moment in time
a winter morning journey,
rise and shine early now
in a dreamy mind bellowed.

It is the Lord's day now
leaves lightly swaying,
walking to the window
clouds and gray away.

My lips anticipating
that first cup of Joe,
unexpected this morning
headed out the back door.

By our fine poet Sam
found in this alleyway,
sometimes I'm Jonsquared
reviewed by embe welcomed.

Simply Positive Review.
 A Winter Morning Journey  (E)
Originally published in 2002 on Poetry.com under a psuedonym (?)
#1080903 by Sam N. Yago


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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
In this moment of the concerned lessons
as they go to days before Adam and Eve,
entering into paradise never to leave
when we trade our tears for laughter.

Adam and eve realized it was wrong
there is not a way to pay the costs,
of life in a paradise once it's lost
learn the way of our mother and father.

By our dear lovely inspiring poet Sheli
review by embe in your descriptive words,
for this my simply positive review for you.
 New entry 15 lines  (13+)
Writing Cramp contest
#2049301 by Sheli


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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time
when love breaks down,
we're left so empty
lying lifeless.

Shattered why
love lies broken,
in eternal torment
an incompetent mess.

But maybe for embe
your aches now gone,
what you meant to me
this positive review.

Based on my adaption
your lovely words
in fine poetry.
 When Love Breaks Down  (E)
we're left empty
#929238 by spidey



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Review of Flying Palette  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
In this moment in time to welcome
the long lost lovely cheepcheep,
now checking in with this poem
the Flying Palette.

I watch you quietly
in gentle fluttering of wings,
the palette of colour, splashed
when dashed and smudged all over!

Looking for another resting place
pleasure you give to the watcher,
a flying palette of brilliance
the pulchritudinous butterfly.

Our our dear Honestviolet2
reviewed lovely by embe,
using your fine words.

Simply Positive Review.
 Flying Palette  (E)
Butterflies- physically beautiful creatures: a flying palette of many colours!
#2049482 by cheepcheep


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Review of A Tree  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time what do you see
one trying to reach the sky so high,
there in your own world dreaming
always hoping a reason living.

Ignorance may be bliss in time
as it may be our very existence,
roots clinging to the entire world
tell yourself you'll reach the stars.

By our fine writer imperfectionist
reviewed by embe in your wording,
for my simply positive review.

 A Tree  (E)
What do you see, when you look at a tree
#2049425 by imperfectionist


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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
In this moment in time
I yawn and stretch,
scratch my head
for working day.

But tomorrow
is another day,
time for working
and then time to play.

Here we go again now
each life tomorrow,
there in rain
soaked.

In bed
tumbling out
with a coffee cup,
embe in my bedroom
with dear bumblegrum.

Using your fine words
for simply positive review.
STATIC
Another Working day  (13+)
A quirky tale about a "normal" day. Really rhyming couplets cast into 4 line AABB verses
#2000689 by ☮ The Grum Of Grums


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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In this moment in time the desert of payment
for the tower of words built by Keaton Foster,
as travelers coming all of them searching now
that for them will never come because too old.

The large sized boulders and awkward speedbumps
each road is riddled with crater sized potholes,
that they now find themselves in time to avoid
by embe in this review based on my adaptation.

Simply Positive Review.
 A Desert of Pavement  (E)
In a rush to get nowhere quick, this poem is my version/vision of that simple, true idea.
#2049204 by Keaton Foster: Know My Hell!




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Review of In The Name Of  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
In the name of the Fivefixer the champ
an officer does his job and then some,
I have a badge and the will to uphold
in all these beeps beep beeps beeping.

So important that he beeps as he dies
flowers to be delivered to my address,
we don't get these instructions anymore
because at the academy we are dreaming.

That this review is based on the below
it's my adaptation words from fivesixer,
by embe for writers or poets daily here
for your simply positive review in future.
 In The Name Of  (18+)
2/2002 An officer does his job and then some.
#1933271 by Fivesixer


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Review of A Place My Own  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
in this moment in time
a place my own today,
there in your heart
only mine alone.

Reserved for me
making love to you,
kissing you in love
there in that silence.

When thinking lovingly
beautiful thoughts,
through my mind
for your kiss.

By our Tammy
reviewed by embe,
with your fine words
a simply positive review.

 
STATIC
A Place My Own  (13+)
It's about claiming a place in the heart of a lover!
#2049349 by Tammy


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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
In this moment in time of discovery
my sad life is beautiful once more,
thanking God for bringing me to him
believing in a spiritual connection.

With the births of my five children
watched them grow into their future,
where youth belongs for the caring
my prayers were answered that day.

By our caring mother Wèb☆ŴiÉ«ch
reviewed lovely as a Christian,
by embe in your Savior's words.

Simply Positive Review.
The Road Finally Traveled  (13+)
Poem about discovery ...
#1600059 by Sssssh! I'm not really here.


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Review of My girl  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
In this moment in time
for my Russian love,
she's so beautiful
as can be here.

My longing there
first it struck me,
she's my beauty lady
a gift from God above.

Having proved herself
I haven't held her yet,
definitely won my heart
funny because we never met.

By our new poet Chris Breva
reviewed by embe in your words,
to create this lovely play on words.

Simply Positive Review.
 My girl  (E)
This is a poem for my girlfriend
#2049148 by Chris Breva


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Review of My one regret  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
In this sad moment it time
the one regret I remember,
I feel my heart so slow
as it aches for you.

That one week later
taken from this world,
it aches to say goodbye
the voyage to destination.

Umbrellas pass by quickly
others rush around me,
there by the grave
in the rain.

By our fine poet spidey
from embe in your sad words,
for this simply positive review.
 My one regret  (ASR)
I remember, and regret.
#968756 by spidey


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Review of Her Story  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
In this moment in time
for her sad story alone,
everything had gone wrong
but she just didn't care.

Too painful in her mind
flashes of black in pain,
darkness whirling around
with her hands trembling.

When realizing something
she still is to scared,
balls up the memories
in a single thought.

By our orchiddragon
reviewed by embe,
in your words
of memories.

Simply Positive Review.
 Her Story  (18+)
Story about a scarred girl
#2047703 by orchiddragon


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Review of Holiday  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
In this moment in time I have behaved badly
like these old cigarette butts on the floor,
that are the ruins of my life beside my feet
I was touched by a dirty warrior's torn hand.

When I held all the wealth that I ever needed
and then the ruins of my life were at my feet,
I was whipped for always wanting more wealth
but then found this gold in that very moment.

By our fine poet of note Victoria Victorious
reviewed by embe using your descriptive word,
for my simply positive review for you lovely.
 Holiday  (E)
I have behaved very badly
#2048784 by Victoria Victorious



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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In this moment in time for Daddy
we heard the words that you ill,
could this be losing you sadly
If day comes to leave earth.

To meet your glorious Father
in welcoming committee above,
reach to God in great display
in humbleness and gratitude.

By our poet Pristine Poetic
reviewed lovely by embe,
using your poetic words.

Simply Positive Review.
 
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Welcoming Committee...for Daddy  (E)
Welcome and love in the midst of death. A true recount of my father's death.
#2049189 by Pristine Poetic




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Review of Daniel's Struggle  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In this sad moment in time of deep caring
please lift him up in prayer with me today,
his little body packed and full of the pain
sitting in my living room with his brother.

His mother died when he was so very young
he and his brother are sent to foster care,
the serious complication is ravishing him
may the peace blessing flow from his savior.

By our thoughtful Christian writer of note
reviewed by embe using your words of faith,
for this simply positive review for you.
 Daniel's Struggle  (E)
One of my foster kids drop by for a visit with his estranged brother.
#2049164 by G. B. Williams


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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time the beautiful eulogy
Yvette René Mills has taken a journey home,
remember the good times that she enjoyed
therefor no reason to mourn by the grave.

The ship that brought her to this earth
returned to take her to a glorious home,
continue to praise and worship our King
she moved on in hearts into a great void.

By our fine poet of note, G. B. Williams
reviewed by embe in your religious words,
for this simply positive review for you.
 A Beautiful Flower Gone on Home  (E)
Written for my friend's funeral program May 2015
#2043161 by G. B. Williams


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Review of A JEW GOES SOUTH  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time of faith
she visits a Cretan monastery,
where Jews go south to pray
watching me in silence.

I am God is everything
in synagogue and churches,
self on the road to Damascus
seeing far across the wavy sea

By our poet of note, meteorite
reviewed by embe in your words,
the faithfulness of the Jews.

 A JEW GOES SOUTH  (E)
She visits a Cretan monastery.
#2049082 by meteorite


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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this late moment in time
an appointment he can't miss,
Electroman said where is Igor
from retiring six months ago?

Must be back problems you know
I'm Melissa the new assistant,
I get my full paid vacation
with the retired Professor.

By our fine writer Ruth Draves
reviewed by embe in your words,
for this simply positive review.
 The Professor's New Assistant  (E)
A superhero has an appointment he can't miss.
#1964890 by Ruth Draves


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Review of Abigail  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In a moment in time on a wedding day
the Good Lord has truly blessed us,

when you started dating him at home
we knew he won your heart in a kiss.

By looking through your wedding veil
sown with see through soft silky satin,

with faith and love will get you through
in your future heartaches and painfulness.

By our fine poet of note, Thaddeus Buxton
reviewed by embe in your wonderful words.

Simply Positive Review.
 Abigail  (E)
I read this poem to my daughter on her wedding day.
#1967060 by Thaddeus Buxton Winthrop





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